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Out-Of-Character Details

Minecraft Account Name:

TheMichaelBez

How old are you?:

14 becoming 15 September 12th

Time-Zone/Country of Residence:

UTC+0, Greenwich Mean Time, England

Do you have a good grip on English grammar and the English language?:

Yes, My spelling can be a little off when I write quickly. However, English is the only language I know.

Have you had any previous experience in roleplaying?:

Yes, I have been playing on a gta San Andreas RP sever called Red County RP. I have been playing on that for a few months and it has been a great fun and I am keen to try some minecraft RP.

Have you read and understood and agree to the rules?:

I agree and have read the rules and understand all of them.

How did you hear about the Lord of the Craft?:

On planet minecraft looking for a RP sever.

Link any previous applications you have made to the Lord of the Craft:

http://www.lordofthecraft.net/forum/index.php?/topic/68786-themichaelbez-first-app/

Have you posted this application on Minecraft Forum? If not, post it here:http://www.minecraftforum.net/topic/832121-the-lord-of-the-craft-enter-the-world-of-asulon-o-f-f-i-c-i-a-l-l-y-t-h-e-n-o-1-r-p-s-e-r-v-e-r-100-unique-gameplay/!:

Yes

Definitions

In your own words, define what the act of roleplaying is:

Roleplaying, or RP, is exactly what it sounds like; Playing the role of a character. You create a fictional character and think and act as that character would in the situations presented to them.

In your own words, define what the act of meta-gaming is:

To influence the player or players IC with OOC knowledge. Giving the person who is meta-gaming an non-RP advantage over the other player or players. For example using a mini map would be meta gaming. Or another example is meeting someone IC for the first time and saying 'Hello James.' You could not know his name was James unless OOC you looked at the name tag over him.

In your own words, define what the act of power-emoting is:

To force something on a player and not give him a chance to counter what is being done to him. so if a police man did it on another sever it would go something like 'Michael picks up a wand and waves it in the air causing Luke to die.' This is power-emoting because it is forcing this death onto the player he can't do anything about it.

In-Character Details

Character Name:

Michael Windfire

Character Race:

Human

Character biography - Make this at least 2 paragraphs long, which must explain your character’s history, appearance, personality, age and any other details you deem necessary:

Michael's Background:

Michael was born in Arethor his mother died in child birth. Michael's father was shaken by the death of his wife and decided that the house they lived together reminded him to much of her and the way she died. So shortly after Michael turned 8 they sold there house and moved out of Arethor and bought a small home by a wood. Where Michaels father started up his wood shop in the new house making wooden chairs, tables and walking sticks. Which brought in a steady income Michael spent the next 10 years happy from 10 to 13 Michael started to adventure out into the woods at first he would be accompanied with his Father but soon he grew in confidence and walked freely through the woods. He would make small forts and camps. He would go into his dads workshop and sharpen sticks and make swords out of wood. When Michael became 14 Michael's dad gave make him a bow. It was very well crafted with wonderful decorations made out of a fine wood. It was Michaels pride and joy. His father started to show him the basics of the bow. Due to the bow being the right size for a full grown man Michael struggled firing it at first but he kept trying and built up muscle and was soon able to pull it back with ease. He spent the next few years practising on targets and trying to hit rabbits and other wild animals. His father every year would re string the bow to make sure it still was strong. As Michael became older his dad gave him more and more chores his father taught him how to skin and cook his what Michael shot. His father showed him plants that can be cooked and eaten and others which could not be. By the age of 22 Michael was a master of survival and could kill and cook animals with ease. Find plants which would be edible. When Michael turned 26 his father became ill and it looked like he would not be able to recover. So Michael tried all the medicinals he had and nothing would work. His father remand ill for severely weeks but it soon got the better of him and he died. Michael was very shaken by this. He spent a further year in the house and decided he had to do something with his life and sold the house and went back to where he was born. Michael travelled back to Arethor.

Michael's Appearance:

Michael is tall roughly 6 foot 3. He has a short beard. Long hair which reaches down to his neck. His feathers are rough and stern he has strong big hands which have several cuts and groves. He has dark green eyes that match his clothes. He is white. He wears a dark green cloak and a pale green and Gray shirt underneath with ragged trousers.

What are your characters ambitions?:

He wants to live his life to the full. He has lost alot in his life and he is sad about this. He wants to do something that he would be remembered by. He wants to show his skills and what he can do to the world.

Please provide an in-game screenshot of your skin here:

Is there anything else you would like to say about your character?

Michael's Personality:

Michael is forgiving, Kind, brave, wants to be accepted in a community, often sad about the death of his parents, He wants to help people and he feels he needs a few friends. He is lonely however he does not want to be.

Open-Response-Questions

Each question here must be answered with a minimum of one full paragraph, and detail the scene you are given in the way it would happen in roleplay. These questions should be answered in first person. Be detailed, not short.

Upon entering the Mighty Human City of Arethor, you come across a shop-keeper calling out to sell his wares to passers-by. The shopkeeper is not a Human, he is a poor dwarf looking to make a living in a new city. What is your response?

I have been travelling for many days and am in need of new items. Noticing he is in need of business I walk up to him and inquire of what he has for sale. Buying all I need I give him a bit of extra money and continue hoping to find other people with item I need.

You’re in the Cloud Sanctuary late at night, when a large Orc begins to threaten a nearby dwarf. The only present monk is fast asleep, and the situation looks like it will escalate into violence soon, what does your character do?

I run up to them and try despondently to stop the situation from becoming violent. As I try and settle the tension I keep backing towards the sleeping monk. Once I get to the monk I shake him awake and explain to him the situation. Depending what he feels is fit I act on his orders.

Whilst walking down the road to Malinor, you stumble upon an old man. His walking stick , looks weak and frail, and just as you are about to ask something, the stick breaks, and the man falls to the ground. As he falls down, a bag of Minas falls to the ground, and splits open. As you watch the multiple coins spill out, you peer down at the defenceless man. What does your character do?:

I kneel down and ask the man if he is okay after being told he is fine I help him to his feet and pick up his money and hand it to him. Asking again if he is okay I pull out a hand full of coins and offer it to the old man and say it is for and new stick. After he does not accepted it he gives me a few coins for my trouble. On accepting the coins I pick up a branch from the ground chop bits off with my knife and hand it to the man as a temporary replacement. Saying good bye and thank you I continue walking down the road.

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Ninja'd by the Ninja. {Under Review}

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[steelersfan1221 300]

Meta-Gaming l Power-Emoting l Role-Playing

Good job providing an example for your meta-gaming definition.

Pros:

• You have pretty much covered everything in your biography. No major problems that I see.

Cons:

• However, the whole parents being dead at your birth is still a bit cliché. You'd be surprised. We get that kind of thing a lot. However, it is better then having your parents kidnapped or being slaughtered by orcs. So I suppose I can let that slide.

Cons:

• You have failed to do as asked last time. The previous reviewer of your last application asked you to expand on your ORQs. What he meant by that is that he wanted you to add more detail to your application. Add more information on why your character did what he did. Add more emotes, dialogue, etc.

Your THAT close to acceptance. Sweep up those little details. And I am positive you will be accepted.

Please wait 24 hours before re-applying.

PM me if you would like further explanation/help.

While you wait…Go and vote for the server to support it!

We all would really appreciate it.

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