[Denied]Darkynighty's First Application

[darkynighty 0]

Out-Of-Character Details

Minecraft Account Name: darkynighty

How old are you?: 13

Time-Zone/Country of Residence: West Coast

Do you have a good grip on English grammar and the English language?: Yes

Have you had any previous experience in roleplaying?: I have played on some light roleplay servers but found it lacking in rp.

Have you read and understood and agree to the rules?: Yes

How did you hear about the Lord of the Craft?: Through a video on Youtube.

Link any previous applications you have made to the Lord of the Craft:

Have you posted this application on Minecraft Forum? If not, post it here: http://www.minecraftforum.net/topic/832121-the-lord-of-the-craft-enter-the-world-of-asulon-o-f-f-i-c-i-a-l-l-y-t-h-e-n-o-1-r-p-s-e-r-v-e-r-100-unique-gameplay/! : Yes

Definitions

In your own words, define what the act of roleplaying is: I think roleplaying is working with others to assume a fictional but realistic scenario to have fun.

In your own words, define what the act of meta-gaming is: To not be realistic and thorough in making your character real.

In your own words, define what the act of power-emoting is: Acting as if everyone else can't do anything and you are all-powerful over them

In-Character Details

Character Name: Eraad Shiven

Character Race: Human

Character biography - Make this at least 2 paragraphs long, which must explain your character’s history, appearance, personality, age and any other details you deem necessary: I was born and raised in a cottage in a forest. Life was dull for the most part except on the days we went to the village. My father was a farmer and he taught me to farm but I never liked it. What I did enjoy was watching Terim, a market stall owner in the village, barter and sell his wares. The various kinds of people I met always incited curiosity in me. At around the age of 17 (at this time my father let me visit the village by myself) I returned the my cottage home from the village and found my father and mother no where to be found. There was a hastily scrawled note saying that they had been taken by bandits and that they loved me. I vowed to find them, but I was no fool, I knew i had to make a living with my parents gone and my coming-of-age. I visited Terim and asked for him to apprentice me. He agreed and taught me his craft. I soon became his assistant and business partner, I traveled and found clients for him. That is when I arrived in Asulon

What are your characters ambitions?: To make enough money to hire detectives and mercenaries to find my parents.

Please provide an in-game screenshot of your skin here:

Is there anything else you would like to say about your character: Nope

Open-Response-Questions

Each question here must be answered with a minimum of one full paragraph, and detail the scene you are given in the way it would happen in roleplay. These questions should be answered in first person. Be detailed, not short.

Upon entering the Mighty Human City of Arethor, you come across a shop-keeper calling out to sell his wares to passers-by. The shopkeeper is not a Human, he is a poor dwarf looking to make a living in a new city. What is your response? I would banter with him for a few minutes, then invite him to a mug at the tavern. I ask him of his history and then i would sit up lay down a helpful amount of money then bade him goodbye

You’re wandering the Oren Road late at night, when a large Orc begins to threaten a nearby dwarf. There is no help nearby, and the situation looks like it will escalate into violence soon, what does your character do? I would confront the Orc, kindly asking him to leave the dwarf alone. If not I would threaten the Orc with my blade.

Whilst walking down the road to Malinor, you stumble upon an old man. His walking stick , looks weak and frail, and just as you are about to ask something, the stick breaks, and the man falls to the ground. As he falls down, a bag of Minas falls to the ground, and splits open. As you watch the multiple coins spill out, you peer down at the defenceless man. What does your character do?: "Are you ok?" Then I would help him up and walk him to a chair or bench. I go and find a cheap walking stick and give it to him.

[LeRenardNoir 413]

You were denied for the following reasons:

Your meta-gaming and power-emoting definitions are incorrect. Please research the terms and replace them with the correct definitions. Please add some lore to your biography, add things like locations and events from Asulon. Also, it would be cool to include how you got to Elysium from Asulon. Please expand all of your open response questions, make sure they are a good one paragraph in length and include dialogue and actions to improve their length. Good luck on your next application!

Please wait 24 hours before re-applying.

PM me if you would like further explanation/help.

While you wait…Go and vote for the server to support it!

We all would really appreciate it.

[LeRenardNoir 413]

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