[Denied][Human] Astro's Application (3Rd)

[ThePlanetAstro 5]

Minecraft Account
Name: ThePlanetAstro

How old are you?:13

Time-Zone: Pacific Standard Time

Have you read, understood and agreed to the rules?: Yes

What previous experience have you had in role-playing?: I play lots of games
that i role-play on such as Garry's Mod, Minecraft, Planetside2, Far Cry
3, Battlefield 3, and Skyrim.

How did you hear about the the Lord of the Craft?: My
friend recommended it to me.

Link any applications that you have previously made for the server: http://www.lordofthe...plication-1st/ 

In this one i used the
wrong format but i did do lots of work on the biography.

Have you posted this application on the Minecraft Forum? If not, then please do
so (link above): Yes

Have you read the Human lore, and shall you ensure you make use of it and
follow it in your biography?: Well my character has a different kind of story
but i kind of will.



Definitions

In your own words define the following terms. Do not take any definitions
from elsewhere!:



Role-playing: Playing a game and acting as if it is real. Expressing yourself
and making your character with a backstory.

Meta-gaming: When something influences your actions in a non-supporting way.

 

Power-emoting: Making
a player do something and not giving them time to respond.

 

In-Character
Information:

Complete the following biography on your character:



Full Name: Astro (No last name)

Current Age:18

Sub-race (if any):

Past / History (include childhood, major-events, etc. 2+ paragraphs long): 

 

     
When Astro was only 6 his father

Pittacus died. Pittacus was the king of Astro and the rule was that when he
died

his oldest child has to rule over the planet. Just as Astro was forced upon the

throne the whole planet was screaming and shouting at Astro accusing him of

killing his father just so he could be the king. Astro was only six years old

so he did not know how of all this other than upset, angry, sad. He knew that

only after three days he could not rule anymore. Astro has failed his father

and has lost his honor.

 

     
About one year later Astro decided to talk to his close cousin Jessica,
she lived on

the other side of the planet, the dark, empty, and lifeless part of the planet.

It took Astro one month to get there but it was worth it. Jessica was a witch

but she liked to be called a wizard because she was a master at spells.
“Jessica

is there any way I can get my power back?” Astro asked. “Maybe but it will take

me a while to find a spell.” Jessica replied. Astro waited outside of the

wooden cabin that his cousin lived in for three days and finally Jessica found

a spell. 

 

     
Jessica found a spell but it had a giant catch. “Astro, if I do this you become
a human

and get teleported to earth” Jessica said. Astro was craving power and agreed

to do this.   “If you can get back to

earth than everyone would respect you and you will have your power back”

Jessica implied. “So you are just using a teleportation spell?” Astro asked.

“Yes” Jessica replied.

 

   
 The next day Astro was ready; he packed his bags and his sword and
got ready for

earth. “Ready?” Jessica asked. “I’m ready. “I’ll miss you Jessica” Astro said

sadly. “I’ll return I promise, one day.” Astro yelled. “Ok Astro let’s do it”

Jessica said. In an instant Jessica’s hands lit up blue and Astro was staring

at the lights with awe, not moving or breathing just standing there waiting to

regain his honor and power. Jessica’s hands were filled with blue spheres that

she put around Astro. Astro was blinded by light, he could only see whiteness.

Filled with fear Astro thought that he was blind but after only a few seconds

he regained vision and saw a giant green man standing before him. “What is your

name?” the green man shouted. “My name is Astro, please don’t hurt me!” Astro

replied. As Astro’s vision became clear he noticed that the green man was an

orc. Knowing that and orc does not speak English Astro knew that this orc was

white washed and did not fear him. Astro left the orc and ran outside. The sky

was the bluest blue that Astro has ever seen, the clouds were fluffy and white,

and the sun put the picture together as it floated in the sky.

