[Denied]Run4484's 4th Application

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Out of Character Details

Minecraft Account Name: Run4484

How old are you?: 14

Time-Zone/Country of Residence: GMT/UK

Do you have a good grip on English grammar and the English language?: Yes

Have you had any previous experience in roleplaying?: Yes

Have you read and understood and agree to the rules?: Yes

How did you hear about the Lord of the Craft?: I was searching videos on Youtube for Minecraft, then I saw that Petri posted a new video, which was Lord of the Craft. I like the look of it and I wanted to play on it.

Link any previous applications you have made to the Lord of the Craft: N/A

Have you posted this application on Minecraft Forum?:Yes

Definition

In your own words, define what the act of roleplaying is: Roleplaying is where you be a different character and you think and do as he/she would do.

In your own words, define what the act of meta-gaming is: In my own words I think Meta- Gaming is when a player have information that is not in- game and using it to his/her advantage.

In your own words, define what the act of power-emoting is: Power- Emoting is when you perform actions as your character that are either too overpowered or they do not allow the other player to respond in time or make adequate Role- Playing.

In-Character Details

Character Name: Delvus Dawvain

Character Race: Elf

Character biography -

Delvus was born in Aegis, Delvus's Parents lived at Laurelin. Then when Delvus was one years of age, Delvus's Family and the People of Aegis had to abandon their homes because of the Undead Invasion. Whilst they were about to leave their house a fire occurred and spread fast, Delvus and his Dad made it out in time but his Mum weren't so lucky. The remaining people that survived found Asulon. Delvus was then brought up in Malinor. When Delvus and his Dad arrived to their new home, Delvus's Dad was determined to give everything of what Delvus wants. So he trained Delvus. Delvus's Dad was a Skilled Archer and good at Blacksmith.

Delvus is now 57 years of age. His Dad taught him everything he knew like finding Shelter, Hunting, how to use a bow and how to defend yourself by forging armours and weapons. Then his Dad died of an rare disease. Delvus now look older he has Dark brown hair, blue eyes, a tanned skin and tall pointy ears. He is 6ft high. Delvus is also courageous, funny, kind and loving. Delvus left his home town and wanted to have his own home and his family. He had a job working as a Merchant Trader but he left it because Delvus didn't like the open sea. Then he worked as a Normander Guard, he'd stopped there for a while and he made a new friend that provided him with information and equipment. But mouths later he have left his job and set out to the Cloud Temple to set out on a course to fulfil his dream.

What are your characters ambitions?: To have his own home and family.

Please provide an in-game screenshot of your skin here:

Is there anything else you would like to say about your character: N/A

Open Response Questions

Each question here must be answered with a minimum of one full paragraph, and detail the scene you are given in the way it would happen in roleplay. These questions should be answered in first person. Be detailed, not short.

Upon entering the Mighty Human City of Arethor, you come across a shop-keeper calling out to sell his wares to passers-by. The shopkeeper is not a Human, he is a poor dwarf looking to make a living in a new city. What is your response?

Delvus walked happily down the road of Arethor near the Market,then he heard a Dwarf shouting "Get your Equipments here!". Delvus looked to investigate. Delvus noticed some Arrows, and he checked on amount of Arrows he has left. "Excuse me, how much are those Arrows?"

"They cost 20 Minas for 5."

"Alright I'll buy 20 Arrows." And Delvus buys a 20 Arrows and said kindly say "Farewell."

"You too!" And continued to follow the path onwards.

You’re in the Cloud Sanctuary late at night, when a large Orc begins to threaten a nearby dwarf. The only present monk is fast asleep, and the situation looks like it will escalate into violence soon, what does your character do?

Delvus quickly walked up to the problem and say, "What is going on over here?"

"DIS little Dwarf DROPPED his pike on my Foot!"

"It was an accident, I'll said I was sorry."

"You two calm down, just tell me your stories."

Delvus listen while the Orc's and the Dwarf's stories. Delvus concluded,"Well you explore a cave and you went too far and that is when you saw the Orc, which was also exploring the same cave. Then the Dwarf dropped his pike axe and ran off." "So you Dwarf say sorry to the Orc by dropping the and you Orc say sorry by scaring the Dwarf."

"Sorry."

"SORRY!"

"Good. Now you two go on your own separate path."

Whilst walking down the road to Malinor, you stumble upon an old man. His walking stick , looks weak and frail, and just as you are about to ask something, the stick breaks, and the man falls to the ground. As he falls down, a bag of Minas falls to the ground, and splits open. As you watch the multiple coins spill out, you peer down at the defenceless man. What does your character do?:

Delvus walk up to the Old Man and help him up,

"Are you alright?"

"Yeah, but where is my Minas?"

"It's on the floor, do you want me to help you pick them up?"

"Arr yes yes please do." Then help him picking up the Minas off the floor for him and giving it to him.

"Thank you, kind Elf."

"Safe Travels."

"Same with you."

Thank you for Reading my Application this is my forth one and I hope to enter the beautiful world of Asulon.

[Hylian the Heretic 233]

Denied, but quite close.

-Bio is slightly short and a bit lacking in server lore. Please include more lore relevant to Asulon.

-The skin link would seem to be broken

-ORQs are good, but could be a bit more detailed.

-Just nitpicking, but you might want to double-space most of your lines.

Good app, you're quite close. Please wait 24 hours and re-apply :)

[Hylian the Heretic 233]

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