[Denied][Human] Horusis's Second Application

[Horusis 0]

[o_Ben_o 193]

 

Please wait 24 hours before re-applying or face instant Denial

 

 

Please add examples to each of your definitions so we can make sure you understand completely what each definition means.

 

Insert more Server lore into your biography to make it an acceptable standard biography of character.

 

You can find a lot of server lore and interesting facts on the Lord of the Craft Wiki and many threads on the Human Role-Play Forums. Here are the links to each.

Human Wiki page

Human Role Play Forum

 

If you need any more help on Lore or have any questions feel free to ask a lore master or member of the Application Team. I am sure they will be happy to help.

 

Your Character Questions are too short, please answer these with a paragraph long answer. This will re-assure us that you understand your character well enough to role play with it.

 

Your Open Response Question need to display the role play method in them to achieve an accepted application. You need to set it out like this with the minimal of 2 paragraphs per question:

 

Edward looks around the Inn and notices a man tucked away in the corner. The man is wearing dark robes with a hood resting over his head. He walks across the room towards the man before calling over "Oi You! Come over here!" The man looks up towards Edward and gasps before attempting to get up and flee.

 

You should set out your role play that and then we will know that you can control role play with your character and also know if you have the role-playing skills to obtain a place on our server. If you can do this method with every single Open Response Questions they will be at a closer to acceptable applications standard. However do not forget to include details about your character and too make sure you stay as your character throughout the role play. Include his/her(s) strengths or weaknesses to make your role playing effective.

 

Otherwise this wasn't a too bad application. If these points are taken into account in your next application, I'm sure you might have a good chance of being accepted.

 

Good Luck.

 

Ben~

 

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