[Denied][Elf] Pinsir99's Application

[Pinsir99 526]

Note: I was asked my a GM to re-apply to the server if I wish to be un-banned. He said I must be accepted to be un-banned.

 

 

Out-Of-Character Information

Main Account Name: Pinsir99

How old are you?: 14

Time-Zone: EST

Have you read, understood and agreed to the rules?: Yes

What previous experience have you had in role-playing?: Manly I played on this server for a few months.

How did you hear about the the Lord of the Craft?: Minecarft Forum

Link any applications that you have previously made for the server: http://www.lordofthecraft.net/forum/index.php?/topic/84125-denieddark-elf-pinsir99s-application/ http://www.lordofthecraft.net/forum/index.php?/topic/84222-denieddark-elf-pinsir99s-application/

Have you posted this application on the Minecraft Forum? : Yes I have

Have you read the Elven lore, and shall you ensure you make use of it and follow it in your biography?: Yes, I have read the LotC lore extensively.

 

 

Definitions

 

Role-playing: When you basically put on the shoes of your character and take on their personality and live the life of that character, without using outside information not obtained by your character.

 

Meta-gaming: Meta-gaming is when you take information not learned or told in RP and use it for your benefit or use it at all in RP. Also if you were in a dispute with someone outside RP you should not bring that fight inside RP.

 

Power-emoting: Power-emoting (Also know as power'gaming) Is when your character uses or does something that they can not do or abuses the emote system to do something that they cannot do or before someone can react to your first statement or emote. 

 

In-Character Information:

 

Full Name: Vierna Maerron

Current Age: 19

Race: Elf

Sub-race (if any): Dark Elf

 

History: 

   Ever since she was a child she was raised by two loving parents. Her father always wanted a son so when she was old enough to hold a bow he started to teach her to live off the land. For years she would go hunting with her father and her life was a hard but simple life, she enjoyed being around nature most of her life. But then it all changed. After a night of hunting with her father they were attacked. Vierna never had a chance to see the attacker, but she knew that the scream coming from her right was from the death of her father. She ran, like she had never ran before, l knowing that she was the only hope of providing for her mother. She rushed inside the house expecting to see her mother cooking dinner or tanning leather from the the night before's kill, but she was not there. After scrambling over everything in her house try to find her, she found her body. Dead. Her mother and father both dead. She could not believe it. Everything she had known  is gone. She quickly went to grab her father's quarterstaff, which she had become proficient in her short life, from under her father bed, she then quickly scrambled over to her desk, knowing the bandits might not be far behind, she looked quickly to see if any of her fathers books or scrolls had survived the ransacking of her house. All gone but his journal, she quickly grabbed it, grabbed a handful of dried venison and ran out the door, looking for the road her father always told her to stay away from. 

   She saw a lantern swinging next tot an ox drawn cart. She was not sure that unexpected visitors would be welcome on the dwarvern trading caravan, so she quickly snuck on top of the main wagon and after hours of waiting, finally fell asleep. She was wakened suddenly when she heard a gruff voice speak broken elven, she was barely able to regain her senses when she was tossed to the ground with large metal boot keeping her down. Her limited studies hindered her ability to understand them, but she was able to get a general idea of what they were saying. They thought she was a thief. She tried to explain to them her predicament but they would not listen. After spending a night in what she though was a jail, the was tossed out of what looked like a city, at least what she thought one looked like. She stared mystified by the great city. But she knew she had to go, or risk further confrontation. She started off the other way looking in her pack. They were respectful enough to leave her bow, quarterstaff, and a note. It read "From a friend of the elves", below it there was enough food to last her a trip to the elven city. She started off knowing this luck will not last. She was not hindered by the death of her family, but she wondered if the god her father believed in existed, and if it did, why would it let something like this happen? But she continued, knowing her father would want something better for her. She trudged through rain, snow, and lightning, with the memory of her parents driving her on, never giving up...

 

Ambitions for the Future: She hopes to understand what her father believed in, but continues to live off the land on her trip to her kin's city, slowly reading through her fathers journal, thinking it might be something more.

 

Personality:She trusts people to heavily, but is resilient and trustworthy herself. Living in seclusion has caused her to be very naive and clueless, she is not the brightest elf.

 

Skills:She is proficient with the bow and a novice with the quarterstaff, she is good at Cooking but never liked the idea of farming.

 

Appearance: Tall for a dark elf with long white/silver hair. Her eyes are like purple lavender orbs, an inner fire can be seen when looking at her. She likes to wear looser fitting clothes so she doesn't burden herself when trying to catch prey.

 

Open-Response-Questions

 

1. As you walk through the deep forests you hear the sound of whispering and snickering. Upon inspection you realize that a group of High Elves are mocking a small Wood Elf child. How do you react?

 

Answer: Vierna slowly approaches from behind a tree, she silently observes the mocking, not truly understanding what is going on. After figuring out that the small elf does not like the way the other elves are treating her, Vierna moves in next to the child, after putting her arm around the child's shoulder Vierna  says with authority, "Are you bothering this child?", At first the other elves laugh thinking that such a young elf could do anything to stop them. Realizing this, Vierna walks off again back into the tree line. After another minute of observing, she knocks an arrow and takes aim at the tree directly behind the tallest elf. She looses the arrow and it lands right behind the elf. After seeing the shocked expression of the elves and after seeing one of the closest elves sprint off, she knows that her work is done and that the child will be safe, she strides off back into the forest.

 

2. Whilst wandering through the Elven forests you come across a frail old man with a walking stick. He collapses in front of you, falling to the ground with a sharp thud. Out of his pocket falls a small pouch of gold coins, which hits the ground and splits open spreading coins across the pathway. The man lies there, defenseless - what do you do?

 

Answer: After watching for a while, she realizes that the man will not get back up alone, she quickly and quietly moves to collect the coins, and places them back into the pouch, after propping the man up next to a tree, gives him a bit of water and leaves a small bit of her food next to him, knowing that she still needs food to finish her journey  knowing that she can not do much more for the old man, she continues off into the shadows of the tress. 

 

3. Whilst traversing the Elven Woodlands, you come across a small clearing in which a colored carriage sits. A trader stands outside of it and calls you over, telling you of his wares. He points out that his carriage sells just about everything, and that he's willing for you to haggle for a price. What does your character do? 

 

Answer: As she walks up the the cart, she tries to stand taller, but clumsily trips on a root of a nearby tree, making a fool of herself. After walking up the the now laughing trader, she asks what it will cost for enough food to last a few days. Knowing that the elf seems desperate, he starts off at a very high price of 20 minas. knowing she cannot afford that, she tries to lower the price to 9 minas, she begs desperately, the trader responds by raising it to 25 minas or she will have to go hungry. She takes out her bow and knowing that she is likely to catch more that she could buy, strides off into the forest, hoping for the game to be abundant at this type of year, knowing that the winter snow will drive many away.

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[Mystery 118]

Denied,

 

You failed to do what I asked, I asked, "Please fix the villainous act in your second Q&A." All you did was delete the one part that was villainous. 

 

You say, "After watching for a while, she realizes that the man will not get back up alone, she quickly and quietly moves to collect the coins, and places them back into the pouch, after propping the man up next to a tree, gives him a bit of water and leaves a small bit of her food next to him, knowing that she still needs food to finish her journey  knowing that she can not do much more for the old man, she continues off into the shadows of the tress. " 

 

This is not acceptable, especially from a former LotC player. All you had to do was fix one part, but instead you just deleted it.

 

Please wait 24 hours to re-apply. 

 

This time follow my instructions.

[Mystery 118]

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