[Denied]Application - Kelly Quinn

[KellyQuinn 7]

Out-Of-Character Details

Minecraft Account Name: KellyQuinn

How old are you?: Sixteen

Time-Zone/Country of Residence: -6

Do you have a good grip on English grammar and the English language?: Yes

Have you had any previous experience in roleplaying?: Yes

Have you read and understood and agree to the rules?: Yes

How did you hear about the Lord of the Craft?: Minecraft Forums

Link any previous applications you have made to the Lord of the Craft:

Have you posted this application on Minecraft Forum? If not, post it here: http://www.minecraftforum.net/topic/832121-the-lord-of-the-craft-enter-the-world-of-asulon-o-f-f-i-c-i-a-l-l-y-t-h-e-n-o-1-r-p-s-e-r-v-e-r-100-unique-gameplay/! :

Definitions

In your own words, define what the act of roleplaying is: Acting like someone else

In your own words, define what the act of meta-gaming is: Using OOC info in IC convo's

In your own words, define what the act of power-emoting is: Forcing a fate on someone else

In-Character Details

Character Name: Kelly Quinn

Character Race: Half Elf, Half Human.

Character biography - Make this at least 2 paragraphs long, which must explain your character’s history, appearance, personality, age and any other details you deem necessary:

Kelly's life is full of loss, yet she remains strong and perseveres through continuous hardships. Kelly was born 18 years ago. Her father loved her very much, being as though she was his last child. He gave her all of his attention, giving her gifts and love. A year after her birth, her father died of cancer. Kelly had three siblings. The oldest, Shane, the second oldest, Brett, and her sister, Kerry. They all despised her for getting all the love and attention while they were all but ignored. They all moved out of the house and Kelly's mother was left alone to take care of her. Her mother, having had four children, was getting pretty old and hit her midlife crisis. She wasn't around much through Kelly's childhood and always put her at a babysitter's house. Never feeling needed/wanted as a kid, Kelly grew up to be more of a follower in school and in life. On her 18th birthday she ran away from home while her mother was at work, and set out to make something of herself.

Kelly is now 18 years old, blonde hair, green eyes, tries to make everyone happy, is tough in the sense that she doesn't want anyone to see weakness in her.

What are your characters ambitions?: To become someone of importance

Please provide an in-game screenshot of your skin here:

Is there anything else you would like to say about your character: Nope

Open-Response-Questions

Each question here must be answered with a minimum of one full paragraph, and detail the scene you are given in the way it would happen in roleplay. These questions should be answered in first person. Be detailed, not short.

Upon entering the Mighty Human City of Arethor, you come across a shop-keeper calling out to sell his wares to passers-by. The shopkeeper is not a Human, he is a poor dwarf looking to make a living in a new city. What is your response?

I would walk up to the dwarf, asking what is for sale. He looks up suprised that someone actually is interested in his wares. "Bread, melons, and some fish, m'lady." "I'll buy some fish and bread. How much for 3 of each?" I reply, smiling. "18 coins," he says quietly, as if I'm going to take the food and run. "Here is 21 coins. Have a good day, sir." And i walk off, feeling good for how i've helped the poor dwarf.

You’re wandering the Oren Road late at night, when a large Orc begins to threaten a nearby dwarf. There is no help nearby, and the situation looks like it will escalate into violence soon, what does your character do?

I stop dead in my tracks, and slowly slink over behind a nearby tree to hide and listen. "Listen 'ere buddie. I knows you got da coins alright? Jus' hand 'em over, and we don't gotsta get swingy okie?" The dwarf starts shaking, paralyzed. "Lets get wiff da move on dwarfie. I dun got much time." "I... I swear i'm broke!" He pulls out his pockets to show the ork he's telling the truth. "Well den lets see if you gots some shinies hidden some wer." The Orc swings his giant club, and knocks the dwarf on his back. as he gets ready to pummel him more, I quickly draw my bow, and shoot him in the temple. Once the Orc has fallen, I run over to the dwarf, and help him up.

Whilst walking down the road to Malinor, you stumble upon an old man. His walking stick , looks weak and frail, and just as you are about to ask something, the stick breaks, and the man falls to the ground. As he falls down, a bag of Minas falls to the ground, and splits open. As you watch the multiple coins spill out, you peer down at the defenceless man. What does your character do?:

I rush over to him and help him up, then collect his coins and put them back in the bag. As I hand over the bag to him, he says "No, no, no. You helped me while i was in dire need, who knows how long I could've been down there on the ground. You should keep those coins, as a reward." I look at him, shocked. "I couldn't possibly take all these coins. Surely you were heading to town to put them in the bank, or possibly buy something." "You are right, I was taking them to the bank. But I'm old with no family. I will die soon, and I'd rather you have them than anyone else." "Well... Well thank you! Thank you very much, and good morrow."

[steelersfan1221 300]

Denied.

Please expand on your three definitions a bit.

Your biography isn't currently lore abiding. An 18 year old elf is the equivalent of a 2 year old human. You must change that. Also, you need to implement some server lore into your biography. Where was your character born? Where does she live? Things like that.

Your ORQs are well done, but you aren't supposed to take the roles of the characters in the ORQs, you are supposed to give your character's response.

Please wait 24 hours to re-apply.

PM me if you have any further concerns.

[steelersfan1221 300]

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