Bloodofgore's character application Redo

[bloodofgore 3]

Minecraft Account Name:bloodofgore

How old are you?:13

Time-Zone/Country of Residence:western america

Do you have a good grip on English grammar and the English language?:pretty decent, I do have bad habbit of using your instead of you're, nothing major though.

Have you had any previous experience in roleplaying?:Yes, I used to play WoW, I usually role played alot.

Have you read and understood and agree to the rules?:Yers

How did you hear about the Lord of the Craft?:youtube :3

Link any previous applications you have made to the Lord of the Craft: http://www.lordofthecraft.net/forum/index.php?/topic/73200-bloodofgores-character-application/

Have you posted this application on Minecraft Forum? If not, post it here: http://www.minecraft...nique-gameplay/! :I'm going to do that after I finished this one :3

Definitions

In your own words, define what the act of roleplaying is:To act like the character you choose. Usually by telling how you feel, so the other RPers know what to act, and what you say and do.

In your own words, define what the act of meta-gaming is:when you use something in the game to influence your actions.

In your own words, define what the act of power-emoting is: A noobish way to role play, to make other do something without them having any chance of stopping it.

In-Character Details

Character Name:Lucan

Character Race:Wood Elf

Character biography - Make this at least 2 paragraphs long, which must explain your character’s history, appearance, personality, age and any other details you deem necessary:This'll be first person then.

I was was 5 years old when it all happened. Just a little ways from The City Of Sylvenor, I was just a young, hearty lad. What happened couldn't shouldn't have happened at my age. But it did. My name is Lucan, I have light brown skin, naturally blonde. Which is rare for my race. I'm an expert archer, I have trained for 5 years on my archery skill, I rarely miss. I have served many kings, but never permanently, my Pa never liked kings, always thought they were corrupt. So in his honor, I never served a permanent position.

When I was playing near the woods with my slingshot, hitting any squirrels I could find. I heard my Pa yelling to me to get inside. I looked up and saw the clouds almost completely black, I could hear thunder, but I ignored it because thunder never was a threat. I ran inside the cottage. And hid under my bed. My pet dog, Jinny, was whining outside. My Pa ran out to get Jinny, when lightning struck outside, it sounded like the gods smashed earth with a mighty hammer. I could hear a scream. My Pa's scream.

I waited out the storm, crying in fear as my Pa never came back. When the storm finally stopped. I went outside when I got the courage expecting to see my dead Pa. He wasn't there. There was a black mark where the lightning struck, but no sign of my Pa. I cried that night. I cried all night it seems. I walked to the nearest city, living my life as an orphan. Someone finally adopt me. But I ran away. For no Pa could replace mine. None. They may be my legal parents, but they were never my parents. Or ever will be.

What are your characters ambitions?:To have a nice life. To move on from the horrors of his past.

Please provide an in-game screenshot of your skin here: The invasion of the steves is ruining me. with the hood, without the hood

Is there anything else you would like to say about your character:Nup

Open-Response-Questions

Each question here must be answered with a minimum of one full paragraph, and detail the scene you are given in the way it would happen in roleplay. These questions should be answered in first person. Be detailed, not short.

Upon entering the Mighty Human City of Arethor, you come across a shop-keeper calling out to sell his wares to passers-by. The shopkeeper is not a Human, he is a poor dwarf looking to make a living in a new city. What is your response?

Dwarf: Excuse me sir *signalling to Lucan to come to him* would you like some of my wares?

Lucan: *noticing the dwarf looks poor* Why yes, I could take a look! *notices a beautiful sword, a gold hand with very fastidious engravings* I would like that sword please!

Dwarf: 150 Micas please!

Lucan: *Hands the shopkeeper 150 Micas* Thank you sir!

*People around Lucan notice the beautiful sword he bought, people begin to crowd around the shop, looking at his wares. people start buying his wares. The dwarf, dealing out items and storing coins, has a huge smile on his face. A day later, the dwarf walks up to Lucan, and gives him 150 coins*

Dwarf: Thanks, if it wasn't for you, I wouldn't have had a meal the other day, thank you. *walks off*

You’re wandering the Oren Road late at night, when a large Orc begins to threaten a nearby dwarf. There is no help nearby, and the situation looks like it will escalate into violence soon, what does your character do?

Lucan: *shoots the Orc in the leg* Stop there! Leave the dwarf alone, or I will be forced to kill you.

Orc: I'll kill you! *charges with his weapon drawn*

(Considering I win the fight)

Lucan:*dodges the Orcs attack, and starts attacking with the sword* Submit or die!

Orc: *Knowing he is outmatched* Fine, just leave me alone!

Lucan: Are you ok dwarf?

Dwarf: Yes, I am. Thank you for your help. *hands Lucan 6 coins* Good day. *walks off*

Lucan: Good day.

Whilst walking down the road to Malinor, you stumble upon an old man. His walking stick , looks weak and frail, and just as you are about to ask something, the stick breaks, and the man falls to the ground. As he falls down, a bag of Minas falls to the ground, and splits open. As you watch the multiple coins spill out, you peer down at the defenceless man. What does your character do?:

Lucan: Excuse me sir, do you need some help?

Old Man: Yes please. *Groans in pain*

Lucan: *quickly picks of the coins, then helps the Old Man up, putting his arm around his neck.* Where is your home sir?

Old Man: *Points north* That way.

Lucan: *Walks the Old Man to his house, and puts him on the couch.* I'm going to go find you a new walking stick, do you need anything before I leave?

Old Man: No, I'm good. Thank you for your help. An old chap like me needs help more often than you youngsters.

Lucan: *Leaves the house to find a stick, when he finds a sturdy stick, he carves it out with his knife, and returns to the Old Man's house.* Here you are sir, do you need anything?

Old Man: *Hesitates before asking, fearful of look greedy, then decides he really does need help* Mind if you make me some soup, I know it's a bit much, but I'm hungry.

Lucan: No problem sir, *Goes to make mushroom stew*

Old Man: Thank you. Here, take the bag of Minas. As a sign of my appreciation.

Lucan: Thank you. Good bye. *Leaves the Old Man's house. And returns to his buisness.

[Thu'um 530]

Greetings Applicant, I regret to inform you that your application has been Denied.

Reasoning for the said verdict:

- You did not wait precisely 24 hours, you waited about 22 hours before re-applying (Sorry, we must enforce this rule, this is not the only reason you were denied.)

- Your Roleplaying Definition is Incorrect.

- Your Metagaming Definition is Incorrect.

- Your Biography does not have a proper implementation of the lore, it makes up a city called 'Sylvenor', which does not currently exist in Asulon.

- Your Application's formatting can be improved.

Good Luck on your next application,

Please RE-APPLY AFTER A PERIOD OF 24 HOURS.

Salutations,

Thu'um

[Thu'um 530]

Moved to Denied Forum