[Denied]Roblitz91's Application

[roblitz91 0]

Out-Of-Character Details

Minecraft Account Name: roblitz91

How old are you?: 13

Time-Zone/Country of Residence: UTC -6:00 Central Time Zone United States

Do you have a good grip on English grammar and the English language?: Of course!

Have you had any previous experience in roleplaying?: Yes, to an extent. I really enjoy rping so Im trying to find really good RP servers.

Have you read and understood and agree to the rules?: Yes

How did you hear about the Lord of the Craft?: I was scrolling through the Minecraft Forums server list

Link any previous applications you have made to the Lord of the Craft: None

Have you posted this application on Minecraft Forum? If not, post it here: Yes

Definitions

In your own words, define what the act of roleplaying is: Acting as a character, usually from fantasy, outside of yourself

In your own words, define what the act of meta-gaming is: A players use of assumed characteristics of a game

In your own words, define what the act of power-emoting is: The act of forcing a result on a player with or without their consent

In-Character Details

Character Name: Dante

Character Race: Elf

Character biography - Make this at least 2 paragraphs long, which must explain your character’s history, appearance, personality, age and any other details you deem necessary: From a young age, Dante was raised as an elf, and has been taught the values of weapons and virtue. The one thing that has always been taught to him to remember was that virtue and loyalty were the two most important qualities. As he grew older, and the years passed by, he honed his swordsmanship and archery, becoming a master with all types of weapons, most prominently the dagger and longbow. He always preferred to work in the dark, yet he never strayed from the virtuous path. He decided to become an assassin by his 18th birthday, and sought to change the outlook people have on assassins. 2 years have passed since he chose this path, and his opinions have never changed.

What are your characters ambitions? To change the outlook the common people have on assassins and earn a good bit of money doing it.:

Please provide an in-game screenshot of your skin here: Skin_Image

Is there anything else you would like to say about your character: Nothing really, besides he's a sort of holy assassin.

Open-Response-Questions

Each question here must be answered with a minimum of one full paragraph, and detail the scene you are given in the way it would happen in roleplay. These questions should be answered in first person. Be detailed, not short.

Upon entering the Mighty Human City of Arethor, you come across a shop-keeper calling out to sell his wares to passers-by. The shopkeeper is not a Human, he is a poor dwarf looking to make a living in a new city. What is your response? Give him some spare coins to help him on his way

You’re wandering the Oren Road late at night, when a large Orc begins to threaten a nearby dwarf. There is no help nearby, and the situation looks like it will escalate into violence soon, what does your character do? Attack the Orc unarmed as to not kill it (But I will kill the Orc if need be), then help the dwarf it was threatening.

Whilst walking down the road to Malinor, you stumble upon an old man. His walking stick , looks weak and frail, and just as you are about to ask something, the stick breaks, and the man falls to the ground. As he falls down, a bag of Minas falls to the ground, and splits open. As you watch the multiple coins spill out, you peer down at the defenseless man. What does your character do?: Pick up his coins, put it back in his bag, then I help him up and hand him his coins.

[Dante 206]

Denied.

I liked your definitions, but a few parts of your app were unfortunately lacking or broke the given rules.

First off, you can't play an assassin as that would require a villain application, which you may apply for after playing a week after your server application was accepted. A proper non-villainous route for your character will be necessary in completing your application. Also, I found your biography was a bit skimpy. Include your character's appearance, rounded personality, and maybe flesh out a bit of your past a bit more as well.

Also, your ORQ's needed a bit more love. Take the time to properly write out the situation, instead of simply stating what your character would do. Draw out emotes, dialogue, and definitely more detail. Another bit that I'd like you to fix up on is the fact that your character took down a grown orc. Elves are agile and accurate, but besting these behemoths definately are not something to be taken lightly. Consider this before writing your next app.

If you need anything, feel free to message me. Please wait 24 hours before re applying.

[Dante 206]

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