[Denied]Jrev925's Application

[jrev925 0]

Out-Of-Character Details

Minecraft Account Name: jrev925

 

How old are you?: 14.

 

Time-Zone/Country of Residence:Pacific Standard Time

 

Do you have a good grip on English grammar and the English language?:Yes

 

Have you had any previous experience in roleplaying?:Yes I have made several attempts at creating a server with not much luck in finding new players. I have also played Lotr themed mincraft servers.  

 

Have you read and understood and agree to the rules?:Yes

 

How did you hear about the Lord of the Craft?: Petridagamernerd on youtube: http://www.youtube.com/user/PetriDaGamerNerd?feature=watch

 

Forums Link any previous applications you have made to the Lord of the Craft: To old to find. 

 

Have you posted this application on Minecraft Forum? If not, post it here: 

 

Definitions

In your own words, define what the act of roleplaying is: Making a story or adventure whilst playing a character

 

In your own words, define what the act of meta-gaming is: It's basically hacking or modding to make your character over-powered and able to take on 15 people at once

 

In your own words, define what the act of power-emoting is: It is when a player forces the outcome of a emote onto another player without the consent of the second player. Example: "I cut of your arm" "I Cut off your head" " Steal your gold" all of these happened in a continuous action

 

In-Character Details

Character Name: Orrid Amek Character Race: Forest Dwarf Character biography - Make this at least 2 paragraphs long, which must explain your character’s history, appearance, personality, age and any other details you deem necessary:

 

Orrid Amek is quite the odd fellow. He was born under common folk. His Mother died of child-birth and his father worked in the lumber business  He ran away at a run age because of the shear brutality of his father. Driven to prove to his father he could become something he traveled the dwarf city, Kal'Dwain. He then joined the army and quickly rose through the ranks. He then became Captain of his own troop.

 

As captain he traveled the realm of the dwarfs paroling the border. On one dark night they were attacked by rouge elves. No one was injured but they were so rage driven they decided to hunt for them. Orrid wasn't concerned with the ability to conquer these foes. He sent them on while he slept behind. When he woke up his dear troop was gone and he was captured. He found out that he they were slaughtered and buried. Anger filled his lungs. He Shouted so loud that every bird in 5 leagues flew away. He suddenly broke free and without weapons beat the elves to death with his bare fists. Grieve took him. he returned with grave news to the capital. at the proper burials of the solders he took an oath, an oath that was to destroy all acts of piracy and kill every murder.

 

Open-Response-Questions

Each question here must be answered with a minimum of one full paragraph, and detail the scene you are given in the way it would happen in roleplay. These questions should be answered in first person. Be detailed, not short.

 

Upon entering the Mighty Human City of Arethor, you come across a shop-keeper calling out to sell his wares to passers-by. The shopkeeper is not a Human, he is a poor dwarf looking to make a living in a new city. What is your response? I was Strolling along the gravel road and i noticed another dwarf in this human city. Since his one the only other kin I have scene in this open aired city, i decided to pay him a visit. i walked by him in a proud manner and said my greeting. Seeing that he was not wealthy i decided to give him 50 minas for his troubles and comfort. I asked what clan him was from and invited him into the tavern. there i told him of our how are dwarf realm is doing and I asked how the weather is going in this human city. We shared some ales and shared a few hefty laughs and strolled outside.   

 

You’re wandering the Oren Road late at night, when a large Orc begins to threaten a nearby dwarf. There is no help nearby, and the situation looks like it will escalate into violence soon, what does your character do? I RUN OUT FURIOUSLY, "NO ONE THREATENS MY KIN!" I run out and unsheathe my ax and proceed to kill the orc. I am ferociously fighting. I parry his next attack and counter it back to him cutting of his arm and then i  jab him through his stomach and out his backside. I spit on such a pitiless form of creature. i help my kin out by picking out his belongings and send him on his way  . 

 

Whilst walking down the road to Malinor, you stumble upon an old man. His walking stick , looks weak and frail, and just as you are about to ask something, the stick breaks, and the man falls to the ground. As he falls down, a bag of Minas falls to the ground, and splits open. As you watch the multiple coins spill out, you peer down at the defenceless man. What does your character do?: feeling pity for this old man I pick up his bag of coins, but the desire of riches fills my dwarven mind I Sneakily take out 15 Minas and Give the bag back to this old man. I then go to the nearest taveren and buy myself some delicious ale. 

[everblue2er101 906]

Your application has been...

 

Denied.

 

Need to post on the http://www.minecraftforum.net/topic/832121-the-lord-of-the-craft-enter-the-world-of-asulon-o-f-f-i-c-i-a-l-l-y-t-h-e-n-o-1-r-p-s-e-r-v-e-r-100-unique-gameplay/'>Minecraft Forums before you can be accepted.

 

Incorrect Meta-Gaming definition. You can find more information on the forums and wiki, but make sure to use your own words.

 

Extreme powergaming in the bio, being able to break free and beat Elves to death with only fists.

 

Questions are missing from the In-Character section, review the application format.

 

Cannot steal the minas in the third Open Response Question, as this requires a Villain Application.

 

Expand on the last two ORQs. Add dialogue to all.

 

Wait at least 24 hours after this post to reapply. If you have any questions feel free to send me a PM.

[everblue2er101 906]

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