[Denied]Darez14's Application

[Darez 9]

Minecraft Account Name: Darez14

How old are you?: 16

Time-Zone/Country of Residence: UK, GMT

Do you have a good grip on English grammar and the English language?: Yes, I do.

Have you had any previous experience in roleplaying?: Yes, I have been on a Strictly moderated Assassins Creed Server and been accepted.

Have you read and understood and agree to the rules?: I have and I understand them thouroughly.

How did you hear about the Lord of the Craft?: Minestatus.

Link any previous applications you have made to the Lord of the Craft: I've never applied before.

Have you posted this application on Minecraft Forum? If not, post it here: http://www.minecraft...nique-gameplay/! :

Definitions

In your own words, define what the act of roleplaying is: Acting and/or playing out the role of a character. In this case, I am acting as my character in a Role Play realm.

In your own words, define what the act of meta-gaming is: The use of knowledge that was not yet obtained by the character (OOC knowledge).

In your own words, define what the act of power-emoting is: Forcing an action on another player against their will, or performing an extravagant, implausible feat which may make the other player emotive.

In-Character Details

Character Name: Elros Elanessë

Character Race: Elven

Character biography - Make this at least 2 paragraphs long, which must explain your character’s history, appearance, personality, age and any other details you deem necessary: Elros is a hardy Elf. He takes after his father when it comes to his chivalrous manner, and Elros can be a tad obnoxious at times. Elros is an honorable, well-spoken, calm, and sometimes expressionless. Despite his seemingly cold attitude, he fair, and sometimes enjoys himself when talking to others close to him. Most of the time, Elros also lets his chores come first before his emotions.

When Elros was a child, his father, who was a soldier in the Holy Elven army, was the only man he trusted. He would teach Elros how to wield a bow and a light shield, how to read ancient languages and how to be a fine noble elf. Elros would continue to hone these skills daily, his thoughts of becoming a noble flooding his dreams. Elros's mother was also a very influential elf in his life. She taught him how to be kind and considerate to others and nature. She supported him, and their relationship was very close, indeed. Elros's father retired when Elros was a young elven student, and became a scholar, but nonetheless kept teaching Elros. Years later, Elros's father took up his weapons again, for a battle to which to protect his family. Afterthat, the wealth within the Kingdom was lacking so he applied to be a Mercenary. He was hired into a large group escorting a Reich Princess to some city distant from their kingdom. All that returned home though was his battered armor. Elros and his mother were to grieve for an age, but they supported each other through the horror. This event only increased Elros's desire to make a name for his self for his father and for the name of his kingdom. Elros is now 24, and has decided to attempt to enlist to the Holy Elven army. He hopes for a squire position, and hopes deeply that the gods will give him his right to live up to his fathers Expectations.

What are your characters ambitions?: To become a Squire of the Holy Elven Army, to travel the realm andfind new allies to which he can Befriend.

Please provide an in-game screenshot of your skin here:

http://www.minecraftskins.com/skin/589154/elven-warrior/

Sorry this is not In-game but i edited the skin a little to show a weapon on the belt, and i do not have anywhere to upload the image to, at the moment.

Is there anything else you would like to say about your character: Although his age he is much more experienced than a normal squire and wishes this will further his cause to become one at an elder age.

Open-Response-Questions

Each question here must be answered with a minimum of one full paragraph, and detail the scene you are given in the way it would happen in roleplay. These questions should be answered in first person. Be detailed, not short.

Upon entering the Mighty Human City of Arethor, you come across a shop-keeper calling out to sell his wares to passers-by. The shopkeeper is not a Human, he is a poor dwarf looking to make a living in a new city. What is your response?

I would approach the dwarf and take a look at his wares, After this I may purchase soe of wares as them seem of a fine quality and then compliment him and wish him good morrow for the future.

Role Play:

Elros: Good day my Dwarven Friend

Dwarf: the times are tough. Please take a look at my ware, I promise that they will fit your High Standards, Dear elf.

Elros: I hope so. -picks up one of the dwarf's wares- this is very fine work, sir?. May I ask your Name?

You’re wandering the Oren Road late at night, when a large Orc begins to threaten a nearby dwarf. There is no help nearby, and the situation looks like it will escalate into violence soon, what does your character do?

Guessing i am in a Fit state, I would approach the two, asking for them both to cool down and move along. If after it becomes escalated i would have no choice but to side with the dwarf in combat, although this is be better avoided though.

Role Play:

Orc: -pulls out his weapon in rage- "I shall now dice the both of you!"

Elros: -pulls out his finely crafted blade in response- "I warn you, leave or I will have no choice but to duel you."

Whilst walking down the road to Malinor, you stumble upon an old man. His walking stick , looks weak and frail, and just as you are about to ask something, the stick breaks, and the man falls to the ground. As he falls down, a bag of Minas falls to the ground, and splits open. As you watch the multiple coins spill out, you peer down at the defenceless man. What does your character do?:

I would near enough certainly help the man up, asking him if he was Alright. As I help the old man regain his balance, I would then proceed to pick up his Minas and hand it to him, in a piece of cloth form the edging of my coat. I then ask where the man is heading, and if he is travelling to a place with a similar direction as I am, then I would travel with him helping the poor man out. If he were going another way ,and if my presence in Malinor wasn't compulsory, I would offer to escort him to the nearest town, where he could get himself a new cane.

Role Play:

Elros: Old Man are you ok?

Old Man: Yes, young man i am alright, Stupid Cane broke again!

Elros: Do not worry, good sir, I am glad to help. You stay here i will collect your Minas and return them.

Old Man: I am heading to Oren, to visit my niece. I'm afraid I may take a while though, would you mind escorting me there?

Elros: Sure i am heading that way, My name is Elros and it is a pleasure to meet you.

[Queen of Aegis 174]

- Biography lacks server lore ( think of cities, locations, nation names)

- A 24 year old elf is still a child, it would be unlikely for you to be a squire at that age or even be able to handle a sword

- All ORQ's are too short

- In the ORQ's try to make it somewhat a story that you see from your perspective and not a small story with lines under it. think of something as: As he wanders the streets of Arethor he spots the dwarf, "I wonder if he has anything for sale" he thinks

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[Queen of Aegis 174]

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