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Out-Of-Character Information
Please fill out the following questions as accurately as possible, and ensure the essential details are accurate.

Main Account Name: rue12345
Alternate Account Name:
How old are you?: 13
Time-Zone: USA Northern hemisphere, east coast
  Have you read, understood and agreed to the rules?: Yes
  What previous experience have you had in role-playing?: Oher minecraft servers (Including my own),Roblox, Garys Mod

  Definitions
  In your own words define the following terms. Do not take any definitions from elsewhere!:

  Role-playing: When one takes on the role of a character and acts them out without script
  Meta-gaming: Using outside Role-play information for ones benefit
  Power-emoting: Saying one can do somthing no matter what- Ex: *Kills you, no dodge, no miss*

  In-Character Information:
   Complete the following biography on your character:

    Full Name: Rue Loxancastor
    Current Age: 19
    Race: Human
    Sub-race (if any): None
Past / History (include childhood, major-events, etc. 2+ paragraphs long): Over 19 years ago in the Kingdom of Salvus in the capital of Solace, there was a small cottage crowded inbetween buildings. The cottage glowed warmly inside, but the woman living in there was another story, she was plump, with orange-red hair(Not very common) and dark green eyes. She wore a clean white dress and a dark purple apron. Her husbandlft her, she had 3 babies, and 2 more were being expected. The woman had always been cruel to others, and cared nothing for anyone who wasn't family. She cooked stew in a great big pot, filled with delicious meat, plenty for a family of 20! A sudden knock at the door startled her and she dropped her spoon. She growled and yelled- "Who dares to come and bother me this time a'night!!!" . She stampped her way to the door ad overheard a female voice-"Jefferson this is a bad idea!" She sounded distressed but the plump woman didn't seem to care. She slammed the door open and growled- "What was that?!". Outside on the street near te steps stood who must have been a couple. A woman stood in fear behind a man, the man was thin and tall, but his skin was rather light, he had black hair and black-blue eyes. He was dressed in very fine clothes. The woman behind him was diffrent, she had blackish red hair and bluish-green eyes. She had a raggy dress with a hood over her head. The man appeared to have a bundle in his arms. "Who are you?!" the plump woman bellowed. The man cleared his throat and said as calmly as he could- "Mame, we are sorry we bothered you this night but we come to you with a plea." The plump woman just stood in the doorway wth narrowed eyes, so the man continued. "I am Jefferson and his is Mary your sister, w-we....have a child that needs caring for, and w-we prayed...you could p-p-possibly take her in?". The mans voice trembled this time. The young woman behind the man, Mary quietly whispered "Rachel, we're sisters please we-". Rachel suddenly screamed out in rage "YOU EXPECT ME TO TAKE IN YOUR PATHETIC CHILD WHEN I ALREADY HAVE 3?! AND EXPE-" The man suddely spoke and said, we'll giveyou gold bars.... 10 to be exact.."woman Rachel suddenly stopped her rant and looked at the man in suprise, but it sooned morphed into suspicion. "You ARE rich, so why are you giving this usless child to me?!" The Jefferson glared at the plump Rachel. "I'm rich, Mary is poor, if our family saw us or this child they would split us apart!!!" Rachel smiled greedily at the gold bars. "Lets see the infant" was all she said. Jefferson turned the bundle in his arms to reveal a small baby, with black hair and dark blue eyes (Just like her Daddy), she was awake but just barley, she had light skin just like her father. "Alright, fine!" She grabbed the infant and gold bars and shouted at the sorry couple to begone. Rachel suddenly saw a note inbetween one of the gold bars. It read- Rue Lox Castor. Rachel smiled evily knowing this was to be the childs name. Instead she threw it ino the sewer and said "Your nothing but a rotten Buff, its all you ever will be!" The couple never returned and in Rachels arms the child began to cry.

