[Denied][Dwarf] Dtrik's Fixed Application (The First One Didnt Paste Right)

[Dtrik 330]

 

Out-Of-Character Information

Please fill out the following questions
as accurately as possible, and ensure the essential details are accurate.

 

Minecraft Account Name: Dtrik

 

 

 

 

How old are you?:

14

 

 

 

 

 

 

Time-Zone: California 8-PST

 

 

 

 

 

Have you read, understood and agreed to the rules?: Yes.

 

 

 

What previous experience
have you had in role-playing?:

I am
larper (live action role playing.) , so I am physically roleplaying. I think
that gives a better feel to a character because I have been in my larp
character's shoes physically not over the internet.

 

 

 

 

How did you hear about the the
Lord of the Craft?:

I heard about Lord of the Craft from
Youtube. After I watched a couple of videos on Youtube (which is not a lot by
the way) about Lord of the Craft I asked my friend James about it and he said
that this is the number one server in the world.

 

 

 

Link any applications that you have
previously made for the server:

 

http://www.lordofthecraft.net/forum/index.php?/topic/82449-dwarf-dtriks-application/

 

 

 

 

 

 

Have you posted this
application on the Minecraft Forum? If not, then please do so (link above):

 

 

 

http://www.minecraftforum.net/topic/832121-the-lord-of-the-craft-enter-the-world-of-asulon-o-f-f-i-c-i-a-l-l-y-t-h-e-n-o-1-r-p-s-e-r-v-e-r-100-unique-gameplay/page__st__2360__gopid__21141206#entry21141206

 

Have
you read the Dwarven lore, and shall you ensure you make use of it and follow
it in your biography?: I have read
the Dwarven lore and have done my best to incorporate it into my biography.

 

 

 

 

Definitions

In your own words define the following terms. Do not take any definitions
from elsewhere!:

 

 

 

Role-playing: Acting like a person that you want to be.

 

Meta-gaming:

 

Metagaming is when someone gains knowledge from somewhere
outside of the gaming realm and uses that information ingame like if there is
going to be a siege and you see it is posted on a site and then use that
information ingame.

 

 

 

 

 

 

Power-emoting:

Power-emoting is when someone uses actions
that make it so another person can not do anything to counter act it. As an
example – John pulls diamond sword out, he stabs Jack then turns invisible
appearing behind Jack and cutting his head off.

 

 

 

 

 

In-Character Information:

Complete the following biography on your character:

 

 

 

 

 

Full Name: Chase Fireaxe
II

Current Age:19

Sub-race (if any):no

Clan (if any):no

Past / History (include childhood, major-events, etc. 2+ paragraphs long):

 

 

 

 

 

 

My story is not
a happy one. Before I was born my family was in poverity. Like most families
that are poor, they lived off the land. My parents were lucky when they saw
even the slightest thing that was edible. Because of this my parents became
sick a lot. One good thing did come from eating random edibles, they became
immune to Seventis. This may have been in conjunction with them bathing every
time they could. But alas they knew this wasn’t the life that a dwarven child
should be born into so because of this they set off for the city named Oren.

 

 

 

 

 

 

I was born soon later. When I
came out of mother’s womb I did not cry, instead I took the closes object to
me, which was a small hammer, and brought it close to me. From then on my
parents knew I would be a protector they thought I was Dwain Irongut reborn
into this world again but for they did not know was I was slowly turning into
his dead evil brother Heron. As I grew up I noticed I was shorter then most of
my dwarven kin this angered me constantly. This was ok though, for what I
lacked in height I made up with muscle and brains. From when I was eight I
started to help my father with wood cutting and smithing. I loved cutting wood
partially because I didn't have to stress my brain, thinking about how hard or
what angle I should cut the tree. I saw that since I loved wood cutting so much
I would keep an axe on me; one: because I loved wood cutting, two: BECAUSE AXES
ARE FREAKIN' AMAZING!!!! I explained this to most people but they never
understood, they thought I was afraid of something.

