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[Lynmic 0]

Minecraft Account Name: lynmic

How old are you?: 14

Time-Zone/Country of Residence: Eastern Standard Time / America

Do you have a good grip on English grammar and the English language?: Yes, I do have a good grip on English and the lanuage

Have you had any previous experience in roleplaying?: Yes, I have played on 2 other servers.

Have you read and understood and agree to the rules?: Yes, I do accept the rules.

How did you hear about the Lord of the Craft?: I was looking up roleplaying servers, and saw this one pop up.

Link any previous applications you have made to the Lord of the Craft: http://www.lordofthe...629#entry562629

Have you posted this application on Minecraft Forum? If not, post it here:

Definitions

In your own words, define what the act of roleplaying is: Roleplaying is when somone (anyone) has a character and acts out to have a role.

In your own words, define what the act of meta-gaming is: Meta-gaming is using the knowledge from Out Of Character and using it In Game that your character should not know.

In your own words, define what the act of power-emoting is: Power-emoting is when you are overpowered and make your character more powerful than another. Ex: *Steve stabs Bob, Bob falls on the floor and dies*, instead of *Steve tries to stab Bob.

In-Character Details

Character Name: Lyna Smithfield

Character Race: Human

Character biography - Make this at least 2 paragraphs long, which must explain your character’s history, appearance, personality, age and any other details you deem necessary:

Well Lyna was born into a dynasty. She would always watch her brother train for wars. She wanted to join him. But her mother wouldn't allow it. Lyna didn't understand and went to her father who wanted his daughter to fight also. He said go practice with your brother. So she trained with her brother for wars to come. but one day all that training payed off. There enemies were raiding the town. So the kingdom went to war. She secretly fought. But the kingdom was still getting conquered. So their parents said to go far away from the kingdom. So they set out. They made it to the wall of the kingdom then they saw there parents getting attacked and helped them. So both the parents and the kids set out. So they reached another kingdom.

But there were knights from the enemy team that followed them then killed Lyna's parents. She was scared!!! But her brother killed them and they entered the kingdom. They settled down in the kingdom! Her brother joined the knights. She helped train girls who wanted to be warriors. There life was perfect. Until...... her brother died. He was in war. And someone stuck a sword through his chest. And the last words he said were. "Tell my sister to keep fighting and have my sword." Then when she found out. Her life was scattered.

So she set out for a new kingdom. Now she is 18, the kingdom she has set out to is in the Land Of Asulon. *couple weeks of traveling* She has reached Asulon on her way to the human capital of Arethor. She walks around the city for a bit sees the people. She notices some people are rude, and give her mean looks. Others give her a smirk or maybe a smile. She knows being an outsider is hard, but she wants to be known. After a while of exploring she is exhausted, from her trip all the way from her old kingdom. So she decided to find and inn and get some food for the night. She walked to a bakery and got some bread and milk. She asked the shop keeper were there was an inn. He said "Go straight down and take a left" She thank him and was on her way. The capital by now was dieing down, she found the inn, got a room and settled. She looked out the window of the amazing view of the city. She was going to like it here.

What are your characters ambitions?: To have success for her family who died. She will always be a fighter!!! Always for her family especially for her brother.

Please provide an in-game screenshot of your skin here: http://djazz.mine.nu/apps/MinecraftSkin/

Is there anything else you would like to say about your character: That she is loyal and alwys will fight til death for the people who matter and the people who deserve to live.

Open-Response-Questions

Each question here must be answered with a minimum of one full paragraph, and detail the scene you are given in the way it would happen in roleplay. These questions should be answered in first person. Be detailed, not short.

Upon entering the Mighty Human City of Arethor, you come across a shop-keeper calling out to sell his wares to passers-by. The shopkeeper is not a Human, he is a poor dwarf looking to make a living in a new city. What is your response? I kindly walk up to the dwarf ask the dwarve what he has then I see some apples. And tell the dwarve I will have them. I give him 30 minas with a tip. And tell him I will come here daily. He smiles and thanks her for her kindness. She says, "No dont thank me you deserve kindness."

You’re wandering the Oren Road late at night, when a large Orc begins to threaten a nearby dwarf. There is no help nearby, and the situation looks like it will escalate into violence soon, what does your character do? I go up to the orc and start to yell at him! "You have no right to yell at this dwarf, he has not done anything to you im assuming. The orc looks surprised and mad to see a girl standing up for a dwarf. He says "Get out of here little girl", I stay there staring at him with a rude look. He says I will hurt you if you don't. I say "Come at me then" The orc starts to attack she says for the dwarf to run, he does. She gets hit by the orc, then tries to stab him with her sword. He gets slashed. He hits me again... I fall to the ground hard fells like ive broke my angle. I get up and slash him again. He bleeds more he says, "Im done i should kill you but ill let you live" , you just get up and walk away ashamed that you got hurt but proud that the dwarve wasnt hurt.

Whilst walking down the road to Malinor, you stumble upon an old man. His walking stick , looks weak and frail, and just as you are about to ask something, the stick breaks, and the man falls to the ground. As he falls down, a bag of Minas falls to the ground, and splits open. As you watch the multiple coins spill out, you peer down at the defenceless man. What does your character do?: I help him up, finding a branch or big twig for him to walk with. I also collect all his minas and give him my sack for them to be carried in and I walk him to were he needs to go.

[Hylian the Heretic 233]

Denied.

-Expand on your roleplaying definition please

-Your first and third open response questions are too short

-Bio does not contain server lore

Please re-apply in 24 hours :)

[Hylian the Heretic 233]

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