[Denied]Application Submission- SneakyMuffin7

[SneakyMuffin7 0]

Out-Of-Character Details

Minecraft Account Name: SneakyMuffin7

How old are you?: 14

Time-Zone/Country of Residence: GMT, England

Do you have a good grip on English grammar and the English language?:Yes

Have you had any previous experience in role playing?:Yes, I have been Administrator on 2 RP servers, and played actively on 4

Have you read and understood and agree to the rules?: Yes, I read carefully.

How did you hear about the Lord of the Craft?:From xtremetop100.

Link any previous applications you have made to the Lord of the Craft: No,

this is my first time applying.

Have you posted this application on Minecraft Forum? If not, post it here:http://www.minecraftforum.net/topic/832121-the-lord-of-the-craft-enter-the-world-of-asulon-o-f-f-i-c-i-a-l-l-y-t-h-e-n-o-1-r-p-s-e-r-v-e-r-100-unique-gameplay/!:

Definitions

In your own words, define what the act of roleplaying is: Changing my behavior to assume a role, in this case consciously adopting the said role.

In your own words, define what the act of meta-gaming is: If out of character knowledge affects your in characters choices and/or the way they behave toward players.

In your own words, define what the act of power-emoting is: A player doing something that also stops another player from preventing what the player has done.

In-Character Details

Character Name: Feanaro Telemnar

Character Race: Elven

Character biography - Make this at least 2 paragraphs long, which must explain your character’s history, appearance, personality, age and any other details you deem necessary:

I was born in Normandor, the Elven City on Elenya, the 11th of Sulime, 3041 5th Era. Born into a wealthy family of nobles, I was always respected. My appearance was typical of a High Elf, Flowing, shiny, dyed blode hair, fair and smooth skin. Ears the perfect size for only me and the ideal weight that all in the Kingdom could only wish to have. Some said I am more handsome than the king's son as I became older. Nonetheless, I never bragged and was always friendly to whoever I met, may they be rich or poor. I guess that was just me and my personality, friendly and caring any day. My parents became even wealthier as they now lead the Bank of Normandor. As me and my family became more and more powerful as I became a young adult, we began to distance from the Royals.

Thirty years ago, a man in a black hood approached me while I visited the outskirts of the Nation. he was tall and skinny, all his features hidden inside his ominous hood. he asked me for my name, in a croaky and whispered voice. Quickly, he turned around, and off he ran. I noticed a card on the table, with the arms of the royalty on them. I turned it over and... there was the arms of my family. covered in blood. Thoughts of death and grief flowed through my mind. My thoughts were interrupted by guards of the city, shouting my name loudly, saying the one thing I always dreaded. "Feanaro Telemnar! you have been charged with the murder of your parents!". The was no time to think about what caused this. I ran. I ran. All the way to the stables, heading through the mountains. guards were close behind me. My only option was to hijack the horse and cart nearby. That was what I did. I would not know where this trip would take me, although I had the time to grieve for my parents. There was no way back. The man in the dark hood could have changed me being framed, but nothing could stop the murder of my beloved parents.

From what I have heard, a new Royal family have been in place long since then.

But here I am now, age 150. On the very edges of Asulon. What will I dare do in a Nation of strangers, people not of my own kind, never to be as rich as I was before. I will go where time takes me. I will defeat the odds.

What are your characters ambitions?: To build the greatest kingdom any kind has ever known. To conquer what is not my own!

Please provide an in-game screenshot of your skin here: http://i.imgur.com/V8q9M.png

Is there anything else you would like to say about your character: I am only villainous when I needs to be and is deceiving, although I am very... persuasive.

Open-Response-Questions

Each question here must be answered with a minimum of one full paragraph, and detail the scene you are given in the way it would happen in roleplay. These questions should be answered in first person. Be detailed, not short.

Upon entering the Mighty Human City of Arethor, you come across a shop-keeper calling out to sell his wares to passers-by. The shopkeeper is not a Human, he is a poor dwarf looking to make a living in a new city. What is your response? I am in the city,

when there is nobody nearby, I speak quietly to him. " Hello, my friend. would you care to come and join my fair kingdom? you will become wealthy as a noble of my city, being powerful beyond your dreams. Do you accept?* If he would say no, I would react calmly. "stay in your city, doom will come to you soon, from my very armies swords. goodbye." If he would accept, I would give him instructions. "Gather your things and meet me at the stables. 10 minutes."

You’re in the Cloud Sanctuary late at night, when a large Orc begins to threaten a nearby dwarf. The only present monk is fast asleep, and the situation looks like it will escalate into violence soon, what does your character do? I would tell the dwarf to leave, although if the Orc should threaten more, I would tell the Orc that he looks puny beside his brothers, would he not go to fight a better match than this dwarf. If the Orc gets angry, I must ensure my own safety. I run. and I lose him no matter what.

Whilst walking down the road to Malinor, you stumble upon an old man. His walking stick , looks weak and frail, and just as you are about to ask something, the stick breaks, and the man falls to the ground. As he falls down, a bag of Minas falls to the ground, and splits open. As you watch the multiple coins spill out, you peer down at the defenceless man. What does your character do?: I tell the Orc he looks puny among his brothers, why would such a strong person pick his match against a dwarf half his size? If the Orc gets angry, I would tell the dwarf to leave, then I would ensure my safety. I would run and run until I lose him in the forests of Asulon.

Thankyou, and I hope to be RP'ing with you soon,

Feanaro, or Jake.

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App edited for History to take place inside of Asulon.

[everblue2er101 906]

Your application has been...

Denied.

Add Meta-Gaming and Power-Emoting examples.

The dates provided in the bio are not those used in the server lore. The parents of your character cannot have been in charge of the Bank of Normandor, as this is the fabrication of server lore. You cannot hijack the horse and cart without a Villain Application. Your character cannot be 150 and have been born in Asulon, as the world is only a little older than 50 years.

You cannot 'only villainous when I needs to be' without a Villain Application. You may want to read more about them to understand the limits and boundaries of villainous activities.

The response to ORQ #3 does not match the situation.

Expand on all ORQs.

Wait at least 24 hours after this post to reapply. If you have any questions feel free to send me a PM.

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