[Denied]Application For Gnarlan123

[gnarlan123 4]

Out-Of-Character Information
Please fill out the following questions as accurately as possible, and ensure the essential details are accurate.

Minecraft Account Name: gnarlan123
How old are you?: 14
Time-Zone: GMT (Greenwich Mean Time)
Have you read, understood and agreed to the rules?: I have read and agree to the rules of Lord of the Craft.
What previous experience have you had in role-playing?: I have played Dungeons and Dragons.
How did you hear about the the Lord of the Craft?: I came across it on Youtube.
Link any applications that you have previously made for the server: http://www.lordofthecraft.net/forum/index.php?/topic/80985-application-for-gnarlan123/
Have you posted this application on the Minecraft Forum? If not, then please do so (link above):http://www.minecraftforum.net/topic/832121-the-lord-of-the-craft-enter-the-world-of-asulon-o-f-f-i-c-i-a-l-l-y-t-h-e-n-o-1-r-p-s-e-r-v-e-r-100-unique-gameplay/page__st__2120__gopid__20675562#entry20675562
Have you read the Dwarven lore, and shall you ensure you make use of it and follow it in your biography?: Yes, I have read and will use Dwarven lore in my biography.

Definitions
In your own words define the following terms. Do not take any definitions from elsewhere!:

Role-playing: To play the role of a character in a Roleplay world.
Meta-gaming: To use information that you know in real life but your character does not know in the RP world that your character is in.
Power-emoting: To do something to someone without them being able to react to the action. Example: I throw a knife at Bob's face, Bob dies. Leaving no time for Bob to react.

In-Character Information:
Complete the following biography on your character:

Full Name: Gnarlan_Understone
Current Age: 24 Dwarven Years
Sub-race (if any): Cave Dwarf.
Clan (if any): Irongut Clan.
Past / History (include childhood, major-events, etc. 2+ paragraphs long):Gnarlan grew up in Kal'Urguan. His parents abandoned him at the age of 10 because they could not afford to pay for his food and school. A mid-aged stone miner named Rogdast found him in an alley and took him in and raised him to be a strong and sturdy Dwarf. By the time he was fifteen he was already in the mines slamming his pick into the stone everyday. But then a couple of years later the mines collapsed and he lost Rogdast to the rubble of the mine.

He had moved into the Army and kept on renting a room at an Inn in Kal'Urguan. He had gone to war with the Orcs two times so far and only came back with a broken leg and a weak wooden walking stick. He had healed from his war wound in half a year and went back out into the battlefield for the third time. He came back to the Inn with Orc skulls and Orc armour, a very precious but strong armour. When he was 20 he had become the leader of a platoon of Dwarves and went to fierce skirmishes with the Orcs but he had survived three battles. So he now works there to this day.

Ambitions for the Future: To adventure and to fight against the Orc's in massive wars.
Personality: Rude and drunk most of the time.
Skills: Gnarlan_Understone is very good at using his trusty iron axe. He is also a master brewer of ale and wine.
Appearance (this must include an in-game screenshot of your skin):
Any other details you wish to share about your character: Gnarlan_Understone has an olive tan skin with a grey scraggely beard.

[Queen of Aegis 174]

 

- Roleplay definition is too short

- Killed parents is overused (someone who adopts you is your parent too)

- Biography is too short

- There are no ORQ's 

 

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~BoomBox~ 

[Queen of Aegis 174]

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