[Denied]Griff 3Rd Application

[Felder 92]

Out-Of-Character

Minecraft Account Name: Griff28

How old are you?: 11

Time-Zone/Country of Residence: Central Time USA

Do you have a good grip on the English language/good grammar?: Yes i do.

Small 2-3 Sentence Description of yourself: Im Griffen in real life,im 11 and im a great minecraft roleplayer.I play football,and basketball and i like sports.I like making new friends and have fun.

How much time could you be on the server weekly?: Im going to have football practice so ill be on for a hour each day due to having football for 3 hours.Once football is over ill be on about 4 hours everyday

What do you know about Roleplaying? Give a definition of what it means to you: Roleplaying is when you make your own character and put them into medieval,future or modern history oh yea and fantasy.

What experience have you had in Roleplaying, if any?: My friend has made roleplaying servers in the past I used to play on a server called Calsky Islands Rp server.

In your own Words, define what the act of Meta-Gaming is: Using Out of Character Knowledge In Character

In your own Words, define what the act of Power-Emoting is: Power-Emoting takes away the abilities of a player to prevent something bad in the roleplay.

What do you expect this server will be like?: A great,and fun roleplay server

What other server(s) have you played on and why did you leave them?: Clasky Islands was shut down due to inactiveness.My friends server named realmofancientkingdoms got shutdown due to having a kingdom taking over the whole server.

Have you read, understood, and agreed to the rules?: Yes I have

Do you promise to abide by said rules, and laws? This includes the Server, Forum, and Teamspeak set Rules: Yes

How did you hear about us?: My friend was talking about it

Have you previously made an Application? If so could you link us to your last Application?: I have but it was denied yesterday.

http://www.lordofthecraft.net/forum/index.php?/topic/65885-griffs-2ndapplication/

In-Character:

Character Name: Marcus Felder Age: 29

What Race are you?:Human

What Sub-Race are you? (note, you aren’t required to have a sub-race):none

Biography (Please make this at least 2 paragraphs long.

This must include the history of your character and his life as well as age, appearance and personality, etc.): When Marcus was born he had something special in him, he had a special kind of bravery. He was a funny kid to around with when he was 1-5 years old. When he was 6 he started to help his brothers go hunting they are Rick,Armuled,and John. Marcus had to sit there and watch them stab rabbits. They got about 5 rabbits that night and it was a fantastic dinner. The next day Marcus actually did the job but then while he was walking in the forest he got lost and it was night time. At night the monsters come out he yelled. He drawed his knife and stabs spiders all night and skeletons.

Marcus found his way home by Rick,Armuled,and John Screamed very loud. Marcuses mom was named Maria Felder. She was a very nice person and she was the baker of the family. Marcuses Dad was named Jonathan Felder, he was the farmer of the family, and sometimes a baker. Maria died with a disease and dad died getting shot by a arrows through the chest. When Marcus turn 12 he gaurded the farm till age 18. He killed any bandits that tried to steal or he made them run away. Once age 18 he wanted to be a soilder in any kingdom as long as it was human. He knows his dreams will come true...

What is your Character's ambitions?: To be a great soilder and leader.

What is your character’s favorite tool? (sword, pickaxe, shovel, etc): Sword

What is one of your Character's most skilled talents?: Fighting enemies

A screenshot of your skin (must be in proper format): http://imgur.com/24NOb sorry I dont know how to do the other format than but its a good link.

Open-Response-Questions

Whilst traveling from the Cloud Temple you see a small halfling, being harassed by two armed warriors. They appear to be trying to steal money from him, how does your character respond?: I would distract the bandits by saying Marcus: Hi im looking for a place to eat. Marcus: What are you doing to that hafling!? Bandit 1: He owes us money! Bandit 2: You got a problem with it?? Marcus: Yes i do!!

