[Denied][D] Theoden's Application

[Theoden 1]

Out-Of-Character Details

Minecraft Account Name:tas1147How old are you?:13Time-Zone/Country of Residence:Central Time, U.S.A.Do you have a good grip on English grammar and the English language?:YesHave you had any previous experience in roleplaying?:I have had a fair amount of role-playing experience only some with minecraft though.Have you read and understood and agree to the rules?:YesHow did you hear about the Lord of the Craft?:I was trying to find a nice role-playing server that added a bit of medieval and fantasy in it since MassiveCraft wasn't doing the job.Link any previous applications you have made to the Lord of the Craft:Have you posted this application on Minecraft Forum? If not, post it here: http://www.minecraftforum.net/topic/832121-the-lord-of-the-craft-enter-the-world-of-asulon-o-f-f-i-c-i-a-l-l-y-t-h-e-n-o-1-r-p-s-e-r-v-e-r-100-unique-gameplay/! :Yes

Definitions

In your own words, define what the act of roleplaying is:Role-playing is when you act as if you were someone else either a fiction or non-fiction character.

In your own words, define what the act of meta-gaming is:Meta-gaming is when you add your experience and skills into a guy in a game your playing and add that knowledge that he doesn't know to him.In your own words, define what the act of power-emoting is:Power-emoting is when a character physically or emotionally does something to another character like Player 1 killed Player 3 with AIR

In-Character Details

Character Name:TheodenCharacter Race:Human(Male)Character biography - Make this at least 2 paragraphs long, which must explain your character’s history, appearance, personality, age and any other details you deem necessary: Théoden was the only son of King Thengel and Morwen of Lossarnach (a region of Gondor). He was the second-born of five children, and the only boy. Théoden was closest to his youngest sister, Théodwyn. He was born in Gondor, where his family lived until Thengel became king of Rohan.

He became king after the death of his father. Théodwyn lived with him in Edoras. He married Elfhild, but she died giving birth to their son, Théodred. After Théodwyn and her husband Éomund also died, he adopted their children, Éomer and Éowyn.

In his prime, Théoden was a strong and vital king, highly respected by his subjects. As with other Men of the Riddermark, Théoden was a skilled horseman.

He acted as the First Marshal of the Mark after the death of Éomund, who had filled that position; as First Marshal he commanded the Muster of Edoras (Théodred and Éomer were respectively the Second and Third Marshal). His sword was called Herugrim. During his youth he spent time learning with the finest teachers and learned to be a king from some of the lords of Gondar. After he was done with school he set off on an adventure to the North past where any regular man would go. This is where he met some dwarven kings and where he found the rangers. But he still wasn't satisfied so this time he went South but his father warned him not to go too far South. But he didn't follow his father's orders and went so far south that he could see the black gates and when he went to leave he was taken by nearby orcs into Mordor but right at the gates was some of the warriors of Gondor that had been their because his father anticipated him going to Mordor and the Gondor soldiers slew the orcs and brought him back to Gondor but Theoden always had a deep hatred of Mordor and orcs after that. And now Theoden is a 45 year old king and like all men of Rohan has blond hair, blue eyes, and is slightly tanned. Theoden now is a wise king who is sensitive to his people and fierce to his enemies. He won't plan against you unless you dealt the first punch and is a hardy man able to withstand whatever is thrown at him.What are your characters ambitions?:My characters ambition is to keep his kingdom healthy, live through the war, keep his daughter safe, and find an heir to his throne.Please provide an in-game screenshot of your skin here:Is there anything else you would like to say about your character:My character will just as easily kill you as he would befriend you.

Open-Response-Questions

Each question here must be answered with a minimum of one full paragraph, and detail the scene you are given in the way it would happen in roleplay. These questions should be answered in first person. Be detailed, not short.

Upon entering the Mighty Human City of Arethor, you come across a shop-keeper calling out to sell his wares to passers-by. The shopkeeper is not a Human, he is a poor dwarf looking to make a living in a new city. What is your response?I would see what the poor dwarf was doing and would buy something from him even if I didn't like or need it then give him a handsome tip and then I would ask him if he needed a more stable job as a blacksmith or miner. Race isn't really important to my character but he isn't fond of orcs due to past experience.You’re wandering the Oren Road late at night, when a large Orc begins to threaten a nearby dwarf. There is no help nearby, and the situation looks like it will escalate into violence soon, what does your character do?I would calmly and boldly walk up to them and ask them what the problem was and if they both gave a credible answer to their arguement I would leave them alone but if one of them said they did it for fun or they're planning murder or something I would ask the other one to come up to my house then have my guards go fetch the other and have them interrogate him and if he was in the wrong depending on how bad his answer is I would have him be killed or thrown in my jail.Whilst walking down the road to Malinor, you stumble upon an old man. His walking stick , looks weak and frail, and just as you are about to ask something, the stick breaks, and the man falls to the ground. As he falls down, a bag of Minas falls to the ground, and splits open. As you watch the multiple coins spill out, you peer down at the defenceless man. What does your character do?: My character knows what is right and what is wrong he would help the man up and fill his coin bag back up but would probably be a little weary of the old man and start to ask some questions like if you have all these Minas's why don't you have a new walking stick and generic ones like where you headed and would then proceed to walk the man to the nearest tree snap off a desent sized brach and give it to him as a new walking stick.

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Denied.

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Add a Meta-Gaming example of your own creation and expand on the Power-Emoting definition.

Human characters should have last names.

This is not a Lord of the Rings server, please remove all references to it. Cannot apply as royalty. Incorporate some server lore to the bio, which can be found on the forums and wiki.

Expand on all Open Response Questions slightly. They should read as small stories, with action and dialogue.

Broken formatting. Copy and paste the application format exactly as it is without changing anything. It's difficult to read all smushed up together the way it is.

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