 

     
Astro has been traveling the world learning new things and meeting new
people. Astro

is eighteen now and is no longer craving power and is more focused on meeting

friends and having a family one day. Seven days after Astro’s birthday he found

a kingdom that was in need of a military, Astro owned his own military when he

was on his planet and knows a lot about the art of war. Astro found a guard in

the city and asked to speak with a military general. The guard escorted Astro
to

the leader of the kingdom, the king. Astro began to tell his life story and

explained how he is young but is full of knowledge and power. The king made

Astro a military general after the convincing story and Astro was filled with

power once more. Astro no longer needed to return to his home planet because he

now has more power now than he did before. 

 

Ambitions for the Future: I wants to return to my home planet one day
but also wants to stay on earth and make new friends, fight in wars, and
protect what I loves. 

Personality:Astro is an interesting character. Astro is
very nice and almost never gets mad because he

does not have a reason
to be mad.

Skills: Astro is has a very strong will and
body. Astro will protect anything in danger, he can not stand to watch
something get hurt unless it is his enemy. 

Appearance (this must include an in-game screenshot of
your skin): http://img6.imagesha...30313153808.png

Any other details you wish to share about
your character: Astro is a warrior and will stop anything in his path



Open-Response-Questions

Each question in this section must be answered with a minimum of one paragraph which must describe the event infull. Please be as descriptive as possible and do not break character or lore at any point.

____



1. Whilst in the mighty human capital you notice a dark-clothed figure stealthily making his way towards the Emperor’s palace - he is clearly up to no good. There are guards
within shouting distance - what do you do?



Answer: If there was a dark-clothed figure in the
darkness i would sneak up behind it and follow it. If anything touched my
emperor i could not stand and watch. The guards would get the
message immediately and i would have the stealthy person arrested and
shown to the Emperor. If that person were to rebel I would hunt them down until
they are found and punished.

I could not just stand there and do absolutely nothing but I know
others will try and help me catch this man/women. There is a place in this
world for criminals and there is a place in hell for murderers. An act of
treason is the ultimate crime and will be stopped no matter what!





2. Whilst wandering in the deep oak forest you come across a large clearing, in which sits a small cobbled cottage.Outside it stands an
unstable old man armed with a small iron blade, surrounded by two heavily
armed bandits - they appear to be threatening him. You are armed with leather armour and an iron
longsword, how do you react?



Answer: I cannot stand to watch an old man get hurt,
this man needs to be saved and comforted. I would attempt to be
intimidating and scare them off, if the bandits to not run i would
wait until they attack first before i do anything stupid. Those
bandits will need to find another person to pick on because that old man is
under my safety. I have a past and I was hurt by millions just watching an old
man be hurt by two people will crush me inside and I will not stand for it.   





3. You are standing
within the mighty human capital when you notice a
small man standing behind a colorful stall. You approach the stall and notice that the man is selling a
variety of general goods - he says that he is selling just about anything and that he has no set prices. He is willing to allow you to haggle and choose prices. What do you do?(Explain: your haggling, items of choice and the discussion
that happens).



Answer: I would ask him if he is selling food
because i most likely have weapons already. If i were just a man with nothing i
would ask him if he needs a guard just in case a bandit comes along and
threatens him. If he refuses my offer i will simply walk away and say
nothing more. I will travel to the unknown and find new cultures. I would
travel until I meet an orc so I can learn about them. But I do need some food
if I am going to travel somewhere. This man could be the only chance I have of
exploring and traveling and living a life.

[ΩMercenΩ 67]

Under Review

Your application has been:

Reasoning:

-Your metagaming definition isn't quite on the ball, look for more information on it.

-Your character does not fit in with our lore whatsoever, there is no king of the world, and no other planets that people can come from. I recommend looking at our wiki and becoming familiar with it, do not use lore from other servers or rp experiences.

-You cannot simply state that your character begins with a position of power, you must start somewhere, and earn power through your in game rp. 

-Use specific cities names, it is impressive if you actually use these, as it shows your knowledge. Do not simply say, the city.

-Your ORQs need work. They need to fit in with your character, and yours offer different courses of life, especially the last one.

[ΩMercenΩ 67]

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