[Denied][Elf] Cutepiggy's App #3. All Errors Fixed (Unless I Missed Something)

[Genevieveee 234]

Out-Of-Character InformationPlease fill out the following questions as accurately as possible, 
and ensure the essential details are accurate.

Minecraft Account Name: cutepiggy

Howold are you?: 13, but I am mature.

Time-Zone: Central (Wisconsin)
Have you read, understood and agreed to the rules?:
Yes, I just don't under stand "No RP Killing". Does that mean you cannot kill someone
while RPing? Even if you say, "Pulls out dagger, ready to attack"? You gave them warning, and
they are prepared.

What previous experience have you had in role-playing?:
Other mc servers, RP chat rooms on IMVU,
 and RP levels on LBP

How did you hear about the the Lord of the Craft?: Bluestonelabs sent me!

Link any applications that you have previously made for the server:
1)http://www.lordofthecraft.net/forum/index.php?/topic/81651-cutepiggys-application-for-whitelist/
2)http://www.lordofthecraft.net/forum/index.php?/topic/81691-elf-cutepiggys-app-redone-with-correct-format/

In your own words define the following terms. Do not take any definitions from elsewhere!:

Role-playing:Roleplaying, Is playing as any character you can imagine and create, And play as
that character. Forexample you may want to be a Dwarf merchant or a Orc prince, It is your idea,
creation, and imagination.

Meta-gaming:Using OFC (out of character) information in game, Usualy to your benifit. 
Such as,"Maya sees a stranger, and says "Oh hello butterfreak3345" Or their ig name such as
 "Litek"

In-Character Information:Complete the following biography on your character:
Full Name: Melody Sioln

Current Age: 25

Sub-race (if any): Half Wood elf, Half High elf.

Past / History (include childhood, major-events, etc. 2+ paragraphs long):
Diary entry, age 12. Writen on boat.
I couldn't stop it, I could not hear them scream, or him sneaking up 
the creaky steps. All I could do was feel the vibrationsof my heart pounding. The last time 
I saw my family was last week. We went to visit our friend. I held my fathers hand. Ibriefly
 remember a strange man staring at us beyond the trees. Hes evil green eyes looking at us 
desperatly. I know hemust have been the murderer. But now, I am a orphan. Traveling my way to
 a new land where my new family willtake me in, But I know they will never be as kind, and 
caring as my true family.I now think back about when my bestfriend Jullias died. His last
 words to me were "Meet me in my sorrow land" I stillcannot understand what that meant, but
 I am confident I will soon find out. But now is not the time to mourn about him or my family.
 As this boat sways and sails its way away from my homeland, I stare at the moon and stars,
 and wonder,
What awaits me in this new land?
================================================================
12 years later, at new home.
I finally arrived in this new place. After the boat sank, we had to get on the emergency boats
and row all the way to a small island of Dwarfs. We paid them alot of gold, but they made
us a new boat, and we could finally continue our way. I still hold onto my
precious locket. It makes me feel ok again, As if all the problems in the world
had just gone away. Sadly, the only thing that will stay is being deaf. I know when im older
if I have a child, I would not be able to hear its screams in the night, just like how
I didn't hear my parents. I cannot hear if someone is calling my name, or if a
poor old woman is crying for help. I often feel useless because of my disabilites.
And being diabetic makes it even harder.

Ambitions for the Future: Melody hopes to grow up with a big family. But before, She wants to go
 on an adventure. Maybe on a voyage out to seas, or into a mysterious cave wheretreasure awaits.
 On her journeys, she wants to meet new friends, who some may turn thatshe is in love with them.

Personality:Melody is very shy as stated above. Melody holds onto a small lockett of her family
 before their death. She will do anything to protect it, even if it means losing a friend.
 Melody is also a adventurous girl, though shehas only been on one (which was her coming to this
 new land from her old home far away), she would die to go on yetanother. Being born deaf made 
her incapable of ever hearing the song of the birds, or the voice of the water, this makes her
 sometimes depressed. Sometimes, she even wishes to die (suicide).
Melody also often likes to dye her hair. She usually goes for red and blonde.

