[✔] [Accepted] (Human) Greenivo's 3Rd Application

[Greenivo 0]

Minecraft
Account Name: Greenivo

How old are you?: 16

Time-Zone: east

Have you read, understood and agreed to the rules?: yes

What previous experience have you had in role-playing?: none

How did you hear about the the Lord of the Craft?: Many friends
of mine play it 

Link any applications that you have previously made for the
server: http://www.lordofthe...os-application/

http://www.lordofthecraft.net/forum/index.php?/topic/83118-human-greenivos-2nd-application/

Have you posted this application on the Minecraft Forum? If not,
then please do so (link above): i think so

Have you read the Human lore, and shall you ensure you make use
of it and follow it in your biography?: yes



Definitions

In your own words define the following terms. Do not take any
definitions from elsewhere!:



Role-playing:Roleplaying means taking the role of a unique
character you or another, created. Meaning, you act like this said character as
you would normally act in real life when you interact with other people.



Meta-gaming: Metagaming means using information you have
acquired OOCly or out-of-character and that you are using to give yourself, an
unfair advantage over other players, in IC or In-character.



Power-emoting:Poweremoting means trying to be overpowered.
Making your character almost un-killable or un-defeatable. Poweremoting is also
doing stuff your character wouldn't be able to do in real life or doing things
that aren't technically possible. By example:

-*Simon sneaks up behind Charles, walking on his tip-toes not
making ANY sound*

-*Simon turns around believing somehow, he heard something coming.
That is powergaming.



In-Character Information:

Complete the following biography on your character:



Full Name: Shane Greenor

Current Age: 22

Sub-race (if any):

Past / History (include childhood, major-events, etc. 2+
paragraphs long):

 

Shane is the

youngest of the eight members in his family. He was raised in a rich domain
near Salvus in a very religious family which believed that Aeriel ts the only god, puritariansim.His father was a very popular merchant of rare ores and made a lot

of money though his life. His mom worked as a baker in a small shop and his
sisters and brothers were all highly intelligent and ambitious. Shane’s parents
were getting old and they couldn’t continue working any more. And when his
father died and his mother stopped working because she was getting too old,
everything went down. With no more money, they couldn’t continue living the
high life. They had to sell their goods, their armors, but money still wasn’t
enough to buy food for the whole family. Shane’s brothers and sisters tried
hard to find a job, but they weren’t successful. In the end, they sold their
whole house and every member of the family took a part of the money and they
all took different paths.

Shane,

fifteen years old, runned out of food pretty fast. He tried many occupations
like writer, innkeeper and librarian. Not worked out. Shane started losing hope
that he will starve to death. One day, while walking on the edge of the river
near Sylvenor, an old mysterious man appeared and asked Shane what he was
looking for:

-“Young man
what you are looking for”

- “Food, I’m
starving, please help me”

The old man
said he probably had a job for Shane and will pay him with food and shelter.
With great excitement Shane accepted the offer. The old man was named Symodimi
Dracaena and needed to go back home. It was a fifteen miles walk thought the
forest and needed someone to protect him. When they arrived there, Symodimi
offered shelter and food to Shane in exchange of his help when needed. 

 

During the feast of spring, Shane decided to participate in The Great Hunt. He never used a bow before so he asked Symodimi to teach him. After thirty minutes of practice, Shane had a real skills with a bow that he showed at The Great Hunt. From this moment Shane decided to become the greatest hunter of all world. 

 

 

Ambitions for the Future: Become the greatest hunter of all times

Personality: Very friendly, loves talking with people. Loves
helping people who need help. And he is very loyal.

Skills: very good with a bow, probably took it from his father

good fighter

good at obstacle courses

Appearance (this must include an in-game screenshot of your
skin): Very dark hair with dark beard. Well developed body. Wearing white shirt
with brown pants, Northerners  http://i46.tinypic.com/15gavdz.png

Any other details you wish to share about your character:



Open-Response-Questions

Each question in this section must be answered with a minimum of
one paragraph which must describe the event in full. Please be as descriptive
as possible and do not break character or lore at any point.

____



1. Whilst in the mighty human capital you notice a dark-clothed
figure stealthily making his way towards the Emperor’s palace - he is clearly
up to no good. There are guards within shouting distance - what do you do?



