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Out-Of-Character Details

Minecraft Account Name: cpc329

How old are you?: 45

Time-Zone/Country of Residence: central time United States of America

Do you have a good grip on English grammar and the English language?: yes

Have you had any previous experience in roleplaying?: yes

Have you read and understood and agree to the rules?: yes

How did you hear about the Lord of the Craft?: my neighbor

Link any previous applications you have made to the Lord of the Craft:

Have you posted this application on Minecraft Forum? If not, post it here:http://www.minecraftforum.net/topic/832121-the-lord-of-the-craft-enter-the-world-of-asulon-o-f-f-i-c-i-a-l-l-y-t-h-e-n-o-1-r-p-s-e-r-v-e-r-100-unique-gameplay/!: yes

Definitions

In your own words, define what the act of roleplaying is: a game in which players take on roles of a imaginary character (s) who usually go on adventures. most likely in a video game fantasy overseen by a referee

In your own words, define what the act of meta-gaming is: Meta-gaming is using outside out of game information to affect your in game decisions. For example a video game guide would be considered meta-gaming.

In your own words, define what the act of power-emoting is: Skipping roleplaying and coming straight to a pre-determined conclusion. ex. real role play: Bob swung his sword but joe quickly blocked it. ex. not roleplay: Bob kills Joe.

In-Character Details

Character Name: Thor Forgefire

Character Race: Dwarf

Character biography - Make this at least 2 paragraphs long, which must explain your character’s history, appearance, personality, age and any other details you deem necessary: Thor Forgefire has a very interesting and strange (not in a bad way) life. He was born in, like much other dwarf babies in Kal'Urguan. His long loved brother is Rocky Forgefire. Thor Forgefire was a very adventurous child. In fact when he was twelve, one day in the meadow he was just sitting down watching the clouds move, but every other minute he would here this cry in the barn yard. After about five minutes he went to the barn. He was shocked to see a random guy trying to steal his family's cattle. He quickly brought out his stone sword that his father had gave him in case he ever needed to use it. His fighting instincts game into action and he quickly like any brave fighter would do, fight to the death. The big strong man was surprised to see a little 12 year old with a dangerous weapon... Then it hit him... literally. The man had a huge gash going through his cheek. The man was angry and cut off Thor's hand. Luckily the man had cut off Thor's non fighting hand, Thor quickly brought his sword and jabbed the quy in the chest. His father quickly came in after he heard the strong crys of the man. He saw his son with the sword, and the man almost dead, and from that day on his father knew his son would become a strong fighter.

Now Thor is a strong healthy dwarf. He is currently 18 years old, and his brother Rocky is 24. Thor as I alluded, earlier is a very strong dwarf has excellent brown eyes, brown tousled hair, and is always in the mood to fight. When he was 15 years old he encountered another attack he was in the woods hunting for animals when all of a sudden a group of ten men appeared. They were Orcs. All Thor had was a stone sword, the same stone sword he had when he was 12 years old in the barn. He instantly when into fighting instincts when he saw the first Orc started charging him with a diamond sword. He jumped and back-stabbed the guy in the thigh and took his diamond sword. The Orc had managed to get some damage though at Thor's leg. Then out of nowhere 6 of the Orcs dropped dead with arrows in their chest. I looked and saw that it was my great father. Then my brother appeared and we decided to charge the last two remaining. Thor and his brother rocky back stabbed the orcs at the same time, and watched them fall to the ground slowly getting the last glimpse of light. They took the Orc's food they were carrying back home. As you may see Corlrealeus had a very interesting yet strange life.

What are your characters ambitions?: Corlrealeus wants to adventure and learn the races

Please provide an in-game screenshot of your skin here: Sorry I couldn't get a screenshot heres a link to my skin: http://www.minecraftskinspro.com/default.asp?action=readreviews&link=20043

Is there anything else you would like to say about your character? No.

Open--Questions

Each question here must be answered with a minimum of one full paragraph, and detail the scene you are given in the way it would happen in roleplay. These questions should be answered in first person. Be detailed, not short.

Upon entering the Mighty Human City of Arethor, you come across a shop-keeper calling out to sell his wares to passers-by. The shopkeeper is not a Human, he is a poor dwarf looking to make a living in a new city. What is your response? I came across a dwarf today in Arethor he seemed very poor and was trying to make a living. I decided to buy one of his products and to try to make his business succeed. I had to help my own kind. He was very pleased with me purchasing his product in fact, he asked me if he could come with me since I was so nice. I didn't know what to say. I guess two is always better than one! He came into the city to try to make business, unfortunately his business wasn't doing that good and he had to sell his business soon. Me and the new comer wattled through the rest of the big city of Arethor and disappeared into the crowds of people.

You’re in the Cloud Sanctuary late at night, when a large Orc begins to threaten a nearby dwarf. The only present monk is fast asleep, and the situation looks like it will escalate into violence soon, what does your character do? I was taking a night walk in the Cloud Sanctuary today and saw a helpless dwarf getting threatened by an Orc. I was very mad and wanted to help the dwarf. I walked over and instantly the Orc looked up, and knew there was gonna be a battle when I was slowly took out my stone sword. The dwarf that was being threatened helped too. We both charged him, unfortunately the other dwarf got back stabbed by the orc and had a huge gash in its bag. Luckily I had slashed him in the stomach and was immobile. Finally the monk woke up. I explained the whole situation to him. He thanked me and gave me a small sack of minas. The dwarf thanked me gratefully. In fact, he gave me some food for the next day.

Whilst walking down the road to Malinor, you stumble upon an old man. His walking stick , looks weak and frail, and just as you are about to ask something, the stick breaks, and the man falls to the ground. As he falls down, a bag of Minas falls to the ground, and splits open. As you watch the multiple coins spill out, you peer down at the defenceless man. What does your character do?: I was just walking through Malinor when i see a man on the ground. I immediately help him up and sow a bag for his minas. Then I grab a stick off the ground and carve the bark off. I give the man his goods and guide him to Malinor. He thanks me and tells me to keep an amulet imbuned with magic. He tells me this is very special to him and leaves. Whilst walking away he tells me his name is Harberd Greybeard and walks through the gate. I get one last glimpse at him before he gets lost in the crowd.

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Reasons:

Your role play definition is slightly wrong.

Please remember to check your grammar.

Your Open-Response-Questions are not that great. You should set them out mroe like role play to help you get to grips with LOTC's role play. You need to go into detail on each scenario and set it out like: Speech with actions. Doing this you will be able to learn how to role play like how all the players, on Lord Of The Craft.

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