[Denied]submission#3

[Jambo 0]

Out-Of-Character Details

Minecraft Account Name:thechuckman46

How old are you?:13

Time-Zone/Country of Residence:Central, U.S.A

Do you have a good grip on English grammar and the English language?:Yes but wish I was the best speller in the world

Have you had any previous experience in roleplaying?:I have play RP games in warcraft battle net and when I first played I was a natural

Have you read and understood and agree to the rules?:Yes I have rechecked the rules before writing this answer and I agree

How did you hear about the Lord of the Craft?:I was looking for a good minecraft rp sever and this came up as being a good one

Link any previous applications you have made to the Lord of the Craft:yes https://www.lordofthecraft.net/forum/index.php?/topic/69755-jambo-submission-2/

https://www.lordofthecraft.net/forum/index.php?/topic/69564-jambo-submission/

Have you posted this application on Minecraft Forum? If not, post it here:http://www.minecraftforum.net/topic/832121-the-lord-of-the-craft-enter-the-world-of-asulon-o-f-f-i-c-i-a-l-l-y-t-h-e-n-o-1-r-p-s-e-r-v-e-r-100-unique-gameplay/!:No

Definitions

In your own words, define what the act of roleplaying is:It is stepping into a character’s shoes and acting out what it is like in the story and sometimes making it up as you go, it’s fun way to say im a nerd and you can be the person in the game for a while

In your own words, define what the act of meta-gaming is:It is when a player makes up powers out of the blue and deigns that the people didn’t know about itor change it so they can win all the time ex: man approaches you with a sword demanding you money

You pull out a sword and slash at him but he block

You use a spell of fire and toast the guy or commanding animals for you fighting

In your own words, define what the act of power-emoting is: Power-emoting or god-emoting is an act of forcing the result of one's actions on another character, typically without the other player's consent and not giving the other character a chance to do anything about the emote. For instance, "Player1 kills Player2" with out him getting a chance to run or give up or anything

In-Character Details

Character Name:Jambo

Character Race:Human

Character biography - Make this at least 2 paragraphs long, which must explain your character’s history, appearance, personality, age and any other details you deem necessary:Jambo at a young age always wanted to be a smith but his father said otherwise. The father tried teaching him how to use a sword but jambo always ended up making a sword and same happened with archery. He was never a skilled fighter but after his training his father never talked him again and so jambo got a job as a smith making goods for all kinds of people from elves to dwarves but all good thing have to come to an end. One day a noble came said said to him make me a diamond sword and armor and so he he was happy but he messed it up I was the gallows for him and didn’t you know he messed it up and ran and ran in till he found himself on a ship headed for a city of which he didn’t know and that happened at the age of 19 in the city he faced underworld war gangs poverty and the worst of it all the shame from his father and that went on for 3 years in till he had the money to go home again now at the age 21he get home and his father is gone from age and his mother left he goes to get a job and the goes next now 22 he’s on a adventure to make his fortune and to became the smith he used to be

I made the bio into a well sized paragraph plz tell me if that’s ok

What are your characters ambitions?:Looking for adventure and a pace to call home and to become a master at smithing

Please provide an in-game screenshot of your skin here:

Is there anything else you would like to say about your character: not much really but that he is also adventurist and a smith

Open-Response-Questions

Each question here must be answered with a minimum of one full paragraph, and detail the scene you are given in the way it would happen in roleplay. These questions should be answered in first person. Be detailed, not short.

Upon entering the Mighty Human City of Arethor, you come across a shop-keeper calling out to sell his wares to passers-by. The shopkeeper is not a Human, he is a poor dwarf looking to make a living in a new city. What is your response?

Dwarf: Sir will you please buy a piece of fine jewelry.

Jambo: A very interesting piece did you make it yourself.

Dwarf: Yes sir why do you ask.

Jambo: Because the craftsmanship is well done and the craving of the metal is so delegate, how much is it.

Dwarf: Its 50 misas sir

Jambo: Heres 70 (hands a small pouch of minas ans takes the ring)

You’re in the Cloud Sanctuary late at night, when a large Orc begins to threaten a nearby dwarf. The only present monk is fast asleep, and the situation looks like it will escalate into violence soon, what does your character do?

Jambo: Stop this fighting man and lets all get a drink.

Orc: Nub, gazat has something mi want.

Dwarf: Know I don’t.

Jambo: And what do you want good orc sir.

Orc: money

Jambo: And why is that

Orc: I killed bounty and mi want reward.

Jambo: Dwarf you need to give this man his money.

Dwarf: Ok ok here take it.

Orc: Mi want more Buub

Dwarf: I have no more you brudda

Orc throws him to the ground betting him with his fists

Jambo: Stop

Orc: Shut up Quilkspawn

Jambo tries stopping the orc from killing the man but jambo is not that strong and tries to kill the Orc with a knife but at that moment the monk wakes up and breaks up the fight

Whilst walking down the road to Malinor, you stumble upon an old man. His walking stick , looks weak and frail, and just as you are about to ask something, the stick breaks, and the man falls to the ground. As he falls down, a bag of Minas falls to the ground, and splits open. As you watch the multiple coins spill out, you peer down at the defenceless man. What does your character do?:

Jambo: Are you all right sir.(picks up the money and hands it to him)

Old man: Thank you son thank you.

[mmat 7460]

Under review.

[mmat 7460]

- Your meta-gaming definition is incorrect.

- Your grammar and spelling could be improved in areas. Also, please don't use text speech in your app, it makes it look very unprofessional.

- Your biography needs server lore in it and not lore that you have made up.

- You seem to misunderstand the difference between an RP server and an MMORPG.

Correct these errors and reapply in 24 hours.

[mmat 7460]

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