[Denied][Denied]SneakyMuffin7's Human App. 2nd Attempt

[SneakyMuffin7 0]

Out-Of-Character Details

Minecraft Account Name: SneakyMuffin7

How old are you?: 14

Time-Zone/Country of Residence: GMT, England

Do you have a good grip on English grammar and the English language?: Yes

Have you had any previous experience in roleplaying?: Yes, staff on 2, active on 4

Have you read and understood and agree to the rules?: Yes

How did you hear about the Lord of the Craft?: XtremeTop100

Link any previous applications you have made to the Lord of the Craft:http://www.lordofthecraft.net/forum/index.php?/topic/69640-application-submission-sneakymuffin7/#entry555705

Have you posted this application on Minecraft Forum? If not, post it here:http://www.minecraftforum.net/topic/832121-the-lord-of-the-craft-enter-the-world-of-asulon-o-f-f-i-c-i-a-l-l-y-t-h-e-n-o-1-r-p-s-e-r-v-e-r-100-unique-gameplay/!: Yes

Definitions

In your own words, define what the act of roleplaying is: Changing my behavior to assume a role, in this case consciously adopting the said role.

In your own words, define what the act of meta-gaming is: To allow your out of character interactions with or knowledge of other players affect your in character decisions. For example: Waging war on another player simply because of an out of charcter argument with them over skype.

In your own words, define what the act of power-emoting is: To perform an action that stops any other players from preventing it. For example: "Bryn casts a spell that kills all in Asulon!"

In-Character Details

Character Name: Bryn Steed.

Character Race: Human

Character biography - Make this at least 2 paragraphs long, which must explain your character’s history, appearance, personality, age and any other details you deem necessary:

I was born into a poor family of peasant northerners who had moved to Ager before I was born. I was a fair skinned and haired person, with alot of complexion in my skin, hardy as I was. My grandmother died shortly after my birth, a victim of the plague when on her travels to Seventis. I helped around the village and the wheat fields around our settlement from a young age. As I grew up, not even me helping the family tremendously still was leaving us hungry. I had to do something more for everyone. I managed to get a job transporting the villages produce to the city of Arethor up north. However, every time I visited I would make a trip to the library to learn what I could not at home. I studied the many nations that lay aside of the Holy Oren Empire, along with their locations and exactly what lived there. In awe from the great diversity of the realm of Asulon, I came to a conclusion.

My life so far had been peaceful but uneventful. Of course, I was kind, caring and helpful as a person. However, I had to have a future. That future lay away from the routine of sowing the land. My future lay within the many realms of Asulon, among the nations of the Orcs, Dwarves and Elves. As I studied more about the realms and races of Asulon, I began to notice my family became more able to feed themselves, having the money to do so. With that, I traveled across the Holy Lands, getting advice when and where to go on my travels. Here I am now, age 20, on the very edge of the Holy Oren Empire, with my sights set towards acheiving greater heights. Greater heights in the art of magic, politics and leadership. Will I be helped or hindered on my quest to expand the mighty Human kingdom? Off I go, on a quest of leadership and bravery across the great realm of Asulon.

What are your characters ambitions?: To expand the great Kingdom of the Holy Oren Empire, no matter what I must do or what the challenge may be.

Please provide an in-game screenshot of your skin here: http://imgur.com/aqww2

Is there anything else you would like to say about your character: No, I believe I have covered all.

Open-Response-Questions

Each question here must be answered with a minimum of one full paragraph, and detail the scene you are given in the way it would happen in roleplay. These questions should be answered in first person. Be detailed, not short.

Upon entering the Mighty Human City of Arethor, you come across a shop-keeper calling out to sell his wares to passers-by. The shopkeeper is not a Human, he is a poor dwarf looking to make a living in a new city. What is your response? Asking the dwarf his prices, I react saying his prices are far too low for him to make a living in Arethor. As he thanks me, I tell him that I wish to help all races within the Oren Empire. Handing him more money than he first charged, I advise him to up his prices to a more suitable level. Of all people, why should this dwarf be the unlucky one?

You’re in the Cloud Sanctuary late at night, when a large Orc begins to threaten a nearby dwarf. The only present monk is fast asleep, and the situation looks like it will escalate into violence soon, what does your character do? I watch from the shadows, hoping too see which of them falls first. However, if one may dare break something, I would leave immediately. Should the situation escalate, I may well be held responsible for the violence. I know that this would bring the guards running to the situation, which is something I do not wish to be involved with. A tussle with the guards could end up with me breaking the law, so why would anyone do that?

Whilst walking down the road to Malinor, you stumble upon an old man. His walking stick , looks weak and frail, and just as you are about to ask something, the stick breaks, and the man falls to the ground. As he falls down, a bag of Minas falls to the ground, and splits open. As you watch the multiple coins spill out, you peer down at the defenseless man. What does your character do?: I would help the man to the shade of a nearby tree, telling him to sit down. Taking my knife, I would take down the nearest branch from the tree. smoothing it down into a more than adequate stick for his travels, I ask him that two coins out of his bag would be all for helping him out. Taking two coins, I help the man up, dust him off with one hand and send him on his merry way.

[everblue2er101 906]

Under Review.

[steelersfan1221 300]

Meta-Gaming l Power-Emoting l Role-Playing

Good job providing an example for the Meta-Gaming and Power-Emoting.

Pros:

• You have improved here significantly. Your biography is lore-abiding. Good job.
  
• Apart from that, you have pretty much covered everything.
  

Pros:

• There are pretty much no problems here...Except for one thing.
  

Cons:

• Your ORQs need to be made out in full RP. Try adding some dialogue, emotes, etc.
  

If you improve that one thing, your application should be completely perfect and ready to go.

Please wait 24 hours before re-applying.

PM me if you would like further explanation/help.

While you wait…Go and vote for the server to support it!

We all would really appreciate it.

[steelersfan1221 300]

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