[Orc App] Chimp2008 2 application

[Raktar 140]

Out-Of-Character Details

Minecraft Account Name: chimp2008

How old are you?: 12

Time-Zone/Country of Residence: California

Do you have a good grip on English grammar and the English language?: i have a good grip on the English language and can speak it perfectly

Have you had any previous experience in role playing?: Yes I have, I play the Elder scrolls games and many other games similar to that franchise.

Have you read and understood and agree to the rules?: Yes

How did you hear about the Lord of the Craft?: My friend bryanwaffles told me to check it out

Link any previous applications you have made to the Lord of the Craft: http://www.lordofthecraft.net/forum/index.php?/topic/71595-chimp2008-application/

Definitions

In your own words, define what the act of role playing is: To role play is to become someone you are not, examples of this is, when you make a character in a video game and pretend that you are him. That is role playing

In your own words, define what the act of meta-gaming is: Meta gaming is to do something in character that your character does not know about and was found out about OOC. Example: Using minecraft name tags to find people.

In your own words, define what the act of power-emoting is: Power-emoting is using role play as a way to kill your opponent unfairly. for example ' I threw a spear at you and you died'

In-Character Details

Character Name: Raktar

Character Race: Orc, Goblin

Character biography - Make this at least 2 paragraphs long, which must explain your character’s history, appearance, personality, age and any other details you deem necessary: Raktar grew up in a small village filled with goblins of all kind. He was shy and he was not very strong. When a bully tried to hurt him he could not fight back, instead he had to outsmart the bully. This quickly became a tactic Raktar would use in battle. While growing up he made good friends with Nug, another goblin from his town. Now it is ten years later, and Raktar awoke to find himself in the cloud temple. When he walked outside he saw that he had been captured by a group of human bandits. Raktar felt scared. When the bandits saw he awoke they ran over to him and stole all his Mina and ran off. Raktar got up and took a carriage to Arethor. As he exits the carriage he ran to The golden harvest and took a rest.

When he woke up he saw that a thieve was being hung. He walked out to see who it was. The person who was being hung was a farmer who had stole bread from the baker. Raktar could not see this poor man be hung. He tried to save him, But Raktar was to slow, and could not save the man in time. This made Raktar fell very bad, and this was a long journey he had taken. Raktar gave up on getting his Minas back. It was a lost cause. So he packed up his stuff and headed back to cloud temple. There he took a nice nap and started a quest to explore all of Asulon.

What are your characters ambitions?: I would like to explore all of Asulon.

Please provide an in-game screenshot of your skin here: http://i1160.photobucket.com/albums/q498/chimp2008/2012-09-23_213330_zpsf82b53fe.png

Is there anything else you would like to say about your character: No.

Open-Response-Questions

Each question here must be answered with a minimum of one full paragraph, and detail the scene you are given in the way it would happen in role-play. These questions should be answered in first person. Be detailed, not short.

Upon entering the Mighty Human City of Arethor, you come across a shop-keeper calling out to sell his wares to passers-by. The shopkeeper is not a Human, he is a poor dwarf looking to make a living in a new city. What is your response? As I walked through Arethor I ran into a Dwarf, he was trying to make a living selling coal he mined. No one would buy his coal. I decided to walk up to him and asked " Wud du latz hab fer sayl?" He replied with " I am just a poor Dwarf, I sell coal and iron. Today we have coal." I had only 50 Minas on me at the time. " Huw much fer azh piece uf 'da coal?" He replied with " For one coal it is 5 Minas." Raktar decided to help out this poor dwarf. "I tak tu pice of coal." To his reply he said " Okay! That will be 5 Minas." I pulled out my sack of Minas and handed the Dwarf 10 Minas, He gave me the coal and was very thankful.

You’re wandering the Oren Road late at night, when a large Orc begins to threaten a nearby dwarf. There is no help nearby, and the situation looks like it will escalate into violence soon, what does your character do? As I wander the Oren Road I see a Dwarf getting beat up. I run over to the Dwarf to see he was being hurt by a Orc and asked what had happened. The Orc replied to me with " Dis stowt try'd tu steel mi shiniez!" I looked at the Dwarf, he had a stone pickaxe on his back and 10 Minas in his hand. He looked scared. I grabed him and said " Whu du latz hav dis uruk's shiniez!" He said " You see I am a poor Dwarf with very little money. Please leave me alone!" I pulled out sword and stabed the Dwarf. He fell to the ground begging me for his life. As I put down my sword I kicked the Dwarf took the Minas and handed them to the orc.

Whilst walking down the road to Malinor, you stumble upon an old man. His walking stick , looks weak and frail, and just as you are about to ask something, the stick breaks, and the man falls to the ground. As he falls down, a bag of Minas falls to the ground, and splits open. As you watch the multiple coins spill out, you peer down at the defenseless man. What does your character do?: I walked up to an old man to ask him were a local inn was, as I started to talk to him, his walking stick broke. He fell to the ground and all his Minas dropped. I saw all his Minas had dropped to the ground. I picked up a few while he was not looking and put them in a sack. I helped him get up and he thanked me. After a long talk he told me were the inn was. I thanked him and ran off with half of his Minas! As I approached the inn I asked for a room and took a long nap.

[Lita 677]

• Stole in the third ORQ. You cannot commit villainies without a VA.
• Attacked without technical provocation in the second ORQ, and stole. VA required.
• Power-emoting is not just killing. Revise this definition.
• A little more effort in grammar throughout the app would be nice.

[Lita 677]

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