[Denied]Application Of George Drakonscar

[Noer 577]

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Out-Of-Character Details

Minecraft Account Name: jojoma11

How old are you?: 14

Time-Zone/Country of Residence: I live in the United States of america, and live by Eastern Standard Time.

Do you have a good grip on English grammar and the English language?: I am a good student, and have straight A's in all of my classes, so i think I do have a good grip on grammar.

Have you had any previous experience in roleplaying?: Not Much, but i have always wanted to!

Have you read and understood and agree to the rules?: I agree to the terms and rules that you require me to follow.

How did you hear about the Lord of the Craft?: I heard about it when watching a YouTube video.

Link any previous applications you have made to the Lord of the Craft: I do not.

Have you posted this application on Minecraft Forum? If not, post it here:http://www.minecraftforum.net/topic/832121-the-lord-of-the-craft-enter-the-world-of-asulon-o-f-f-i-c-i-a-l-l-y-t-h-e-n-o-1-r-p-s-e-r-v-e-r-100-unique-gameplay/!:

Definitions

In your own words, define what the act of roleplaying is: It is making a new person, in a new world. it is escaping the real world and travelling to the world you create.

In your own words, define what the act of meta-gaming is: Meta Gaming is using out of game communication to give yourself an advantage, such as Skype, or Steam.

In your own words, define what the act of power-emoting is: Power emoting is emoting actions that give you advantages against other players and ruins roleplay entirely.

In-Character Details

Character Name: George DrakonScar.

Character Race: Human.

Character biography - Make this at least 2 paragraphs long, which must explain your character’s history, appearance, personality, age and any other details you deem necessary:

George Drakonscar was born on one of the vessel that traveled to Asulon. His parents died from illness on the boats and he was raised by his drunken uncle. when he was five, his uncle went to fight for Renatus, and was raised in his home by his aunt. Nine years later, when he was fourteen, his uncle didn't come back. His aunt died of illness, when he was 17. His home was taken away and he was cast out onto the streets.

During the plague of 38, George almost went to the same fate of his parents, but luck favored him and he survived. He has blond hair, is 5'11, and is 150 pounds. soldier for the Holy Oren Empire. He has skill witha sword, and is mediocre with a bow, but is bad with an axe.

What are your characters ambitions?: He wishes to have enough money to buy back his home, and to join the Holy Oren Empire's army.

Please provide an in-game screenshot of your skin here:

Is there anything else you would like to say about your character: He has always been a drunk, and prefers beer over wine.

Open-Response-Questions

Each question here must be answered with a minimum of one full paragraph, and detail the scene you are given in the way it would happen in roleplay. These questions should be answered in first person. Be detailed, not short.

Upon entering the Mighty Human City of Arethor, you come across a shop-keeper calling out to sell his wares to passers-by. The shopkeeper is not a Human, he is a poor dwarf looking to make a living in a new city. What is your response?

I would like to see the dwarf's goods. i would appreciate some armor. I usually don't carry more than enough money to get a beer, so i could intimidate him and force him to give me his goods. Even if they spot me, no human in Arethor would care about a dwarf, anyways. After that I could do two things.I could sell all of the items to someone, or i could pocket the useful items and sell luxurious items to the higher folk in society. Either way, more money!

You’re in the Cloud Sanctuary late at night, when a large Orc begins to threaten a nearby dwarf. The only present monk is fast asleep, and the situation looks like it will escalate into violence soon, what does your character do?

I would wait it out, see what happens. If their is bad blood, then that spells Minas for me. I follow the richer one, and offer my "services" to him. I probably would go for the dwarf, because the Orc would probably be stronger, and not need me. Mercenary work is always good work, even if the law doesn't appreciate it.

Whilst walking down the road to Malinor, you stumble upon an old man. His walking stick , looks weak and frail, and just as you are about to ask something, the stick breaks, and the man falls to the ground. As he falls down, a bag of Minas falls to the ground, and splits open. As you watch the multiple coins spill out, you peer down at the defenceless man. What does your character do?:

I'd probably just help him up. I mean, he's an old man! I would only take Minas from someone who could put up a fight. Only extremely desperate people rob from the frail and old. In fact, I'd invite him to get a beer with me. I also may do this for the fact that, if he's an old man, he probably has a name in the city. Best make powerful friends, if any.

[Skippy 2466]

Denied.

Two out of your three definitions are wrong. Figure out which ones they were, and define them better.

Your skin doesn't seem like an acceptable skin. You should consider changing it.

You can not commit villainess activities in your ORQ's.

Remember, you can use dialog in your ORQ's.

Your grammar can use some improving.

Also, this should give you a big tip:

DO NOT DO THE FOLLOWING:

What is your MC name? stealthturtlesAP

 [color="#00BFFF"]What is your MC name? stealthturtlesAP[/color] 

 [color="#00BFFF"]What is your MC name? stealthturtlesAP[/color 

color="#00BFFF"]What is your MC name? stealthturtlesAP[/color]

DO THE FOLLOWING: What is your MC name? stealthturtlesAP

 [color="#00BFFF"]What is your MC name?[/color] stealthturtlesAP 

 [color="#00BFFF"]>> Insert Question Here <<[/color] >> Insert Answer Here << 

Reapply in 24 hours.

[Skippy 2466]

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