Silver_Espio 9 Share Posted January 28, 2013 Link to post Share on other sites More sharing options...
Hylian the Heretic 233 Share Posted January 29, 2013 Denied. -Expand on all definitions, maybe give an example -Bio is cliche -Bio should explain more of Ventari's mindset -Formatting is broken -ORQs are too short and lack detail. When defending the wood elf child, describe the scene based on what you think might happen. -Skin is already being used by another player, it may cause problems. You don't have to change it, but it's recommended if it's not too much trouble. Please reapply in 24 hours :) Link to post Share on other sites More sharing options...
Hylian the Heretic 233 Share Posted January 29, 2013 Moved to Denied Forum Link to post Share on other sites More sharing options...
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