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Out-Of-Character Details

Minecraft Account Name:hunter12350

How old are you?:12

Time-Zone/Country of Residence:Temecula,Ca

Do you have a good grip on English grammar and the English language?:Yes I have a good grip on my grammar I sometimes will misspell words but I correct my self, Other then that I am good with all my grammar.

Have you had any previous experience in roleplaying?:Um not much but I know enough to see how it works and iv'e always wanted to be on a good role-playing server and so far you guys are it.

Have you read and understood and agree to the rules?:Yes I have read and I understand the rules.

How did you hear about the Lord of the Craft?:My friend from school told me, I forgot his minecraft name but he is a human baby he said.

Link any previous applications you have made to the Lord of the Craft:No this is my first one.

Have you posted this application on Minecraft Forum? If not, post it here:http://www.minecraftforum.net/topic/832121-the-lord-of-the-craft-enter-the-world-of-asulon-o-f-f-i-c-i-a-l-l-y-t-h-e-n-o-1-r-p-s-e-r-v-e-r-100-unique-gameplay/!:I have not posted this,But i will. for right now curse isn't happy with my account so, ill post it when its open again.

Definitions

In your own words, define what the act of roleplaying is: Role-playing is when someone acts as a character in a movie,play, or a game, the person has to stay in character until there done or they stop.

In your own words, define what the act of meta-gaming is:Meta-gaming is gaining knowledge from being out of your character. for example you ask someone were a place is out of character and they tell you something which is. called Meta-gaming

In your own words, define what the act of power-emoting is:Power-emoting is heavily. The typical solution is to emote make it like a story finish it off . For example, typing "Player1 tries to stab Player2 in the chest with his sword" will give Player2 a chance to dodge or parry the blow.

In-Character Details

Character Name:Maldam

Character Race:Human

Character biography - Make this at least 2 paragraphs long, which must explain your character’s history, appearance, personality, age and any other details you deem necessary:Maldam was a orphan from the orphanage called kela,tasu is was mainly for the elven but he was found deep in the forest, by a tiny elven village they took him there and he was shy at first. Maldam has short black hair his parents left him in the forest because they couldn't care for him.

Maldam was pale white skin bright blue eyes before he was left in the forest him and his parents lived in the next to the Wild Rive of the East, the Wild River of the East was a place were pillagers are starting to go down that river, but one day pillagers raided the house they parents were able to escape but the house and all there belongings were burned. when they ran they had no food no water so they left there son in the forest. This is were Maldam was found and taken to the elven orphanage. Once Maldam became older he learned the elven ways to becoming a warrior, he became strong,brave and he had wisdom and courage.

When he became a adult they let him join the military, he knew that he would die one day serving his men all through his childhood he new he had a destiny, now he thinks he found it.

What are your characters ambitions?:He wants to know who he really is, and to see what his destiny is.

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Is there anything else you would like to say about your character:He is brave,friendly,strong he will protect anyone he can, he serves in the human and elven army.

Open-Response-Questions

Each question here must be answered with a minimum of one full paragraph, and detail the scene you are given in the way it would happen in roleplay. These questions should be answered in first person. Be detailed, not short.

Upon entering the Mighty Human City of Arethor, you come across a shop-keeper calling out to sell his wares to passers-by. The shopkeeper is not a Human, he is a poor dwarf looking to make a living in a new city. What is your response? Maldam responds with a slight glance, thinking what he should do. Should he walk away or should he but some of the Poor dwarfs items. Maldam just arrived to the city, so he didn't know what to say. Before he said anything he looked at the dwarfs merchandise there were rusty daggers,swords,bread, meat,and rings. So maldam spat,"I will get one sword 2 pieces of bread and one piece of meat", the dwarf eyes were wide open with happiness i know i did something good.

You’re in the Cloud Sanctuary late at night, when a large Orc begins to threaten a nearby dwarf. The only present monk is fast asleep, and the situation looks like it will escalate into violence soon, what does your character do?Maldam tightly grips the sword he bought from the dwarf, maldam glanced at the orc and said,"guys guys calm down". the orc said to me "you keep out of this or ill kill you too after i'm done with this one" so I unsheathed my blade and pointed it to his neck, then I realized it was the dwarf that I bought the food and weapon from. s o the orc sets down the dwarf and unsheathes his weapon also and, and i was startled at first then he charged me my weapon clanged,clashed and i dodged his attacks.

