[Denied]Astro's Application (1St)

[ThePlanetAstro 5]

 

Main Account Name: ThePlanetAstro
Alternate Account Name: None
How old are you?:13
Time-Zone: Pacific Standard Time
Have you read, understood and agreed to the rules?: Yes
What previous experience have you had in role-playing?: Well I am a huge role player, I  have been on many different games that I role play on, mostly Garry’s Mod and Minecraft.  

Definitions 
In your own words define the following terms. Do not take any definitions from elsewhere!:

Role-playing: Playing a game and acting like it is real and feeling what your character is feeling.
Meta-gaming: Meta-gamin is when something influences your actions in the game in a non-supporting manner.
Power-emoting: Making someone do something by force.

In-Character Information:
Complete the following biography on your character:

Full Name: Astro (no last name)
Current Age: 13
Race: Human
Sub-race (if any): None
Past / History (include childhood, major-events, etc. 2+ paragraphs long):. When Astro was only 6 his father Pittacus died. Pittacus was the king of Astro and the rule was that when he died his oldest child has to rule over the planet. Just as Astro was forced upon the throne the whole planet was screaming and shouting at Astro accusing him of killing his father just so he could be the king. Astro was only six years old so he did not know how to feel about all this other than upset, angry, sad. He knew that only after three days he could not rule anymore. Astro has failed his father and has lost his honor.
  About one year later Astro decided to talk to his close cousin Jessica, she lived on the other side of the planet, the dark, empty, and lifeless part of the planet. It took Astro one month to get there but it was worth it. Jessica was a witch but she liked to be called a wizard because she was a master at spells. “Jessica is there any way I can get my power back?” Astro asked. “Maybe but it will take me a while to find a spell.” Jessica replied. Astro waited outside of the wooden cabin that his cousin lived in for three days and finally Jessica found a spell. 
  Jessica found a spell but it had a giant catch. “Astro, if I do this you become a human and get teleported to earth” Jessica said. Astro was craving power and agreed to do this. “ If you can get back to earth than everyone would respect you and you will have your power back” Jessica implied. “So you are just using a teleportation spell?” Astro asked. “Yes” Jessica replied.
  The next day Astro was ready; he packed his bags and his sword and got ready for earth. “Ready?” Jessica asked. “Im ready. “I’ll miss you Jessica” Astro said sadly. “I’ll return I promise, one day.” Astro yelled. “Ok Astro let’s do it” Jessica said. In an instant Jessica’s hands lit up blue and Astro was staring at the lights with awe, not moving or breathing just standing there waiting to regain his honor and power. Jessica’s hands were filled with blue spheres that she put around Astro. Astro was blinded by light, he could only see whiteness. Filled with fear Astro thought that he was blind but after only a few seconds he regained vision and saw a giant green man standing before him. “What is your name?” the green man shouted. “My name is Astro, please don’t hurt me!” Astro replied. As Astro’s vision became clear he noticed that the green man was an orc. Knowing that and orc does not speak English Astro knew that this orc was white washed and did not fear him. Astro left the orc and ran outside. The sky was the bluest blue that Astro has ever seen, the clouds were fluffy and white, and the sun put the picture together as it floated in the sky.
  Astro has been traveling the world learning new things and meeting new people. Astro is thirteen now and is no longer craving power and is more focused on meeting friends and having a family one day. Seven days after Astro’s birthday he found a kingdom that was in need of a military, Astro owned his own military when he was on his planet and knows a lot about the art of war. Astro found a guard in the city and asked to speak with a military general. The guard escorted Astro to the leader of the kingdom, the king. Astro began to tell his life story and explained how he is young but is full of knowledge and power. The king made Astro a military general after the convincing story and Astro was filled with power once more. Astro no longer needed to return to his home planet because he now has more power now than he did before.

Ambitions for the Future: Astro wants to explore the world and meet new friends.  
Personality: Astro is an interesting character. Astro is very nice and almost never gets mad because he does not have a reason to be mad.
Skills: Astro is a very good story teller and is a very good leader. Astro can chop down a tree with only two swings of an axe. Young but very powerful.


Skin: http://img6.imagesha...30313153808.png

[everblue2er101 906]

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Incorrect application format used. This is the format for those already accepted to the server applying with a second account. The correct format is HERE in the first post of the topic. It's also in the spoiler below.

[b]Out-Of-Character Information[/b]
[i]Please fill out the following questions as accurately as possible, and ensure the essential details are accurate.[/i]

Minecraft Account Name:
How old are you?:
Time-Zone:
Have you read, understood and agreed to the rules?:
What previous experience have you had in role-playing?:
How did you hear about the the Lord of the Craft?:
Link any applications that you have previously made for the server: 
Have you posted this application on the Minecraft Forum? If not, then please do so (link above):
Have you read the Human lore, and shall you ensure you make use of it and follow it in your biography?:

[b]Definitions[/b]
[i]In your own words define the following terms. Do not take any definitions from elsewhere!:[/i]

Role-playing:
Meta-gaming:
Power-emoting: 

[b]In-Character Information:[/b]
[i]Complete the following biography on your character:[/i]

Full Name:
Current Age:
Sub-race (if any):
Past / History (include childhood, major-events, etc. 2+ paragraphs long):
Ambitions for the Future:[/b] 
Personality:[/b] 
Skills:[/b] 
Appearance (this must include an in-game screenshot of your skin):[/b] 
Any other details you wish to share about your character:[/b]

[b]Open-Response-Questions[/b]
[i]Each question in this section must be answered with a minimum of one paragraph which must describe the event in full. Please be as descriptive as possible and do not break character or lore at any point.[/i]
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[b]1. Whilst in the mighty human capital you notice a dark-clothed figure stealthily making his way towards the Emperor’s palace - he is clearly up to no good. There are guards within shouting distance - what do you do?[/b]

Answer:


[b]2. Whilst wandering in the deep oak forest you come across a large clearing, in which sits a small cobbled cottage. Outside it stands an unstable old man armed with a small iron blade, surrounded by two heavily armed bandits - they appear to be threatening him. You are armed with leather armour and an iron longsword, how do you react?[/b]

Answer:


[b]3. You are standing within the mighty human capital when you notice a small man standing behind a colourful stall. You approach the stall and notice that the man is selling a variety of general goods - he says that he is selling just about anything and that he has no set prices. He is willing to allow you to haggle and choose prices. What do you do? (Explain: your haggling, items of choice and the discussion that happens).[/b]

Answer:

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[everblue2er101 906]

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