[Denied]Application || Argonhawk

[ArgonHawk 0]

Out-Of-Character Details

Minecraft Account Name:ArgonHawk

How old are you?:15

Time-Zone/Country of Residence:+02:00

Do you have a good grip on English grammar and the English language?:Yes

Have you had any previous experience in roleplaying?:I've played RP in GTA SA if it considered

Have you read and understood and agree to the rules?:Yes

How did you hear about the Lord of the Craft?:Planetminecraft website

Link any previous applications you have made to the Lord of the Craft:I didn't make any...

Have you posted this application on Minecraft Forum? If not, post it here: http://www.minecraftforum.net/topic/832121-the-lord-of-the-craft-enter-the-world-of-asulon-o-f-f-i-c-i-a-l-l-y-t-h-e-n-o-1-r-p-s-e-r-v-e-r-100-unique-gameplay/! :

Definitions

In your own words, define what the act of roleplaying is:You got IC and OOC, In character and out of character, IC is when you act like you character should act,if you're an orc so you supposed to be mean an evil, behave like you character kind.

In your own words, define what the act of meta-gaming is:Mixing between IC and OOC' IC'ly you shouldn't know someone's name just because its "flying" above his head, you should ask him and only he can tell you.

In your own words, define what the act of power-emoting is:To do impossible things, like if you do "/me takes a huge stone and break it to 2 pieces just using his pinky" so its Power-emoting

In-Character Details

Character Name: Aragorn(If it unoccupied)

Character Race:Man

Character biography - Make this at least 2 paragraphs long, which must explain your character’s history, appearance, personality, age and any other details you deem necessary: Aragorn, born in Rohan, to poor parents, for since he remembered himself, he was like the most to be a great hero-rider, he was always like to build himself a wooden swords and shield, He pretends he's fighting orcs and the evil force,

when he reached age 18 he joined the Rohan riders and swear to fight every enemy that will stand against him.

Aragorn was always polite but aggressive, he was very loyal, When the orcs invaded his kingdom both of his parents died, from that day he swear to do anything he could to stop them

What are your characters ambitions?:To kill as many orcs that he can kill

Please provide an in-game screenshot of your skin here:

Is there anything else you would like to say about your character:He is cool and he like to join that server (So do I...)

Open-Response-Questions

Each question here must be answered with a minimum of one full paragraph, and detail the scene you are given in the way it would happen in roleplay. These questions should be answered in first person. Be detailed, not short.

Upon entering the Mighty Human City of Arethor, you come across a shop-keeper calling out to sell his wares to passers-by. The shopkeeper is not a Human, he is a poor dwarf looking to make a living in a new city. What is your response? ME:Hello dwarfy, what you got there?, Dwarf: Come and see! me: Ummm...that shield looks nice, can i test it? Dwarf: Sure! ME:(act)Takes the shield and touch it, ME: That seems like a great shield, i'll buy it!. Dwarf:20 minas please, me: Good day Sir

You’re wandering the Oren Road late at night, when a large Orc begins to threaten a nearby dwarf. There is no help nearby, and the situation looks like it will escalate into violence soon, what does your character do? ME: Hey Orc !! Look here! Orc: What !? who you think you talking to !? ME: leave this dwarf alone ugly face! Orc:(act)moves toward to me, ME:(act) Start to fight the Orc and beat his ass out

Whilst walking down the road to Malinor, you stumble upon an old man. His walking stick , looks weak and frail, and just as you are about to ask something, the stick breaks, and the man falls to the ground. As he falls down, a bag of Minas falls to the ground, and splits open. As you watch the multiple coins spill out, you peer down at the defenceless man. What does your character do?:ME:(act)Helping the man to stand up and pick the Minas and puts it on the man's pocket, He:Thanks you young man...have a nice day, please take 3 Minas for helping me. ME: No thanks, a guy like you need it more then me. Good Bye.

HOPE YOU WILL ACCEPT ME !! I WILL DO ANYTHING TO GET INTO THIS SERVER !!

[Thu'um 530]

Denied.

You may reapply after a period of 24 hours.

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Verdict/Justification:

Your Application's Format is slightly difficult to read, being all one color.

Your Application Lacks Effort/Detail.

You understand the two concepts "IC" and "OOC", but you have a few errors in the role-playing definition:

In your own words, define what the act of roleplaying is:You got IC and OOC, In character and out of character, IC is when you act like you character should act,if you're an orc so you supposed to be mean an evil, behave like you character kind.

Orcs do not have to be evil, they are cursed with bloodlust but this does not make them evil.

Character Race:Man

There are four races: Orc, Dwarf, Human, and Elf.

I would assume your character would be human, should you reapply, I advise you change it to human. :P

Your Biography is Short, Vague, and does not meet the minimum requirements.

Also, it does not have any implementation of our lore -- your biography is your most important part of your application in essence, I would advise you develop it further and explain your character's actions and such.

Your Biography is cliche.

What are your characters ambitions?:To kill as many orcs that he can kill

This would be a villainous trait, you cannot have anything Villainous in your application. You may (After being Accepted and Implemented for 2 WEEKS) apply for a Villain Application. However, this ambition is rather powergamey and unjustified.

Your skin is not of the RP Standard, in Lord of the Craft, we do not have such suits or sunglasses - at times you could classify the server medieval-esque, such accessories would not be in existence, if in existence, undeveloped or fabricated.

Your Open Response Questions are lacking and could use some improvement.

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Do not get discouraged, with perseverance you can get it!

You may reapply after a period of 24 hours.

Salutations,

Thu'um.

[Thu'um 530]

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