[Denied][D] Williamsrocks55's Application

[williamsrocks55 0]

Out-Of-Character Details

Minecraft Account Name: Williamsrocks55

How old are you?:14

Time-Zone/Country of Residence:Mountain Standard Time, United States of America

Do you have a good grip on English grammar and the English language?:Yes

Have you had any previous experience in roleplaying?:None

Have you read and understood and agree to the rules?:Yes

How did you hear about the Lord of the Craft?:I heard about Lord of the Craft form a friend.

Link any previous applications you have made to the Lord of the Craft:None

Have you posted this application on Minecraft Forum? If not, post it here: http://www.minecraftforum.net/topic/832121-the-lord-of-the-craft-enter-the-world-of-asulon-o-f-f-i-c-i-a-l-l-y-t-h-e-n-o-1-r-p-s-e-r-v-e-r-100-unique-gameplay/! :

Definitions

In your own words, define what the act of roleplaying is:In my eyes, roleplaying is a way to step out of my shoes and enter another pair. It is a way for me to become somebody else, which is why I enjoy it.

In your own words, define what the act of meta-gaming is:Meta-gaming is something that takes the fun out of roleplaying. Meta-gaming in my own words would be defined as acting out of character.

In your own words, define what the act of power-emoting is:In every game, there is a power-emoting player. There's always that guy that is bloodthirsty, and can suck the fun right out of your game. In my eyes, power-emoting is when one player take an immediate act against another.

In-Character Details

Character Name:Iaewon Grisham

Character Race:Elf

Character biography - Make this at least 2 paragraphs long, which must explain your character’s history, appearance, personality, age and any other details you deem necessary:

(Indent) My name is Iaewon Grisham. I am 27 years old, and alone. At a young age, my parents became obsessed with a group of high elves leaving me in charge of my two siblings. From taking charge of every fathomable aspect of my life at a young age, I have learned to keep my true personality and emotions hidden, even around friends, which can be a problem sometimes because of my rare short brown hair. As my siblings get older, I plan on leaving the house to adventure on my own.

(Indent) Just recently, I met a group of elves about my age while practicing my archery skills. I stopped to talk to them and learned that they have interests similar to mine. To my surprise, they too are planning on leaving our group. Since I met them, I've been teaching my siblings how to act in the real world, on top of practicing archery with my small group of friends. At the moment, my siblings are as ready as they ever will be, and my friends are at the verge of leaving.

What are your characters ambitions?:Iaewon would like to become an adventurer, and become a high class archer. When he grows old, he'd like to run an archery school to teach new elves how to shoot.

Please provide an in-game screenshot of your skin here:http://i.imgur.com/VuOKx.jpg

Is there anything else you would like to say about your character:No thank you.

Open-Response-Questions

Each question here must be answered with a minimum of one full paragraph, and detail the scene you are given in the way it would happen in roleplay. These questions should be answered in first person. Be detailed, not short.

Upon entering the Mighty Human City of Arethor, you come across a shop-keeper calling out to sell his wares to passers-by. The shopkeeper is not a Human, he is a poor dwarf looking to make a living in a new city. What is your response?

(Indent) From recently leaving my old home, I am in a good mood, and walk over to the shop keeper. I ask to see if he has any arrows, for my stock needs to be replenished. He does have a few arrows, and I buy them from him. After the sale, I ask him if he knows of any place I could stay for the night and if there are any quests available in town. I thank the shopkeeper for his services, and tell him that I'll try and recommend friends.

You’re wandering the Oren Road late at night, when a large Orc begins to threaten a nearby dwarf. There is no help nearby, and the situation looks like it will escalate into violence soon, what does your character do?

(Indent)I have been a victim of torment back home because of my abnormal hair. I really do feel for this dwarf, and I decide to help him. Quietly, I get my bow out and notch an arrow on the string. I call to the Orc to stand perfectly still. When the orc finally complies, I tell him to leave the scene as quickly as possible, or I will be forced to injure him.

Whilst walking down the road to Malinor, you stumble upon an old man. His walking stick , looks weak and frail, and just as you are about to ask something, the stick breaks, and the man falls to the ground. As he falls down, a bag of Minas falls to the ground, and splits open. As you watch the multiple coins spill out, you peer down at the defenceless man. What does your character do?:

(Indent) This old man reminds me of my father. Though I would really like to take the man's money and walk, I pick up the man's coins and fix the bag. After this, I let the man borrow my bow as a walking stick to bring him back to his home. I do all of this without saying a word, and leave the man at his home saying a simple, "You're welcome."

[everblue2er101 906]

Your application has been...

Denied.

Incorrect Meta-Gaming definition, clarify Power-Emoting. Both need definitions. You can find more information on the forums and wiki, but make sure to use your own words.

Please add some server lore to the bio, such as dates, events or holidays. I like the idea of a character who wants to open an archery school.

Add dialogue to the first two Open Response Questions.

An excellent first attempt.

Wait at least 24 hours after this post to reapply. If you have any questions feel free to send me a PM.

[LeRenardNoir 413]

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