Skills:Melody is very skilled at archery. Though she is more interested
 and skilled in making friends.But besides that, Melody has few skills.

Appearance (this must include an in-game screenshot of your skin):
Melody has beautiful long red hair. Her deep blue eyes, and boney fingers. She
usually wearscloths to match her feelings,which are usualy sad, and shy so cooler colors such as blue and
 white. Melody is moderatly skinny, and has pink blushing cheeks. She enjoys wearing thinks 
also nature like such as flowers in her hair and braclets of leaves. She is quite pale too, the
sun often just doesnt sink in.


Any other details you wish to share about your character:
Melody isalso diabetic, so she sometmies freaks out. (Not enough to cause caos or ban)

Open-Response-QuestionsEach question in this section must be answered with a minimum of one
 paragraph which must describe the event in full. Please be as descriptive as possible and do 
not break character or lore at any point.____

1. As you walk through the deep forests you hear the sound of whispering and snickering.
 Upon inspection you realize that a group of High Elves are mocking a small Wood Elf child.
 How do you react?Answer:Because I am deaf, I do not hear the High Elvse. But as I continue on 
my way, I do run into them. I could tell that the High Elves were bulling the child.I told them 
to shoo. But they just swarmed around me. I picked up the child and ran.I finally stopped
 running at a inn. I pulled out a notebook from my pouch and asked the boy where his parents
 were.The boy replied that they were in the city shopping. The boy led me to his small cottage
.At departure, I gave him a small dagger in case something were to happen.

2. Whilst wandering through the Elven forests you come across a frail old man with a walking
 stick. He collapses in front of you, falling to the ground with a sharp thud. Out of his 
pocket falls a small pouch of gold coins, which hits the ground and splits open spreading 
coins across the pathway. The man lies there, defenseless - what do you do?

Answer: I help the old man up, and notice a cut on his arm. I tear a strip of my shirt off and 
wrap it around as a bandage.I then pick up the old mans money and places itin the bag. 
The old man thanks me (lip reading). I nodd back. It turned out we wereboth heading to the
 market. When we arrive, I buy the old man a nice to hat,Then we go our seperate ways.

3. Whilst traversing the Elven Woodlands, you come across a small clearing in which a colored
 carriage sits. A trader stands outside of it and calls you over, telling you of his wares.
 He points out that his carriage sells just about everything, and that he's willing for you to 
haggle for a price. What does your character do? (Please include:- item, haggling for prices 
and the discussion involved).

Answer: I ask the merchant if he has any arrows. He scrambles around in a box labeled

"Apparel". I tell the merchant it would most likely be in the box labeled "weapons" in the back. The man coughs and

searches the box. He comes out with multiple types of arrows. There were wooden with iron tips, Wood with stone tips,

and Iron with iron tips. I ask how much for the Wood and iron arrows. He replies that they are 30 each. Shocked,

I ask, "How about 10" He says that isn't enough, he bargens 20, I say 15. He says 18. I say 16, my final offer. FInally

he agrees. I buy 5 new arrows for 80$.

Thanks for Reading!

I truly hope I get whitelisted on my 3rd try,

And even though it is not a requirement, I will do a brief discription of my self for good measures.

My name is Jenna, I love to play video games. I am very kind to anyone who is kind to me, if they arn't I try to ignore them. I love to rp, and try to think out of the box, and I like old music better than modern.

I wish more than anything to get whitelisted on this server, and want to play asap.

If you have any questions for me, let me know!

I also often check my game email (A email I use only for game-related things)

@:

[email protected]

(I love baking btw)

Thanks!

-CP <3

 

(Ps: I don't know why its "broken" for ambitions, but somehow I managed that...)

 

[LaCabra (Soda) 1519]

I must apologize, but this application is being denied. I looked at your previous application, which was also denied. The application reviewer said to fix a few things, which you have done for the most part, but you also missed a few requirements on the application that he said to fix. These are:

 

- You must provide a power-gaming definition. Make sure to research this, and state it in your own words.

 

- You must provide a link to your post on the Minecraft Forum.

 

Do not re-apply for 24 hours or your next application will be denied instantly. Good luck, and if you have any questions feel free to private message me!

[LaCabra (Soda) 1519]

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