Aquatics application

[Maletone Blazebeard (Aqua) 130]

Out-Of-Character Details

My names Garrett love minecraft order staff on a server o role playing (:

Minecraft Account Name: aquaticsunnymoss

How old are you?: I am 12 and I believe I'm quite mature

Time-Zone/Country of Residence: central time the United States

Do you have a good grip on English grammar and the English language?: yes it's my first language lol

Have you had any previous experience in roleplaying?: yes I play skyrim if that counts

Have you read and understood and agree to the rules?: yes I have

How did you hear about the Lord of the Craft?: on the minecraft forums

Link any previous applications you have made to the Lord of the Craft: none

Have you posted this application on Minecraft Forum? If not, post it here:http://www.minecraftforum.net/topic/832121-the-lord-of-the-craft-enter-the-world-of-asulon-o-f-f-i-c-i-a-l-l-y-t-h-e-n-o-1-r-p-s-e-r-v-e-r-100-unique-gameplay/!:

Definitions

In your own words, define what the act of roleplaying is: the act of role playing to me is bing somebody who in real life you couldn't be and to discover a world that seems unique and impossible

In your own words, define what the act of meta-gaming is: the act of meta gaming to me is to make a strategy or a way to go beyond the limits of the game

In your own words, define what the act of power-emoting is: the act of power emoting is doingan action in game without asking the player or without the other player even knowing.

In-Character Details

Character Name: maletone

Character Race: dwarf

Character biography - Make this at least 2 paragraphs long, which must explain your character’s history, appearance, personality, age and any other details you deem necessary: my character is about 4,5 with a yellow pinkish skin tone. He comes from a family of rich miners who live in a forbidden mine which little is known about. His goal when he was little was to find the purple diamond a rare mystical object. A few nights before he turned 25 his mine was raided many of his friends were slaughtered. He barley got away with his life he crawled to a house and passed out on the family's porch. That family helped him to health and he is back to find the purple diamond and the riders who killed his friends.

What are your characters ambitions?: to find the purple diamond and kill the raiders

Please provide an in-game screenshot of your skin here:

Is there anything else you would like to say about your character: he is a hard worker.

Open-Response-Questions

Each question here must be answered with a minimum of one full paragraph, and detail the scene you are given in the way it would happen in roleplay. These questions should be answered in first person. Be detailed, not short.

Upon entering the Mighty Human City of Arethor, you come across a shop-keeper calling out to sell his wares to passers-by. The shopkeeper is not a Human, he is a poor dwarf looking to make a living in a new city. What is your response? hello there, what do you have for sale fellow dwarf? He replying the finest weapons in the land I look at his blanket of used and new items I can see he is in decorate need of coin for his family so I buy a new sword for 30 Mina's keeping him and me happy as I walk off he says "bless you sir."

You’re wandering the Oren Road late at night, when a large Orc begins to threaten a nearby dwarf. There is no help nearby, and the situation looks like it will escalate into violence soon, what does your character do? I Rush to see what the dispute is about I hear the Orc say "you owe me 100 Mina's now! The dwarf replays "aren't ou rich enough?" This out rages the Orc I see violence and tension about to happens so I pull out my bag of coins and pay the dwarves debts. He is startled but the Orc wlks off muttering.

Whilst walking down the road to Malinor, you stumble upon an old man. His walking stick , looks weak and frail, and just as you are about to ask something, the stick breaks, and the man falls to the ground. As he falls down, a bag of Minas falls to the ground, and splits open. As you watch the multiple coins spill out, you peer down at the defenceless man. What does your character do?: As I approached the frail man I would see his long beard and his wobbly legs with his worn down cane from many adventures as he falls I watch his coins spill out as does he. I bend down to pik up his coins and make a new sack he lye and watches me with intense eyes of curiosity. He looks at me and says why did you not run off I reply because I am noble.

[Taiga 764]

Your Application has been...

DENIED [X]

Put on PENDING [ ]

Reason(s)Why Your Application Was Denied:

[[X's mark the parts you need to rectify.]]

Out of Character:

Missing Areas [ ]

Bad Information [X]

Role Play:

Missing Biography [ ]

-Short Biography [ ]

Insufficient Information in OOC [ ]

-Insufficient Information in Metagaming Definition [X]

-Insufficient Information in Powergaming Definition [ ]

Insufficient Knowledge on Role Play [ ]

Insufficient Knowledge of the World [X]

Incorrect Lore / Other-Worldly Lore [ ]

-Fabricated Places/Large-Scale Events [ ]

-Unreal Scenarios [ ]

Bouts of Powergaming [ ]

Bouts of Metagaming [ ]

Conflicting Answers [ ]

Character is Cliche [ ]

Requires a Villain Application [ ]

Open Ended Responses Require Elaboration [X]

Did not post on Minecraftforums [X]

Form:

Bad Spelling/Grammar [X]

Missing Areas [ ]

Breaking Rules [ ]

Cliche [ ]

Plagiarized [ ]

Skin:

Missing Skin [ ]

-Skin Doesn't Fit Character [ ]

-Incorrect Character Description [ ]

-Incorrect Skin Format [ ]

-Unloreful Skin [ ]

Other Comments:

First and foremost, your definition of metagaming is inaccurate/incorrect in accordance to our server's adage. Please use the link below to obtain an accurate definition of metagaming. In your next application, be sure to put it in your own words.

Furthermore, your biography is lacking in any indication of lore knowledge. Please be advised, in order to join our server, some knowledge of lore must be presented to prove that you have understood and are accommodated to our server's adage. Please read the lore on the website, forums, and/or the wiki to take a glimpse of what our server has done for the past year. Then, implement some lore knowledge that is valid such as city names, nations, and large scale events. Also, please be advised that all lore that is /current/ must pertain to Asulon, not Aegis. Having your character being born from old cities is fine, but be aware that all current adventures your character will embark upon will be in Asulon.

Here are some useful links:

http://www.lordofthecraft.net/wiki/wikka.php?wakka=HomePage

http://www.lordofthecraft.net/?page_id=10

Next, I would like to ask you to post on the minecraft forums as instructed in the application form. It is a necessary step into getting accepted onto the forums.

Then, I would like you to expand your ORQ's. They are much too short, have little to no dialogue, and are strewn with bad grammar/punctuation/spelling. Please rectify this in your next application.

I wish you good luck on your next application!

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If you have any Questions or concerns, feel free to send a Private Message to my account! <3

You come to Asulon to Develop a Character, not have one Developed already

Just because you play RPG's, doesn't mean you have RPed before.

Don't post another application in a period of two (2) days. It ruins our organisation methods.

Definition of Metagaming and Powergaming : http://sm-rp.forumotion.com/t32-powergaming-metagaming-ic-and-ooc

[Taiga 764]

Moved to Denied Forum