[Denied]Dwarf App

[urukaresh 2]

b]Out-Of-Character Information
Please fill out the following questions as accurately as possible, and ensure the essential details are accurate.

Minecraft Account Name: TechnicalBlaze
How old are you?:18
Time-Zone: est.
Have you read, understood and agreed to the rules?:yes
What previous experience have you had in role-playing?: yes
How did you hear about the the Lord of the Craft?:Friends that play lord of the craft
Link any applications that you have previously made for the server:
Have you posted this application on the Minecraft Forum? If not, then please do so (link above):
Have you read the Dwarven lore, and shall you ensure you make use of it and follow it in your biography?:yes i have read about the dwarves

Definitions
In your own words define the following terms. Do not take any definitions from elsewhere!:

Role-playing: to take on the role of a different person
Meta-gaming: when you know something out of character and then do it in the game
Power-emoting: when you make your person god or do something with out saying your going to do it 

In-Character Information:
Complete the following biography on your character:

Full Name: Gradgore the "Iron Mine"
Current Age:40
Sub-race (if any): mountain Dwarves
Clan (if any): Grand axe
Past / History (include childhood, major-events, etc. 2+ paragraphs long):I have one brother and a father but they both died in a mining accident as the cave was coming down my brother pushed me out and ran back into save our father. But as I was getting ready to run back in the entrance collapsed and I couldn't get back in. Then I tried for hours to find them by mining my way back in but there was to much ruble. I gave up and clamed the cave as a final resting place for my Father and Brother my mother died from bandits she was out of the town when bandits made a raid on a small village and as she was trying to escape she got hit with a couple of arrows. In the back and did not move I make my living now by serving my people and mining what ore I can find.
Ambitions for the Future: wants to help build a grand hall for his people to where they will remember him as the great builder of all time
Personality: grumpy doesn't like much people and loves his ale
Skills: great with an axe and mining
Appearance (this must include an in-game screenshot of your skin): http://www.minecraftskins.com/skin/1111561/honeydew-from-yogscast/
Any other details you wish to share about your character: I am great at mining and can drink a lot I have a very long beard and always ready to fight.

Open-Response-Questions
Each question in this section must be answered with a minimum of one paragraph which must describe the event in full. Please be as descriptive as possible and do not break character or lore at any point.
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1. Whilst mining deep in the undergrounds of Kalos you see a large deposit of diamond ore at the other side of the ravine you are on. There is a very thin rock bridge that looks precariously unstable, but it is the only way to access the deposit. What do you do?

Answer: I would grab two pick axe and some rope but make sure its the same length of the bridge I am walking on. Then I would find something to tie the rope around and then I would tie the other end around my waste and start walking across the bridge way. When the bridge starts to fall I would run and jump to the other side and stab my pick axes into the wall and work my way up to the top.

2. You are sitting in the local tavern with a large pint of ale in your hand - sitting nearby you is a rather young dwarf whom is clearly going through a bad time. He is crying to himself, and clutching a small wooden hammer toy. In the other corner of the room two shady dwarves are sitting whispering to each other and pointing occasionally at the dwarf. They stand up, one with a small dagger in his hand and begin to approach the young dwarf. What do you do?

Answer: I would walk up with my axe and stand in front of the young dwarf and look at the two dwarfs. If they come closer I would tell the young dwarf to run and then I would attack. I would render them unarmed then I would wait for the guards to come and let them know what happened. If I could not render them unarmed then I would kill them both and then go find the kid and ask him what happened if I could find him. 

3. Whilst wandering through the Dwarven Caverns you hear a voice call out to you; “Oi, ye’! C’mere n’ get ye’rself an ale!”. You spin on your heel and see a heavily bearded bar-owner looking at you - a huge grin on his face, and a mug of ale in his hand. How do you react?

Answer: I take caution as I walk over to the bar owner and pay for the mug of Ale. But as I do so have my dagger at my side incase anything happens and then I look down at the ale before I drink it and see what's been put into the mug to see if he had tampered with the Ale or not. Then if he didn't I would drink the Ale and go on my Mary way. But if he tried to kill me I would attack him and kill him if the guards asked me what happened I would tell them that the bar owner tried to kill me.

 

(I'm posting this application for a friend who could not get the account creation to work.))

[ΩMercenΩ 67]

Your Application has Been:

Reasoning:

Your power-emoting definition isn't quite right.

Try to use examples to further help with your definitions.

Your dwarf is very cliche, something I witness a lot with dwarves. Only child, family killed one way, and miner. Go beyond this, if your family died use this as a motive to do something specific!

You cannot use a Honeydew skin.

Your Open Response questions contain power emoting and lack detail. We see these as a sneak peek at your rp, really go into great detail and flaunt your rp skills. Also, write these in third person, not first.

[ΩMercenΩ 67]

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