[Denied]Dylan's 3Rd White-List Application[Human]

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[b]Out-Of-Character Information[/b]
Please fill out the following questions as accurately as possible, and ensure the essential details are accurate.

Main Account Name:Dylancorso
Alternate Account Name:None
How old are you?:14
Time-Zone: US EST
Have you read, understood and agreed to the rules?:Yes i have.
What previous experience have you had in role-playing?:Yes on a server called Land of Erecia

Definitions
In your own words define the following terms. Do not take any definitions from elsewhere!:

Role-playing:Acting as if to be someone else for the entertainment of yourself and others
Meta-gaming:Using information that is OOC in an IC situatian
Power-emoting:Using emoticons to your advantage ex. *Dylan walks up behind the human king and stabs him through the stomach* Thus not giving him a chance to react and fight back

In-Character Information:
Complete the following biography on your character:

Full Name:Dylan Corso
Current Age: 18
Race: Human
Sub-race (if any):None
Past / History (include childhood, major-events, etc. 2+ paragraphs long): Dylan was born in to a wealthy family and loved building things he was obsessed with how tools worked, obsessed isn't the right word He was.... fascinated by how some of them worked on his 5th birthday he got his first ever cake... Well the first one he can remember, and he loved it it was so sweet but not to sweet it was just right.When he turned 10 he went to his friends home and he got his first taste of betrayal... his friend took all of his Minas and never even thought of giving them back.

 

Now on to the teen years Dylan got in to black smithing at the age of 15 and he was becoming quite good at it and one day an older woman came to the shop asking "Can you please spare some minas?" Dylan thought that this was just a scam, a fraud! he thought but it was not this old women needed the minas to get by... so he gave her as much as he could find and he gave it to her. Years later when he turned 18 his smithy burnt down and he lost everything he had. and he wandered the lands until he finally gave up and all he could say to himself in his head was "There is always hope for another gift from the gods so that i may restart my life." And that is were he is today, hoping for a better life... 
Ambitions for the Future: to find a new home a settle down
Personality: Hopeful and kind loving and tender
Skills: Black smithing, Carpentry, and has a tiny bit of a green thumb (Decent at farming but not enough to make a living)
Appearance (this must include an in-game screenshot of your skin):http://imgur.com/PoKSzZ0

 

Any other details you wish to share about your character:

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You may reapply in 24 hours time! If you apply before this time you will be denied instantly.

 

Reasons for Denial:

You have not used the full format for your application, it is in fact an outdated application format. The new format can be found here - Application Format and Rules

Your Biography lacks lore for your appropriate race. Human lore can be found here and should be used to enhance your biography - Human Wiki and Human Roleplay.

Your character descriptions should be longer so that we, as well as yourself, know that you are capable of roleplaying your character.

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