FUZUZ APPLICATION FULL

[Fuzumz 46]

Minecraft Account Name:Fuzumz

How old are you?: 14

Time-Zone/Country of Residence: Pacific Standard Time, United States of America

Do you have a good grip on English grammar and the English language?: I would like to think so, English being my first language and all.

Have you had any previous experience in roleplaying?: Yes, but not very much, a Lord of the rings server,i was an elf who lived in Dremor

Have you read and understood and agree to the rules?: Mhmm

How did you hear about the Lord of the Craft?: Minecraftservers.net.

Link any previous applications you have made to the Lord of the Craft:

Have you posted this application on Minecraft Forum? If not, post it here: http://www.minecraft...nique-gameplay/! : Yes.

Definitions

In your own words, define what the act of roleplaying is: Roleplaying is an a skill of acting, when you take anothers story and live it for awhile.

In your own words, define what the act of meta-gaming is: Meta-gaming is when you take out-of-character information and use it to your advantage in character. For example: Say if i were mining and i see anothers nameplate off to the right instead of acting like i dont know hes there, i mined all the way to him and kiled him, becuase i knew where he was due to the nameplate that floats :L that is meta-gaming

In your own words, define what the act of power-emoting is: I cant explain it, ill use an example

*As Von is traveling along the stony path, an Orc jumps out of the bushes to the right, as the orc charges Von he hastily draws his sword and stabs the Orc in the stomach* it would be like doing something and not letting the other react to it :L

In-Character Details

Character Name: Harold Garrowind

Character Race: Human

Character biography - Make this at least 2 paragraphs long, which must explain your character’s history, appearance, personality, age and any other details you deem necessary: Harold Marrowind was

Born into a very wealthy family, as a boy he would run out to in the forest and climb trees and catch bugs, then at the age of 10 he was playing in the woods when he heard a noise about a mile away, he dismissed it as normal sounds of the forest, but then he heard it again, his curiosity took over and he cautiously ran to the source of the noise, as he got closer he saw that bandits where shooting prisioners, a women and her child were next, he quickly jumped out and try to stop them, but as he did it he knew it was a bad idea, as he jumped out 2 bandits grabbed him and tied him up, and he was lieing there trying to get away he heard the bandits talking and then he felt a heavy force to the back of his head and everything went dark

When he awoke he found he was bound and gagged and caged in an unknown place and there were people around him and other cages with humans and elves, as he waited for hours as it seemed, 2 men came out and unlocked his cage and pushed him to an Orc Male, he was then taken to an orc village to be worked as a slave, he was there for 25 years, under harsh conditions and fear of the next day, until one day he was working, the Orc that was supposed to be watching him had fallen asleep, he then noticed the Orc had a Scimitar on the side sheathed, so he crept up to the orc's side unsheathed the blade and quickly slew the orc, he then rushed out, and ran, he ran for what seemed like days, he was covered in blood from the previous battle and exausted, Fatigue, lack of food and water, soon took him over, he blacked out.

when he woke he was in a comfertable bed and he jumped up and look around, defensivly, expecting to be in the camp still, a buetiful elven women was sitting in a wooden chair, she looked at him with blue eyes and said in a calming and soothing voice "everything is okay, your safe, now go back to sleep you need your rest" Tired as he was, he refused and damaded that he know where he was, she calmly answered " your in a safe place, their is no need to worry, once you are well rested and fed i will tell you" He looked at her for a moment, and tried to run away, but not noticing how weak he was collapsed and blacked out again.

He woke again to sunlight, he knew becuase it was shining through the window, with were not covered, so someone watned him to be awake. When he get out of bed he notices, that hes wearing strange clothes that he didint otice before,he also notices that his strength has recovered tremendulasly, as he is walking, the elven woman hears him and quickly walks to him and ask him if he needs help, he awquardly says he's fine, even though his knees are killing him, he quickly hurries into a large room with a fire blazing, and wonderful furniture, he sits down and she asks if he would like anything to drink and and he would love some water, but he already owes this stranger to much, so as he is sitting there quietly thinking to himself, the woman breaks the silence and says "Im guesing you would like some information on where you are and why your here..."

He looks at her pleadingly "please"

She looks down and says " well as i was walking with my brother we saw you unconsious on the ground.."