A few years later the cottage was home to six children, one was large and had red hair like her mum, her name was Cretched The others were smaller, but were mostly the same except one. Her name was Buff and she had stunning black hair and dark blue eyes. Her sisters hated her and pushed her around, stole her treasured and called her and I quote "A stinkey wittle Buff!!!" and laughed. The mother Rachel was worse, she infact might as well have incouranged them, and assumed Cretched was always right. They treated her like a servent Then school started and things went from bad to worse. None of the kids wanted to miss with Cretched or her gang of sisters so they made fun of Buff as well, they said things like "HEY BUFF YOU AIN'T SO TUFF ARE YE?" "Hey Buff had enough?!" The laughter that followed was traumatizing. One day when Buff was sent to the market to buy some apples "And don't bother comin' back without them apples!" mother Rachel cackled and shut he door. However, Buff enjoyed the solitude frm her sisters and walked with a small but pretty smile on her face down the street. When she got to the market she stopped, she heard a rather loud arguement coming from the weapon stall. Two men, a gaurdsmen and a merchant were shouting over the best bow Buff had layed her eyes on. It was simple, but it shined and the arrows that went with it begged to be shot. "That bow is useless to me!!" the guardsmen howled. "The deal is off!" The guard grabbed his money away from the merchant and stomped off huffing. The merchant looked as though he was about to burst with anger. Thats when Buff had a idea. If she got that bow he could hunt as much free food as she wanted and not have to get yelled at for buying the poorest apples anymore! And the forest was better then the market by far. She skipped up to the merchant and tapped his arm. "What?!- oh, hello little girl!" The merchant was a dwarf with an orange-red beared and a helmet that looked like it could slip off at any moment. "Can I buy that bow sir? Please??" Buff said in the most softesst and pleasnt voice she culd muster. The dwarven-merchant knew the guardsmen wasn't coming back, and it was better to get somthing then nothing. So he said "Alright, how much ye got?" Buff opened the coin purse and it was filled with half the price the bow was. So he took it. He gave Buff the Bow and she smiled with glee. She skipped back to the cottage but somthing caught her eye. A peice of wet pape near a spouting sewer pipe. The paper somehow looked familiar to hr. She picked it up and opened it, she gasped. She suddenly heard a voice in her head pronounce it so perfectly, it was her fathers "Rue Loxancastor". Buff was filled with rage, Rachel the Mother told Buff she was found on the street and her parents threw her away, so Rachel called her Buff because her parents hated her too. No, Buff thought They loved me but gave me away for my own safety....

                Buff was smart, she had a plan to escape Rachel the Mother and her 5 cousines. She walked home with a small grin on her face and opened the door to the cottage. "Great news!" Buff said. Rachel looked suprised and frowned, untrusting of Buff, she didnt like the look of this "Good News". Buff knew Rachel was suspicous so Buff put on an act, and when she looked at Rachel she tried to look a little on edge. She showed her bow and said "N-now we can get all the free food we wanted with t-this.." At first, The Mother Rachel was outraged but Buff's "sisters" said they would love to be able to afford meat again (Specificly Beef). Rachel slowly changed her mind, sighing she said "Oh alright, Now Buff you better get us that meat by sun down or I'll throw that bow into the fire!!!" Buff acted afraid, but was secretly trying no to laugh. Buff suddenly smacked her forehead in fake suprise "I forgot somthing in my room! I'll be right and go out" Buff ran to her room. She kneeled to pull out a backpack filled with items and objects, old useless things that brought her joy. Buff slid a few arrows in her back pack and was about to slip out of the house when Rachel the Mother turned her head and whispered harshly " You better be back...." Buff tured her head and saw her -again "sisters"- scowl a her, giving Buff some of the meanist looks in history. Buff wimpered and ran off. She ran onto he edge of town and into the forest. She continued to run until she was out of breath. She saw a high tree and scaled it, trying not to look down as she went. When she got to the top she could see the soft glow of the Kingdom of Salvus in the distance, she smiled a warm smile, knowing she was no longer Buff, but Rue Loxancastor...
         Ambitions for the Future: Rue's only real ambition is to explore and help those who deserve it. She does, however have a small ambition to find out who or where her parents are. Some day she might be able to find them and they could be a family again.
         Personality: Rue is known to be a creative, funny and rebellious character. She tries to solve problems with her wit and ability to communicate rather then solve them with her fists. Rue always tries to lighten the mood when hard times are coming and to look on the brightside. She is also extreamly rebellious to anything or anyone who is being hurtfull, unfair or plain wrong. 
        Skills: Rue is very good at shooting a bow and arrow, shes even better at sniping. She also has the ability of negotiation and persuasion. She tried diffrent tactics of speech to try to help someone.
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      Any other details you wish to share about your character:

I don't have any other parts to my character, please tell me of any spelling errors, sorry if I have any, my keyboards isn't working the way its supposed to.

 

I hope this gets accepted :D

[Mystery 118]

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Your bio is very messy. There are a lot of loose ends that don't add up.

 

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