My Aplication

[sulsagamer 0]

Out-Of-Character Details

Minecraft Account Name:sulsagamer

How old are you?:13 but almost 14

Time-Zone/Country of Residence:US, Colorado

Do you have a good grip on English grammar and the English language?:Yes

Have you had any previous experience in roleplaying?:Yes

Have you read and understood and agree to the rules?:Yes

How did you hear about the Lord of the Craft?:Youtube

Link any previous applications you have made to the Lord of the Craft:None

Definitions

In your own words, define what the act of roleplaying is:To act as another person.

In your own words, define what the act of meta-gaming is:I don't know. All I know it's against the rules.

In your own words, define what the act of power-emoting is:It is the expression of emotion or fatial expression.

In-Character Details

Character Name:Bret Hud

Character Race:dwarf

Character biography - Make this at least 2 paragraphs long, which must explain your character’s history, appearance, personality, age and any other details you deem necessary:When I was 12 years old I lived in a small log house near the mountains. That's where my dad worked at the time. My mom was human, but I didn't mind. One day While I was playing with my toy pick axe I felt a large amount of pain and I flung into the air. I landed a few yards away from where I was previously standing. Our house was blow up. I saw my mom and dad laying in what was left of the house, dead. My rings was ringing and my vision was blurry. I stumble towards the mountains hoping to find someone. I entered the mountain entrance and saw a bunch of my kind walking from tree farm, to mine, and to the feasting hall. A few dwarfs had noticed me standing there. They looked at me with fear on their face. I felt my face, I had a huge dash across my cheek and on my back I could feel deep cuts. I blacked out and woke up in a bed with a dwarf looking over me. I will never forget those times of hardship.

I am now 4,5 being a little taller then the other dwarfs due to my moms side. I wear dark brown leather pants with black boots. I wear no shirt and have a long red beard. My eyes are bright blue. My face still has the cut on it, also the many scratches on my back were still visible. I have light colored skin with red hair sprouted all over my body.

I am a positive dwarf that always wants to look on the bright side of things. I do not like to be lied too. I will never say no to a bear with my brothers. If someone is in distress I always try to help. I love war. If there is a war to be fought I always try to join in. I am not a greedy dwarf. I will never steal from people who haven't stolen from me. I also am really found of the ladies.

What are your characters ambitions?:I want to become a great miner and go on many adventures.

Please provide an in-game screenshot of your skin here:http://dl.dropbox.com/u/64145180/Rp%20Skin.png

Is there anything else you would like to say about your character:I am 19 years old.

Open-Response-Questions

Each question here must be answered with a minimum of one full paragraph, and detail the scene you are given in the way it would happen in roleplay. These questions should be answered in first person. Be detailed, not short.

Upon entering the Mighty Human City of Arethor, you come across a shop-keeper calling out to sell his wares to passers-by. The shopkeeper is not a Human, he is a poor dwarf looking to make a living in a new city. What is your response?I walk up to the man, smile and say "What do ye sell here?" The dwarf say "Everything from a cap to a pear of boots." I would say "Interesting, I would like to buy a leather cap please." The dwarf says "That will be 15 minas." I would take out my Minas bag and take out a big hand of coins and hand them to the dwraf. The dwarf says "This is 21 Minas, I only asked for 15/." I would reply "Oh, that's fine. Now may I have a cap?"

He says "Sure, and thank you so much brother." He hands me the hat and I walk away after say "No problem brother."

You’re wandering the Oren Road late at night, when a large Orc begins to threaten a nearby dwarf. There is no help nearby, and the situation looks like it will escalate into violence soon, what does your character do?I run up to the Orc and say "Hey, Leave 'im alone." The Orc looks at me and says "Who's gonna make me. You?" I reply "If I must I will." The Orc would then say "Oh, okay then. Have at me dwarf!" I run at the Orc, take out my sword ,and before he can dodge me, I sink my sword into his shoulder. The Orc screams and pulls out the sword and throughs it at me. I roll to the side. The Orc roars in anger. I run and pick up my sword. I turn around and the Orc is charging me. I ready my sword and *slice* I slice his face. He covers his face with his hands roars and runs away.

Whilst walking down the road to Malinor, you stumble upon an old man. His walking stick , looks weak and frail, and just as you are about to ask something, the stick breaks, and the man falls to the ground. As he falls down, a bag of Minas falls to the ground, and splits open. As you watch the multiple coins spill out, you peer down at the defenceless man. What does your character do?:I pick up the mans Minas bag and and bring it over to the old man. I hoist him up and he says "Thank you kind traveler." I Support him to Malinor and buy him a new walking stick. He says "Oh thank you so much dwarf." I give him the new walking stick and his bag of Minas. I say "No problem." I walk away feeling like a good person.

[everblue2er101 906]

Your application has been...

Denied.

Explain specifically what prior roleplaying experience you have.

Expand on the Roleplaying definition. Incorrect Meta-Gaming and Power-Emoting definitions, plus they need examples. You can find more information on the forums and wiki, but make sure to use your own words.

The bio is pretty good, but it needs some server lore added, which can be found on the forums and wiki.

Need to provide a skin screenshot and not the template. See THIS GUIDE for help.

Please expand on the last Open Response Question.

A good first attempt.

Wait at least 24 hours after this post to reapply. If you have any questions feel free to send me a PM.

[everblue2er101 906]

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