[Denied]Abdul_65's Application

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Out-Of-Character Details

Minecraft Account Name:Abdul_65

How old are you?:13

Time-Zone/Country of Residence:Eastern Standard Time(EST)/Canada

Do you have a good grip on English grammar and the English language?:Yes

Have you had any previous experience in roleplaying?:No, I have never roleplayed

Have you read and understood and agree to the rules?:Yes I have

How did you hear about the Lord of the Craft?:I was looking for a roleplay server on Minestatus

Link any previous applications you have made to the Lord of the Craft:This is my first application

Have you posted this application on Minecraft Forum? If not, post it here: http://www.minecraftforum.net/topic/832121-the-lord-of-the-craft-enter-the-world-of-asulon-o-f-f-i-c-i-a-l-l-y-t-h-e-n-o-1-r-p-s-e-r-v-e-r-100-unique-gameplay/! :

Definitions

In your own words, define what the act of roleplaying is:Roleplaying is taking the role of a person/character other than yourself

In your own words, define what the act of meta-gaming is:Meta-Gaming is when you use information that the character you are roleplaying doesn't know

In your own words, define what the act of power-emoting is:Power-Emoting is when you perform an acction without allowing the other character to respond, like for example entering into PVP without the other players consent

In-Character Details

Character Name:Thorad Oakwood

Character Race:Forest Dwarf

Character biography - Make this at least 2 paragraphs long, which must explain your character’s history, appearance, personality, age and any other details you deem necessary:

I grew up in the forest with my mother who works the farm and my father who is a great miner. One day my father didn't come home. My mother and I went to the cave where my father usually mines, as we entered the cave we saw a small tunnel that looked recently digged. We entered the tunnel which led to a dark, large room that contains a chest filled with diamonds and gold, as we looked around the room, we saw our dad's dead body lying in the corner of the room in a crater, my dad smelled of gunpowder. It must have been an explosion that killed him, a Creeper. My mom took me home that day and as the years passed, she tought me how to be a great farmer while she sold all the diamond and gold and learnt how to become a miner where she later on perished.

I made it a vow to myself to become the best farmer like my mother once was. I am planning to open up a farm and sell my crops, livestock, and my fish to the entire country of Asulon.

What are your characters ambitions?: My ambition is to become the best farmer and fisher in Asulon.

Please provide an in-game screenshot of your skin here:

Is there anything else you would like to say about your character:My character is 20 years old. He is friendly but he is easily angered.

Open-Response-Questions

Each question here must be answered with a minimum of one full paragraph, and detail the scene you are given in the way it would happen in roleplay. These questions should be answered in first person. Be detailed, not short.

Upon entering the Mighty Human City of Arethor, you come across a shop-keeper calling out to sell his wares to passers-by. The shopkeeper is not a Human, he is a poor dwarf looking to make a living in a new city. What is your response? As I was entering the City of Arethror, I noticed a poor dwarf selling his goods outside of town. I approached the dwarf and asked him why he was not selling his goods inside of town. It turned out he didn't have enough money to start a buisness, I gave him a small donation and helped him start out a small buisness inside of Arethror.

You’re wandering the Oren Road late at night, when a large Orc begins to threaten a nearby dwarf. There is no help nearby, and the situation looks like it will escalate into violence soon, what does your character do?As I watched the Orc threaten the Dwarf, I got fed up and went to report it to the gaurds, as I came back to the scene, I found that the argument has esculated into violence, I quickly run and tackle the orc with the gaurds. The orc got furious and pulled out his blade and killed the Dwarf and stabbed me in the chest. He quickly ran away from the guards and escaped while I slowly bled.

Whilst walking down the road to Malinor, you stumble upon an old man. His walking stick , looks weak and frail, and just as you are about to ask something, the stick breaks, and the man falls to the ground. As he falls down, a bag of Minas falls to the ground, and splits open. As you watch the multiple coins spill out, you peer down at the defenceless man. What does your character do?:As I was walking down the road to Malinor, I noticed and old man, just as I was about to ask him for diections, his walking stick breaks and the old man falls. Just as I was about to help him up, I noticed a bag of gold that split open. I quickly draww my sword and tell the old man that if he calls the guards he will die. I quickly collect the Minas and run as fast as I can just as he was calling the guards.

[Queen of Aegis 174]

- You did not post on the minecraft forums

- power-emoting defenitions is wrong

- Biography is too short

- Your skin isn't very pretty and doesn't look like a dwarf

- ORQ's lack dialog and are too short

- You are not allowed to commit villainous crimes without an accepted villain application

You may reapply in 24 hours after this post

IF you have any questions feel free to PM me

~BoomBox~

[Queen of Aegis 174]

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