Then I slashed his leg and he fell then i got his arm, after that he yelled,"Stop Stop i'm sorry ill stop" so I grabbed him and said,"you ever try to touch anyone here again net time you wont have time to take your weapon out, is that clear?" "Yes that is clear" (the orc said under his breath).

While walking down the road to Malinor, you stumble upon an old man. His walking stick , looks weak and frail, and just as you are about to ask something, the stick breaks, and the man falls to the ground. As he falls down, a bag of Minas falls to the ground, and splits open. As you watch the multiple coins spill out, you peer down at the defenceless man. What does your character do?: I help the man up and i get all the money and out it in my pouch and give it to him,after that i take him where he needs to go and i find someone who can make him a knew staff and then I pay for it with my own money.Then the man says "thank you young son" all I do is look at him and smile.

[Taiga 764]

Your Application has been...

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Reason(s)Why Your Application Was Denied:

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Out of Character:

Missing Areas [ ]

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Role Play:

Missing Biography [ ]

-Short Biography [ ]

Insufficient Information in OOC [ ]

-Insufficient Information in Metagaming Definition [ ]

-Insufficient Information in Powergaming Definition [X]

Insufficient Knowledge on Role Play [ ]

Insufficient Knowledge of the World [X]

Incorrect Lore / Other-Worldly Lore [X]

-Fabricated Places/Large-Scale Events [ ]

-Unreal Scenarios [ ]

Bouts of Powergaming [ ]

Bouts of Metagaming [ ]

Conflicting Answers [ ]

Character is Cliche [ ]

Requires a Villain Application [ ]

Open Ended Responses Require Elaboration [ ]

Form:

Bad Spelling/Grammar [X]

Missing Areas [ ]

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Cliche [ ]

Plagiarized [ ]

Skin:

Missing Skin [ ]

-Skin Doesn't Fit Character [ ]

-Incorrect Character Description [ ]

-Incorrect Skin Format [ ]

-Unloreful Skin [ ]

Other Comments:

Primarily, your definition of powergaming/emoting is inaccurate/incorrect in accordance to our server's adage. Please use the link below to obtain an accurate definition of powergaming/emoting. In your next application, be sure to put it in your own words.

Secondly, your biography is lacking in any indication of lore knowledge. Please be advised, in order to join our server, some knowledge of lore must be presented to prove that you have understood and are accommodated to our server's adage. Please read the lore on the website, forums, and/or the wiki to take a glimpse of what our server has done for the past year. Then, implement some lore knowledge that is valid such as city names, nations, and large scale events. Also, please be advised that all lore that is /current/ must pertain to Asulon, not Aegis. Having your character being born from old cities is fine, but be aware that all current adventures your character will embark upon will be in Asulon.

Here are some useful links:

http://www.lordofthecraft.net/wiki/wikka.php?wakka=HomePage

http://www.lordofthecraft.net/?page_id=10

And lastly, the places mentioned in your biography are not actually featured in the server and therefore, renders your application's biography as void and invalid. Please be aware, it is imperative for an applicant to be familiarized with key locations in Asulon as it is common knowledge. If one's character were to not know of some basic knowledge, it would seriously corrupt and destroy roleplay, even going as far as to ruining your character's past, present, and future.

I would also suggest proofreading your essay to rid it of it's spelling and grammar errors. It makes it all the more difficult to read the application through and through.

I wish you good luck on your next application!

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If you have any Questions or concerns, feel free to send a Private Message to my account! <3

You come to Asulon to Develop a Character, not have one Developed already

Just because you play RPG's, doesn't mean you have RPed before.

Don't post another application in a period of two (2) days. It ruins our organisation methods.

Definition of Metagaming and Powergaming : http://sm-rp.forumotion.com/t32-powergaming-metagaming-ic-and-ooc

[Wizard 125]

Denied.

Please use accepted lore in biography. Ex: Known cities and such.

2nd OR needs some work. Guys, guys is not a typical phrase. Think more medieval. A hint of powergaming since Orcs are stronger and masters of warfare.

[Wizard 125]

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