Captain__FRuiTs Application

[Captain__FRuiT 0]

Out-Of-Character Details

Minecraft Account Name:Captain__FRuiT

How old are you?:15

Time-Zone/Country of Residence:Canada EST -5:00

Do you have a good grip on English grammar and the English language?:Yes I believe so

Have you had any previous experience in roleplaying?:I played on this server before I just didnt play for a while so i got un whitelisted

Have you read and understood and agree to the rules?:Yes

How did you hear about the Lord of the Craft?:Some minecraft top servers list

Link any previous applications you have made to the Lord of the Craft:

Have you posted this application on Minecraft Forum? If not, post it here: http://www.minecraftforum.net/topic/832121-the-lord-of-the-craft-enter-the-world-of-asulon-o-f-f-i-c-i-a-l-l-y-t-h-e-n-o-1-r-p-s-e-r-v-e-r-100-unique-gameplay/! :

Definitions

In your own words, define what the act of roleplaying is:RP is putting yourself in another characters shoes and living out there life as yours

In your own words, define what the act of meta-gaming is:Meta gaming is your character acting upon just the knowledge that he has for example you walk up to a player in game you can say hello Captain__FRuiT because you do not know that is his name

In your own words, define what the act of power-emoting is:Power emoting is basically not giving the oppertunity for your oppenenent to counter strike or make a move

In-Character Details

Character Name:Kadrin_Cutaxe

Character Race:Dwarf

Character biography - Make this at least 2 paragraphs long, which must explain your character’s history, appearance, personality, age and any other details you deem necessary:Kadrin Cutaxe is a Dwarf at the age of 143 he's 4 foot 3 with a copper beard that stretches to about his feet he has broad shoulders and stubby knees. Kadrin is a real hard worker he will do anything for the right price. He loves Ale and small lemon seed cakes he sleeps a minimal amount for there is always lots to do and never time to rest he works until he bleeds and he will not stop until he accomplishes what is needed.

Kadrin was local to Kaz Modan until we was exiled. Ever since he has been wandering the land searching and searching for somewhere new he has been living off the land perfecting his skills ravaging the land doing what he had to to survive. He is skilled in mining, baking and farming, also a little bit in blacksmithing but he doesnt really like to bring that up as he was wondering reaching what he thought to be his last days. He came to the Gates of Asulon and he wants in.

What are your characters ambitions?:To live a life of great wealth and great friends to have somewhere to stay at night and keep warm

Please provide an in-game screenshot of your skin here:http://www.planetminecraft.com/skin/gimli-the-lord-of-the-rings/Is there anything else you would like to say about your character:no

Open-Response-Questions

Each question here must be answered with a minimum of one full paragraph, and detail the scene you are given in the way it would happen in roleplay. These questions should be answered in first person. Be detailed, not short.

Upon entering the Mighty Human City of Arethor, you come across a shop-keeper calling out to sell his wares to passers-by. The shopkeeper is not a Human, he is a poor dwarf looking to make a living in a new city. What is your response? *Kadrin passing by sees the dwarf and wonders over to him* Oi what ye be sellin in this big city ere sir *Dwarf respondes* aye be sellin ye wares anythin ye need get it right ere.

*Kadrin pondering a little bit* well i aint got much money but I could use a new pick axe ye got one of those*Dwarf respondes* aye I do just forged this morning with me own hands I used the blacksmiths shop just down the path ere oi thatll be 6 minas to aye. *Kadrin Replies* aye ere you go *Dwarf hands him the pickaxe* Aye have a nice day.

You’re wandering the Oren Road late at night, when a large Orc begins to threaten a nearby dwarf. There is no help nearby, and the situation looks like it will escalate into violence soon, what does your character do?*Kadrin walking by sees a neer by dwarf in trouble* Oh no me dwarf brother is in trouble but if i get it there may be even more trouble but if I save him he might just reward me *Kadrin rushes at the orc screaming For Dwarves!! He then slices the orcs leg but that just made the orc more angry the orc swong his fist at Kadrin with his quick feet Kadrin dodged the punches from the orc he went in for another slash at the orc he got him right in the neck the orc was getting weaker as blood dripped from his wounds when suddenly the orc with his last ounce of strength moved towards the dwarf who was lying on the ground for he had got a serious wound to the knee and couldnt walk the orc smacked his fist down and killed the small dwarf out of anger Kadrin ran at the orc with a ferious stab he slayed the orc. Kadrin walked over to the small dwarf picked him up and found a nice spot to burry him.

Whilst walking down the road to Malinor, you stumble upon an old man. His walking stick , looks weak and frail, and just as you are about to ask something, the stick breaks, and the man falls to the ground. As he falls down, a bag of Minas falls to the ground, and splits open. As you watch the multiple coins spill out, you peer down at the defenceless man. What does your character do?:Kadrin sees the old man fall the bag of minas spill he thinks aye really need minas to get some new tools but that is not right i must help this man. Kadrin picks the old man up onto his feet and gives him the walking stick that he had been using every since he was cast out of Kaz Modan he says here take this ere walking stick *he takes the stick and just nods* then Kadrin picks up the mina and puts it all back in the bag he would have loved to take some but he thought to himself I will get me minas fairly he starts to walk away when suddenly the old man turns to him and says ere have these minas you need em more than I do Kadrin nods and walks away.

[Wizard 125]

Denied.

Asulon has no gates. It is the whole countryside. Read up on the lore and include that in your biography. For instance, read about established Dwarven places to be born and live in. Use accepted lore, do not make up your own.

Everything else looks pretty good. You could spend some time refining your Open-response and that is about it.

Do not re-apply for 24 hours.

[Wizard 125]

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