[Denied]Run4484's 2nd Application

[Run4484 2]

Out of Character Details

Minecraft Account Name: Run4484

How old are you?: 14

Time-Zone/Country of Residence: GMT/UK

Do you have a good grip on English grammar and the English language?: Yes

Have you had any previous experience in roleplaying?: Yes

Have you read and understood and agree to the rules?: Yes

How did you hear about the Lord of the Craft?: I was searching videos on Youtube for Minecraft, then I saw that Petri posted a new video, which was Lord of the Craft. I like the look of it and I wanted to play on it.

Link any previous applications you have made to the Lord of the Craft: N/A

Have you posted this application on Minecraft Forum?:Yes

Definition

In your own words, define what the act of roleplaying is: Roleplaying is where you being in someone else shoes, to be play a real life scenario and to be someone different. (E.G You are roleplaying as a King, and you have to talk about any topics that happens in Asulon.)

In your own words, define what the act of meta-gaming is: In my own words I think Meta- Gaming is when a player have information that is not in- game and using it to his/her advantage.(E.G Talking to friends that have characters in different races.)

In your own words, define what the act of power-emoting is: Power- Emoting is when using emotes or other things to make your character hard or impossible to beat in a fight. It cane also be being good at everything such as good at farming and also a great warrior.

In-Character Details

Character Name: Delvus Dawvain

Character Race: Elf

Character biography -

Delvus was born in Aegis, but at his birth Delvus's Parents moved to the border of Aegis and Asulon. Then when Delvus was one years of age, Delvus's Family and the People of Aegis had to abandon their homes because of the Undead Invasion. Whilst they were about to leave a house fire occurred and spread fast, Delvus and his Dad made it out in time but his Mum weren't so lucky. The remaining people that survived found Asulon. Delvus was then brought up in Malinor. When Delvus and his Dad arrived to their new home, Delvus's Dad was determined to give everything of what Delvus wants. So he trained Delvus. Delvus's Dad was a Skilled Archer and at Adept Smithery.

Delvus is now 51 years of age. His Dad taught him everything he knew like finding Shelter, Hunting, how to use a bow and how to defend yourself by forging armours and weapons. Delvus now look older he has Dark brown hair, blue eyes, a tanned skin and tall pointy ears. He is 6ft high. Delvus is also courageous, funny, kind and loving. Delvus left his home town and wanted to have his own home and his family. He had a job working as a Merchant Trader but he left it because Delvus didn't like the open sea. Then he worked as a City Guard in Arethor, he'd stopped there for a while, and he made a new friend that provided him with information. But mouths later he have left his job and set out to the Cloud Temple to set course to fulfil his dream.

What are your characters ambitions?: To have his own home and family.

Please provide an in-game screenshot of your skin here:

Is there anything else you would like to say about your character: N/A

Open Response Questions

Each question here must be answered with a minimum of one full paragraph, and detail the scene you are given in the way it would happen in roleplay. These questions should be answered in first person. Be detailed, not short.

Upon entering the Mighty Human City of Arethor, you come across a shop-keeper calling out to sell his wares to passers-by. The shopkeeper is not a Human, he is a poor dwarf looking to make a living in a new city. What is your response?

Delvus walked happily down the road of Arethor near the Market,then he heard a shouting from a Dwarf. Delvus looked to investigate. Delvus noticed some Arrows, and he checked on amount of Arrows he has left. And Delvus buys a few Arrows and said kindly say "Farewell." And continued to follow the path onwards.

You’re in the Cloud Sanctuary late at night, when a large Orc begins to threaten a nearby dwarf. The only present monk is fast asleep, and the situation looks like it will escalate into violence soon, what does your character do?

Delvus will quickly find and wake the Monk up. Then take the Monk the problem. Or quickly go to the Orc and the Dwarf and try to resolve it, and if the Diplomatic approach does not work I threaten the Orc and force him/she to leave the Dwarf alone.

Whilst walking down the road to Malinor, you stumble upon an old man. His walking stick , looks weak and frail, and just as you are about to ask something, the stick breaks, and the man falls to the ground. As he falls down, a bag of Minas falls to the ground, and splits open. As you watch the multiple coins spill out, you peer down at the defenceless man. What does your character do?:

Delvus walk up to the Old Man and help him up, and tell him about his bag of Minas fallen to the ground and split into two. Then assisting to help him picking up the Minas off the floor for him and giving it to him.

[Skippy 2466]

Denied!

Reasons why you were denied are below. Please improve these!

• Role-Playing definition is incorrect.
  
• Meta-Gaming definition needs a touch-up. It is not meta-gaming to talk to other races!
  
• Power-Gaming definition is partly wrong.
  
  Remember, you can use the internet to find the definitions - just don't copy them with copy/paste or word-for-word!
  
  
• There is no border to Aegis and Asulon - they are in different realms.
  
• You can't be 51 years old and have lived in Aegis. This is the current time in Asulon:
  
  
  
  You need to be above fifty-six years old.
  
• Elves usually don't become Oren Guards, as that is the Human City. Try being a Normander guard, they're the elven nation.
  
• Your skin image is too small to see.
  
• Your ORQ's need more detailed actions & more dialog.
  

When you're done fixing these denial reasons, you may submit your new application when twenty-four hours have passed. If you need any assistance, do not hesitate to send me a Private Message.

[Skippy 2466]

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