Rembering what had happned made him wince

"My brother quickly carried you in here and i washed you, and cared for you every since, and your in Asulon"

He stares at her in disbeilef

"im in.. Asulon?"

"Yes..."

"Your not from around here are you?"

"I don't know where im from, i was taken from my town when i was young. My father never told me where we lived, then again i never saw my father or my mother much"

After a long pause of silence she finnaly asks

" would you please tell me what happened to you?"

He says waringly "are you ready to hear my tale?"

So he told her everything that he remebers.

Tears Swell up in her eyes as she speaks, theres a long silence that follows after hes done, but after a while he looks at her and asks

"could i know the name of my savior?"

"Ellysia" she says with a sad voice

"Well thank you Ellysia, is there no way to repay you?"

"No! i could have you do anything for me"

"Fair be it, where are my clothes?"

"They were covered in blood... I had to get rid of them"

He looks at her, clearly frustrated with her

"Have i done something wrong?" she asks

"No ut your making it hard to repay you for your favors."

"I don't need payment, it was good to have someone around the house i could care for, ever since Von left i have had no-one to look-after"

they soon stopped talking after Harolds stomach started to hurt terriably

As she gave him some herbs to eat, he looked up and asked where she learned all of this, she said she studied Herbalism when she was young she soon convinced him to stay at her house for a few months since he had no-where to go, they ended up getting married 4 years later and having a daughter 7 years later named Elizabeth, then 2 months later, Harrold was out walking in the forest he heard a peircing scream coming from the direction of his house, he immediatly turned and ran back, ran through the open door, and checked in elizabeths room, she was gone, he ran and checked the bedroom and anger, horror, and grief immediatly struck him as he saw that Ellysia and elizbeth were both dead stabbed with a bronze dagger, he dropped to his knees and screamed at the top of his lungs, h started to sob uncontrollablaly, and ever since that day hes been searching for the killer

What are your characters ambitions?: The need for revenge and reconciliation burns him on with his search, though asulon Please provide an in-game screenshot of your skin here: Still making it

Is there anything else you would like to say about your character: Yes he is a 46 year-old traveler, he never leaves the house withough his walking stick and map, he is 5.9, he is very determend to find the awnser, nothing gets in his way

Open-Response-Questions

Each question here must be answered with a minimum of one full paragraph, and detail the scene you are given in the way it would happen in role-play. These questions should be answered in first person. Be detailed, not short.

Upon entering the Mighty Human City of Arethor, you come across a shop-keeper calling out to sell his wares to passers-by. The shopkeeper is not a Human, he is a poor dwarf looking to make a living in a new city. What is your response? He silently walks pass and continues to talk to the leader of Arethor

You’re wandering the Oren Road late at night, when a large Orc begins to threaten a nearby dwarf. There is no help nearby, and the situation looks like it will escalate into violence soon, what does your character do? He Comes between both of them and asks the directions to the Cloud Temple, they both stop puzzled and points north, he continues on his way and leaves them bickering

Whilst walking down the road to Malinor, you stumble upon an old man. His walking stick , looks weak and frail, and just as you are about to ask something, the stick breaks, and the man falls to the ground. As he falls down, a bag of Minas falls to the ground, and splits open. As you watch the multiple coins spill out, you peer down at the defenseless man. What does your character do?: HE quickly helps him up and grabs the empty bag in his pocket and puts all the loose minas in, and asks him if hes okay and then asks his question

Note: This took alot of time and effort please don't be harsh and i would like to improve on my RP skills in Lord of the craft, since there always room for improvment, thanks!

[everblue2er101 906]

Your application has been...

Denied.

Need to post on the Minecraft Forums before you can be accepted.

Cannot kill the Orc in the bio without a Villain Application. Although I appreciate the length and detail in it, characters with tragic backstories are pretty cliché.

Need a skin screenshot. See THIS GUIDE for more information.

Expand on all Open Response Questions. They should read like small stories, with action and dialogue.

There are numerous spelling, capitalization and punctuation errors.

The bio is extremely impressive, but other areas of the application could use improvement. I look forward to your next attempt.

Wait at least 24 hours after this post to reapply. If you have any questions feel free to send me a PM.