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Minecraft Account Name: awsumguy75321

How old are you?: 19

Time-Zone/Country of Residence: Eastern Standard Time

Do you have a good grip on English grammar and the English language?: Yes. I passed English every year with flying colors.

Have you had any previous experience in roleplaying?: Yes, on a Stronghold 2 server.

Have you read and understood and agree to the rules?: Yes.

How did you hear about the Lord of the Craft?: minecraftserverlist.net

Link any previous applications you have made to the Lord of the Craft: I haven't made any yet.

Have you posted this application on Minecraft Forum? If not, post it here:http://www.minecraftforum.net/topic/832121-the-lord-of-the-craft-enter-the-world-of-asulon-o-f-f-i-c-i-a-l-l-y-t-h-e-n-o-1-r-p-s-e-r-v-e-r-100-unique-gameplay/!: Yes.

Definitions

In your own words, define what the act of roleplaying is: Roleplaying is when you choose a specific role in a game and can only do things that person you are playing as would be able to do.

In your own words, define what the act of meta-gaming is: It is using information from OOC in IC.

In your own words, define what the act of power-emoting is: Performing an actoin that leaves others unable to do anything.

In-Character Details

Character Name: Isil'thorne

Character Race: Human

Character biography - Make this at least 2 paragraphs long, which must explain your character’s history, appearance, personality, age and any other details you deem necessary: I was born 32 years ago in Arethor in the Holy Oren Empire. With the same dark hair and blue eyes as my father, he knew I should follow in his footsteps and be taught to be a merchant from a young age. I was taught when is it cheapest to restock my store and how I should change the prices depending on the time of year. I was taught what the general prices of items were.

Nothing tragic actually happened in my family. We just kept that little shop running day in, day out clustered in with the rest of the middle class shops. When my father gave me the deed to the store four years ago, I managed it on my own while taking care of my mother and father back at home. Until now. Now I will go to the Sanctuary of the Cloud Temple to find a new profession, or maybe I'll just study there for a while and then return to my old life? Either way, my life will have changed, and I will be content.

What are your characters ambitions?: To change his life for better or worse.

Please provide an in-game screenshot of your skin here: Sorry, I couldn't get it to come up. It is a human skin with dark brown hair, bright blue eyes, and light skin.

Is there anything else you would like to say about your character: Not really.

Open-Response-Questions

Each question here must be answered with a minimum of one full paragraph, and detail the scene you are given in the way it would happen in roleplay. These questions should be answered in first person. Be detailed, not short.

Upon entering the Mighty Human City of Arethor, you come across a shop-keeper calling out to sell his wares to passers-by. The shopkeeper is not a Human, he is a poor dwarf looking to make a living in a new city. What is your response? Me: "Hello! Looks like you need some money. It turns out I'm a shopkeeper like you! I'd be happy to help someone out. What're you selling?" Dwarf: "I'm selling lots of things, like armor, tools, and food. What would you like?" Me: "I'll take a few pieces of bread, please." *I buy 8 pieces of bread for $28. The dwarf, looking very pleased, hands me my change.* Dwarf: Thank you!

You’re in the Cloud Sanctuary late at night, when a large Orc begins to threaten a nearby dwarf. The only present monk is fast asleep, and the situation looks like it will escalate into violence soon, what does your character do? *I go try to wake up the monk. He is fast asleep, so I go up to the Orc and ask what happened. Me: "What is going on? What do you have against this Dwarf?" Orc: "You have no business in this. Leave before I beat the both of you up!" Me: "We are in the Sanctuary of the Cloud Temple! The monks don't take highly to violence, and neither do I!" *The monk is woken by the commotion. When he gets over here, I tell him all that I know of the dispute. The monk takes the Orc away to talk.*

Whilst walking down the road to Malinor, you stumble upon an old man. His walking stick , looks weak and frail, and just as you are about to ask something, the stick breaks, and the man falls to the ground. As he falls down, a bag of Minas falls to the ground, and splits open. As you watch the multiple coins spill out, you peer down at the defenceless man. What does your character do?: *I help the old man to his feet. He thanks me, then I proceed to gather up his coins for him.* Old Man: "Thank you! You see, I am traveling to visit my children in Malinor. I was going to buy them gifts on my way there. As you can see, my walking stick broke. I'm afraid I can't get there without it. What am I to do!" Me: "Don't worry, I'll help you. Just tell me where they live and I'll walk you over there. I'll even buy you a new walking stick on the way." *The old man and I walk to a store. I buy him a walking stick and then we head on to his house.* Old man: "Children! How great it is to see you all! I would have brought gifts, but it seems I forgot with what had happened. But that is a story for later. *He turns to me.* Thank you. I would never had made it if it weren't for you! Please, take these Minas for your help!" *The old man gives me 15 Minas. We both say our goodbyes and I depart, not wishing to keep him from his children any longer.*

[mmat 7460]

- Please use colours to differentiate between questions and answers, applications are very ugly and are horrible to look at when in a single colour.

- Make your biography more detailed, at the moment it is a bit general and bland.

- 'Isil'thorne' isn't a very Human name.

- No skin.

- Dollars are not the ingame currency.

Correct these errors and try again in 24 hours.

[mmat 7460]

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