[Denied]hobokiller97's 2nd application.

[hobokiller97 0]

Out-Of-CharacterDetails

Minecraft Account Name:hobokiller97

How old are you?:15

Time-Zone/Country ofResidence: co.Dublin Ireland

Do you have a good grip onEnglish grammar and the English language?: Yes.

Have you had any previousexperience in roleplaying?: Yes.

Have you read and understood andagree to the rules?: Yes.

How did you hear about the Lordof the Craft?: From a friend.

Link any previous applicationsyou have made to the Lord of the Craft:

Have you posted this applicationon Minecraft Forum? If not, post ithere:http://www.minecraftforum.net/topic/832121-the-lord-of-the-craft-enter-the-world-of-asulon-o-f-f-i-c-i-a-l-l-y-t-h-e-n-o-1-r-p-s-e-r-v-e-r-100-unique-gameplay/!:

Definitions

In your own words, define whatthe act of roleplaying is: A way to interact and play with people usingintricate storylines and character creation.

In your own words, define whatthe act of meta-gaming is: Meta-gaming is using knowledge learnedoutside of the game inside the game!

In your own words, define whatthe act of power-emoting is: Power-emoting is making yourself strongfor example saying I kill you not giving the other player time to react.

In-CharacterDetails

Character Name: ArthurDarksage.

Character Race: Human.

Character biography - Make thisat least 2 paragraphs long, which must explain your character’s history,appearance, personality, age and any other details you deem necessary:Arthur has light brown hair, dark blue eyes and a beard. Arthur Darksage'sfather was a blacksmith who thought Arthur to craft all types of combatequipment,but Arthur always wanted to be a knight,even if he wasn't thestrongest,smartest or most skilled, he was driven. Arthur set off at the age of16 to become a knight,he went through hell only to fail, Arthur failed as hewas not strong, smart or skilled enough, he was heart-broken he had spent sevenyears only to not succeed, he set off to travel around Asulon for ten yearsbecause he was so ashamed of the thought of returning to his father as afailure. Arthur had finally come to terms with never reaching his dream ofbecoming a knight so he set off home but got attacked by bandits and wasseverely injured and forgot all of his smithing skills but a group of monkstook him to cloud temple and nursed him back to health.

After a year ofrecovery Arthur decided to return to his father hoping that he would understandwhy he failed, but he was still terrified. One day he was walking down a heavily-forestedpathway and he saw someone being robbed by the very same bandits that attackedhim he decide to confront them he shouted at them with all his ragesaying,"how about you duel with someone of your own stature". Theychuckled drawing daggers while Arthur drew a sword that his father had given tohim as a child crafted from cast-iron, one of three bandits ran at him and hewent into a blind rage thrusting his blade through the bandits chest, thesecond bandit then attacked cutting Arthur's arm leaving a giant gash Arthurquickly reacted by punching the bandit in the stomach and with a quick swing ofhis sword the bandits head rolled,the third bandit was hesitant but he attackedand stabbed Arthur through the stomach Arthur screamed and fell to the groundfalling un-conscious. He awoke at the cloud temple to his father leaning overhim crying, Arthur used all of his strength to chuckle and say,"do notworry father it is only a flesh-wound.

What are your charactersambitions?: My characters ambition is to become a knight ,so he canfind the final bandit and get revenge.

Please provide an in-gamescreenshot of your skin here:

Is there anything else you wouldlike to say about your character: Arthur is a good fighter , but onlywhen he is in a blind-rage.

Open-Response-Questions

Each question heremust be answered with a minimum of one full paragraph, and detail the scene youare given in the way it would happen in roleplay. These questions should beanswered in first person. Be detailed, not short.

Upon entering the Mighty HumanCity of Arethor, you come across a shop-keeper calling out to sell his wares topassers-by. The shopkeeper is not a Human, he is a poor dwarf looking to make aliving in a new city. What is your response? I say, "hellothere dwarf".

The dwarf replies with a friendly, "good evening sirwould like a bite to eat".

"That depends what type of food do you have"? Iinquire.

The dwarf lists off a couple of delectable items"wehave bread, cooked chicken, apples and cake"

The sound of the cooked chicken makes me salavate."howmuch is the cooked chicken"?, I ask.

"Only twenty minas" the dwarf replies.

"i'll take one cooked chicken please" I sayhanding over 20 minas.

"here you go kind sir" the dwarf says handing thechicken over.

"goodbye dwarf" I say.

"goodbye" says the dwarf.

You’re wandering the Oren Roadlate at night, when a large Orc begins to threaten a nearby dwarf. There is nohelp nearby, and the situation looks like it will escalate into violence soon,what does your character do? I say to the orc"do you want tobuy some ale", while signalling to the dwarf to run away,the orc spots medoing this and we begin to battle.

The orc shouts"puny human you shall now pay the pricefor this dwarf's stupidity", while drawing his sword from his sheath, I quicklyraise my sword to his neck saying "have at the you fat oaf",he swingshis sword knocking mine from my hands I run over and grab my sword shouting forhelp the orc runs over and swings his sword once more but I dodge and quicklythrust my sword through his leg, he screams and falls to the ground calling forhelp and I decide to call a guard to get him to a hospital.

Whilst walking down the roadto Malinor, you stumble upon an old man. His walking stick , looks weak andfrail, and just as you are about to ask something, the stick breaks, and theman falls to the ground. As he falls down, a bag of Minas falls to the ground,and splits open. As you watch the multiple coins spill out, you peer down atthe defenceless man. What does your character do?: I run overasking the man"are you okay",

the old man replies by saying"yes but i cannot walkwithout my stick, I need to deliver my minas to pay for my house or else i'llend up without a home". walk overto a near by tree and break off a large branch to give to the man as a walkingstick, I present him with the stick. The old man turns and says "Thank youyoung man ". I then walk over and pick up his minas and present them tohim also he says" I cannot thank you enough".

I reply by saying "tis nothing i shall help you pay foryour house". I then stand him up and help him walk to Malinor.

[LeRenardNoir 413]

You were denied for the following reasons:

Your biography is decent, but it lacks server lore. Be sure to add places and events that influenced your character. Your application in general could use some work on grammar and spelling and there are quite a few places where two words seemed to be conjoined without a space. I would recommend you take the time to add some more detail to your Open Response Questions.

Please wait 24 hours before re-applying.

PM me if you would like further explanation/help.

While you wait…Go and vote for the server to support it!

We all would really appreciate it.

[LeRenardNoir 413]

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