[Denied][Human] Ckmig

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[o_Ben_o 193]

 

Firstly your formatting is terrible. I would advice writing your application in the forum text editor/writer. This should maybe stop your formatting issues.

 

Please add examples to each of your definitions so we can make sure your understand completely what each definition means.

 

Your Biography was good however try to make sure you are using server lore and remember the best role play is in the form of people who are not always the best in society. I wouldn't say that your father is a Duke as he is not a real character in Lord Of The Craft. It will make it easier if you just maybe make your character a peasant or try not to include your parents as nobles role play is the hardest to write in an application. 

 

You can find a lot of server lore and interesting facts on the Lord of the Craft Wiki and many threads on the Human Role-Play Forums. Here are the links to each.

Human Wiki page

Human Role Play Forum

 

If you need any more help on Lore or have any questions feel free to ask a lore master or member of the Application Team. I am sure they will be happy to help.

 

Your Character Questions are too short, please answer these with a paragraph long answer. This will re-assure us that you understand your character well enough to role play with it.

 

 

Your Open Response Question need to display the role play method in them to achieve an accepted application. You need to set it out like this:

Edward looks around the Inn and notices a man tucked away in the corner -wearing black robes. He walks across the room towards the man before calling over "Oi You! Come over here!" The man looks up towards Edward and gasps before attempting to get up and flee.

 

You should set out your role play that and then we will know that you can control role play with your character and also know if you have the role-playing skills to obtain a place on our server. If you can do this method with every single Open Response Questions they will be at a closer to acceptable applications standard.

 

Good Luck With Your Next Application

 

Ben~

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