Answer: 

Shane approaches one of the guards and whispers to them

"Hey! You see the guy  over there. With the dark cloths ?

"Yes. What about him?"

"He seems suspicious, i think you should go talk with him"

"Fine"

The guard goes in the house that the dark clothed man entered.

Shane waits outside. It's starting to get dark. 

"HElppppppppyA" (Guard)

Shane hears the guard calling for help and enters the house with his iron long sword.

He sees the two mans battling each other, the guard against the dark clothed man.

The dark clothed man seems have taken the advantage over the guard and that's when Shane comes 

and starts hitting the dark clothed man. The guard has been hit pretty hard and lays on the ground unconscious.

Shane starts to run and makes about a five meters distance between him and the dark clothed man. He takes his bow

and *BOOM* a direct hit to the head. The bandit falls on the ground, dead.

"Are you alive?" (Shane)

The guard doesn't respond.

"Here, drink this. Never mind i will just put it in your mouth"

Shane puts some health elixir into the guard's mouth.

"Ohhhh. My arm hurts so much. I better go fix that. Thanks for the help. May you travel safe." (Guard)

"Bye"

 

2. Whilst wandering in the deep oak forest you come across a
large clearing, in which sits a small cobbled cottage. Outside it stands an
unstable old man armed with a small iron blade, surrounded by two heavily armed
bandits - they appear to be threatening him. You are armed with leather armour
and an iron longsword, how do you react?

Answer: Its Shane's duty as a citizen to protect the ones in need. Shane's approaches the two bandits and starts talking with them.

"Hey! You over there! What are you doing ?"(Shane)

"Get out of here little punk before i slice your throat" (Bandit)

"Man stop this non sense, we can make this work out, what do you want in exchange of you leaving and letting this man in peace" (Shane)

"Gives us all you got and PROBABLY we will let this man live"(Bandit)

Shane hands over his sword and armor and food to the two bandits

"There you go, now get the hell out of here" (Shane)

"Not yet little man, gives all your money and we are leaving"

Shane hands over the little money he has and the two bandits start running.

Shane goes to talk with the old man.

"Hey, how are you doing? Did they hurt you?"

"What a brave young man, if every person was like you in Sylvenor, it will be an amazing place to live" (Old man)

"Huh. I better get going."(Shane)

"Before you leave, i want you to have this", the old man goes in the house and brings back a diamond sword

"If you want to protect more people you better get a better sword"(Old man)

"Thanks, see you soon"

"May you travel safe my savior "

 

3. You are standing within the mighty human capital when you
notice a small man standing behind a colourful stall. You approach the stall
and notice that the man is selling a variety of general goods - he says that he
is selling just about anything and that he has no set prices. He is willing to
allow you to haggle and choose prices. What do you do? (Explain: your haggling,
items of choice and the discussion that happens).



Answer: Shane comes close to the colorful stall and starts looking at the goods the small man is 

selling. Suddenly, Shane's notices a great polished bow. He will be able to hunt his own food with 

it. Shane takes it and goes to the small man.

"Hiya!"(Shane)

"Hello sir, how can i help you"(small man)

"I would like to try out this bow before buying it, do you have a target i can practice on?"

"Sure, shoot at the cake over there"

Shane takes three shots and they all hit the center of the cake. He is very impressed by this bow and he goes back to the little man.

"What a fantastic bow! I sure want to buy it! How much does it cost"(Shane)

"It depends, how much do you got in your pocket? "

Shane checks in his pockets and finds 20 mina.

"Is 20 mina enough for this bow? I can go get some more and will be back here in less then an hour" (Shane)

"I saw you shooting and you are definitely talented. I love selling my goods to people that will be able to use them correctly"

"Oh great!

Shane hands over the twenty mina.

"No no no, i will give it to you for 12 mina. How does that sounds?"

"Perfect!"

Shane hands over 12 mina.

"Glad doing business with you! See you next time" (Shane)

"My pleasure! Bye!" (Little man)

[everblue2er101 906]

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In the first ORQ your character uses a health elixir, which don't exist. In the second ORQ one of the bandits says punk, which also wouldn't exist in the medieval environment. Other than that everything seems to be fixed.

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