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

I soon left my
parents to go off into the world. I decided I wanted to know more about how
life started and how to control it. I started to read about how Dwain's brother
Heron and how he had wanted to bring his father back to life and show his
father that he was better then Dwain. I saw this interesting, a simple matter
of love made Heron go insane. But putting that aside I also wanted to powerful
like Heron and be able to control the dead. I started to head for the towns
near oceans and hunting down elves so that I may learn their civilized ways and
mystical ways. After spending time in the elven capital Normandor I started to
speak without a crusty and unrefined dwarven accent and started to get a bit
taller. I then went to Kal'Urguan wanting to find secrets about Heron and where
his magic came from, for did he really gain magic from his father Urguan or if
he gained the magic from another sorce... maybe from another entite. After
being bored with finding nothing and from things I gained knowledge from led to
dead ends I gave up. From there I went back to Oren disguised as a human to
live out my life, from here… I do not know what to do…

 

 

 

 

 

Ambitions for the Future:
To become a great axeman and to have magic (yes, I know I will have to make a
magic application)

 

 

 

 

 

Personality: He is quick wited and is
not very social, because of that he is very rude when he doesn't really mean to
be. He also speaks what is on his mind (just like me) and doesn't care how
other people may or may not judge him.

Skills: Because all he used was an axe and on occations
used a hammer he is very good at using an axe.

Appearance (this must include an in-game screenshot of your
skin):

 

 

 

 

 

 

Open-Response-Questions

Each question in this section must be answered with a minimum of one
paragraph which must describe the event in full. Please be as descriptive as
possible and do not break character or lore at any point.

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1.
Whilst mining deep in the undergrounds of Kalos you see a large deposit of
diamond ore at the other side of the ravine you are on. There is a very thin
rock bridge that looks precariously unstable, but it is the only way to access
the deposit. What do you do?

 

Knowing that I need a couple
of diamonds to sell on the market to get a little bit of money I start to think
about how to get the diamonds. "Hmmm let me use what I have gained from
the reads of Heron." I start to stare at the thin rock bridge. "This
rock bridge seems it will give out any moment, and I am to short to run across
that bridge. I doubt even the fastest human could cross that bridge much less
make it back." I start to head outside of the mine putting my hand on my
axe ready to draw it out in a moments notice to kill anyone or anything that
might want to take those diamonds. "Maybe I should chop some wood down to
clear my mind." I pull out my axe all the way and start to swing at a tall
oak tree. "Ahh I miss these days, just chopping at trees..." I pick
up the logs and stare at them for a moment (I tend to stare a lot huh?).
"BY HERON I HAVE IT!!!!" Making sure nothing heard me except the loud
winds of the forest and the creatures that we eat, I start to turn the wood
into planks. "Thanks be to the Gods for without them helping me through my
childhood with woodwork I would have not been able to get three planks for each
log." I start to head back into the mine and search for where the diamonds
are. "Ahh there you are, you little bugger." I start to make support
beams for the bridge using the wood I gained. "I think I shall make it to
the diamonds in a decent amount of time." As I place the last support beam
I notice that the cave doesn't seem very light up and that there is a lot of
ore around..."Hmm why is this place so... unlifelike and chilly
feeling..." I place a torch down on the bridge and near me so nothing will
sneak up on me. "This should be good enough." I start to mine the
diamonds and soon leave knowing that by the power of Heron and the Gods I was
able to cross that bridge and gain a bountiful amount of diamonds.

 

 

 

 

 

 

2. You are sitting in the
local tavern with a large pint of ale in your hand - sitting nearby you is a
rather young dwarf whom is clearly going through a bad time. He is crying to
himself, and clutching a small wooden hammer toy. In the other corner of the
room two shady dwarves are sitting whispering to each other and pointing
occasionally at the dwarf. They stand up, one with a small dagger in his hand
and begin to approach the young dwarf. What do you do?