Bandit 2: Well if you have a problem then fight us HAHAHA! *Marcus draws his sword*

*the to bandits have daggers* Marcus: Quit bothering the poor little halfling.. *Bandit 1 and 2 get close to Marcus* *Marcus swing his sword trying to cut the bandits arms* *he misses* *he swing his sword at Bandit 2 then bandit 1 stabs Marcuses arm* Marcus: Owwww *Marcus kicks Bandit one away then cuts Bandit 2 arm* Bandit 2: OOOWWWW *Bandit 2 drops his dagger that runs away* *Bandit 1 runs away*

*Marcus gives the halfling some gold* Marcus: I have something for you. Halfling: What is it???

*Marcus hands over a knife* *Marcus runs away* Halfling: THANKK YOUUUU

Your character wanders into Alras, and comes across a small stall, behind which a well dressed man is standing. He’s offering various wares, the merchant turns to you and says in a posh accent " 'ello there, what can I do you for today?" What is your character response?: Marcus: Hi there what do you have on the shopping menu?? Merchant: 9 gold for 4 iron,2 diamonds for 17 gold,and 15 iron for 3 gold.

Marcus: I will get the 15 iron. *Marcus hands over 3 gold* *a thief comes running then steals the backpack* Marcus: HEY!! *Marcus then runs after the bandit then tackles him* Thief: MY BAG!!! Marcus: you Thief *2 Gaurds walk over to Marcus and the Thief* Gaurd 1: WHAT IS GOING ON HERE??!! Marcus: This man stole the merchants backpack! *Gaurd 2 then picks up the Thief and then sends him to jail.

Gaurd 1: You can go now uhhh whats your name? Marcus: Its Marcus. Gaurd 1: Ok you can go now Marcus.

Whilst wandering in the wilds, your character comes across a small hut, which looks abandoned. Inside it you see a chest containing a few iron bars, and a golden sword. How would your character respond?: I would make sure there isnt a owner. *Marcus look around then finds a sign saying a mans name*

Marcus: Hmmm I wonder if hes still alive.. *a man walks in* Guy: WHAT ARE YOU DONG IN MY HOME??!!

Marcus: I would like to trade!! Guy: ok what do you want to trade.. Marcus: I would like to trade 5 gold for 9 iron bars. *the man then reaches into the chest grabbing 9 iron bars* *Marcus hands over his gold then the man hands him the iron* Marcus: Thank you *Marcus then walks away*

Hungry and lost in the wilderness, you stumble across a small trading camp nestled among the forest, they greet you you in the common tongue, how do you respond?: I would ask nicely for some food Marcus:I need food.. Man 1: Weve got food give me 15 gold and ill give you some 2 steak. Marcus ill give you all my money. *Marcus hands over all his money* Man 2: just give him 2 steak! *Man 1 gives him 2 steak* Marcus: Thanks Man 1: eat that all!!! *Marcus eats 2 steak then runs away* Man1: OK I HOPE IT WAS GOOD!!

You hear word that bandits occupy the road outside the town in which you have been staying. The town guard have gathered, and are asking for assistance to help eliminate them. The leader of the party is offering a reward for any who offer their support. How does your character respond: I would join the call and fight the bandits. Marcus: I would like to help fight the bandits *The man points to the armory* *Marcus walks to the armory* Gaurd: are you a volunteer?? Marcus: Yes I am.. Gaurd: Ok the weopons and armor are inside. *Marcus gets chain armor with a iron sword* Marcus: Where is the fight??

Gaurd:Down the road. *Marcus get into the fight holding off the bandits for awhile* Marcus: 7 left!!!

*Marcus killed 3 the rest killed the others* Gaurd: We want you to join the gaurd. Marcus: ok

That is all hope its good and get accepted

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Denied

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You biography his very unrealistic for a 6 year old boy wouldn't be able to survive in the wild by himself. Not only that, but a 12 year old boy wouldn't be able to guard a farm from ruthless bandits for 6 years.

Please add some server lore in your biography, and details about your character.

Also add a color format for this is too difficult to read.

Please re apply in 24 hours.

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