 

 

 

"Hmmm why do you cry dwarf?" The young dwarf
replies,"My famly 'as died an I could ave done somedin but.... I DIDN'T!
The young dwarf starts to cry even harder."Why do you say you could have
done something to stop it? Surely you are not a cruel person." I start to
notice two shady dwarves approaching us. "Hay, maybe we should go to some
place safer?" The young dwarf replies, "ere be nutin left for me if I
leave dis place. Tose two dwarves approaching us ar loan sharks and I aven't
paid my debt. Dey plan on kellin me if dey dun get deir money." Knowing I
have a large amount of money on me I start to wonder if I should pay the loan
sharks off. "Surely they won't kill you here." The young dwarf looks
at me and tells me in a even sadder tone. "They killed my famly while dey
w're in de park. Ar' you sure dey won kell me ere?" I stare at the man and
then hand him a knife. "I will not fight your battles nor give you a free
ride. Kill these men for the things they did to your family." I pull out
another knife throwing it into one of their necks and kill one of the dwarves.
"Here, don't start crying again like you are about to die, I killed one
for you. Now you have the other one to kill. If you die then you die if he dies
then he dies. Either way if either of you attack me... well you will both wish
that you had died with my emotions." The two dwarves stare at eachother
for a moment and the young dwarf lunges at the other dwarf. The two dwarves
fight for about thirty minutes until the young dwarf knicks the other dwarf's
achelles tendon and goes down in pain. The young dwarf then stabs the knife
into the other dwarf's sternum kill him and his debt with him. "Ahh well
done, now I must leave spreading knowledge and barbaric behavior about. Tat
Tat." I then leave the building after taking a glass of ale with me.
"Seems I still have to feed my dwarvin needs."

 

 

 

 

 

 

3. Whilst wandering
through the Dwarven Caverns you hear a voice call out to you; “Oi, ye’! C’mere
n’ get ye’rself an ale!”. You spin on your heel and see a heavily bearded
bar-owner looking at you - a huge grin on his face, and a mug of ale in his
hand. How do you react?

 

 

 

 

 

I turn to the heavily
beared bar-owner and exclaim, "I THINK I HAVE HAD ENOUGH OF THIS IDIOTIC
DWARVIN TONGUE!!! DO YOU NOT THINK OTHER RACES THINK YOU ARE IDIOTIC FOR
SPEAKING LIKE OI AND C'MERE!!! HOW WOULD YOU LIKE IF I STARTED TAKING LIKE A
DUCK OR IN HERON'S SAKE A COW!!! OH WAIT YOU ARE SO STUPID THAT IF I DID YOU
WOULD PROBABLY MAKE ME A GOD!!! FOR HERON'S SAKE I DOUBT YOU CAN EVEN MAKE A
STRAIGHT LINE ON A GRID LINED PAPER OH WAIT YOU DON'T EVEN KNOW WHAT A STRAIGHT
LINE IS HUH!?!?! The heavily beared bar-owner looks at me and with anger and at
the same time understanding he hands me an ale. "I am sorry but I have had
a tough day... dealing with how to cross a ravine on a fragile bridge and then
killing a dwarf and adding in the homicide of another." The heavily beared
bar-owner looks at me and then says to me in a struggling tone, "I am
sorry dat I t-t-talk like dis bu dis was ow' I was teached." I stare at the
dwarf for about a minute then reply,"Seems if this is to change it will
have to change with the new generation... maybe a school will help... that will
teach my ways... they right ways..." I then leave the bar.

 

 

 

 

[Queen of Aegis 174]

 

- roleplay definition is wrong 

- Seventis was a nation, not some sickness 

- 8 years old is very young, I suggest you make him somewhat older

- Kal'Urguan is from Aegis, Normandor from Asulon. I can't see how you went from Asulon to Aegis

- I can't see a skin

 

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If you have any questions feel free to PM me

 

~BoomBox~

[Queen of Aegis 174]

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