[Denied]Slash9239's [Elf] Application.

[NomadGaia 930]

Minecraft Account Name: xXVenomCastXx

 How old are you?:13

 Time-Zone: Mountain Time

 Have you read, understood and agreed to the rules?: Yes

 What previous experience have you had in role-playing?: I roleplay Every Day. Its just so much fun! I play skyrim and my friends think I have really cool ideas and I play WOW

 How did you hear about the the Lord of the Craft?: My Bros.

 Link any applications that you have previously made for the server: None.

 Have you posted this application on the Minecraft Forum? If not, then please do so (link above):(Sorry My Planet minecraft dosn't work does that make it deny me?)

 Have you read the Elven lore, and shall you ensure you make use of it and follow it in your biography?:Yes.

 

Role-playing: Playing a game the Allows you to be someone you create in said game.It Usually midevil and An MMORPG..
(Example: Creating a character in Skyrim and playing the game as that character.)

 Meta-gaming: The Use of Knowledge from a past life being used in this life to your advantage. To use something that you had in a previous life.
(Example: Hey Guys I know a Shortcut I used it When I was a dwarf. Let's Go use it!)
 
Power-emoting: The use of emotes in a way that takes away the ability for a person to react. It is usually used with Villinous acts.
(Example: *John Pickpockets Steven.)

 

Full Name: AngelFire Sylvari

 Current Age:26

 Race: Elf

 Sub-race (if any): High Elf

 Past / History (include childhood, major-events, etc. 2+ paragraphs long):My Parents Died In an Orc Raid when I was 13. I

 

am a good fisher. I also Crafted Jewelry with my Mother. I can Read and Write. But I can Sing Like An

 Angel. I Love making Friends. Occasionally I Explore. My Parents visited Sylvenor once a human seed.They would

 

bring back Delicious apples. My Mothers Main Magic Class is the Way of the Shaman. She had an Iron Staff with a

 

wither Skull on both ends. Also my Mother once experimented with random spells and turned my Eyes Green. My

 

Parents used to Take me To  Nature's Boon All the time because they knew it was my Favorite Festival. My Father

 

Came Down With Ki'katta When he was 43.

             

   AngelFire Was a  Bright girl. She lived in Haelun'or With her parents Sweaka and Silkela. Her dad Sweaka was a

 gifted hunter. Her Mother Silkea was a fine craftswoman. The Day AngelFire Found Her Parents Dead and changed her

 

forever. She had been In the woods Just Exploring. But After Investigating She Found out it was the Hideout of A group

 of orcish bandits. So she Hurried home to tell her Parents About the Bandit camp. But when she got home The bandits got

 

to her house first. Her Father's Dying words were "Live in ArmaLuna its safe there, Sweetie I love You". She Was

 

Devastated. She did the only thing she new how to do. Find help. While she was running through the trees she tripped on a

 

log and cut her back on a log.

 

Ambitions for the Future: I want to be a bard. I wish to settle down in ArmaLuna. Possibly Get married.

 

Personality: Friendly, Curious, Helpful, Fun-loving, and Adventurous.

 Skills: Fishing, Singing, Dancing. I am skilled with a Sil. I also know how to use a berr fairly well.

 Appearance (this must include an in-game screenshot of your skin): green eyes platinum hair, tan skin, and a green dress.

 

 

Any other details you wish to share about your character: I get distracted easily. I am Nimble. I have A Large Scar
Going Down My Back.

 

 

 1. As you walk through the deep forests you hear the sound of whispering and snickering. Upon inspection you realize that a group of High Elves are mocking a small Wood Elf child. How do you react?

 Answer: I walk up to the group and say "Wow you would go so low as to mock a defensless child? I can't belive you fools." If they do not listen I'd walk up up behind one of the Elves and knock him unconsious. As the other ones were walking away I Bend down and ask the wood elf if He/Shes alright. Then I help the Elf Home. And I tell His/hers Parents what happened

 2. Whilst wandering through the Elven forests you come across a frail old man with a walking stick. He collapses in front of you, falling to the ground with a sharp thud. Out of his pocket falls a small pouch of gold coins, which hits the ground and splits open spreading coins across the pathway. The man lies there, defenseless - what do you do?

Answer:I help him up. I pick up his coins and put them in his pack. Then I Pick up his walking stick and give it to him. Then I take a bit of food and some money from my pack and put them in his pack. He Then insists I don't do anymore for him. He says Ive done enough.  Then a turtle walks by. We then have a small conversation about turtles.(Remember I get Distracted easily.) Finnaly I wave him goodbye and he waves back.  Then I send him on his way.

 3. Whilst traversing the Elven Woodlands, you come across a small clearing in which a colored carriage sits. A trader stands outside of it and calls you over, telling you of his wares. He points out that his carriage sells just about everything, and that he's willing for you to haggle for a price. What does your character do? (Please include:- item, haggling for prices and the discussion involved).

Answer:I walk up then He hurries me over and asks me why im out here all by my lonesome. I tell him I dont have parents then he says he sorry and says "Ill tell you what, Ill Give you one thing out of my cart for free." So I look through the cart and Spot a book and quill. I say ill take the book and quill. He Asks me "Can You write?" I say no. Then he spends a bunch of time teaching me writing Basics of Writing.

Lastly I buy some food and supplies like Food and water. He asks for 15 Minas. I manage to take it down to 9 minas.

 

 

 

Other Questions: If I were a Bard Would I have to Write my own songs? Also If there's a song on YouTube may I link it in like a book?

 

 

Also May I have two Professions? Bard And Writer.

 

 

 

For an Extra I put in a Poem I would write in LOTC:

 

Over The Hill,

 

Across the Valley,

 

Lay a Silent Sleeping Willow,

 

 

It gives to thee,

 

Who Gives to it,

 

A Fountain,

 

A Bird,

 

A Stone.

 

This is the Tale of the Sleeping Willow.

[Aiden 173]

Under review

 

 

 

 

 

Please wait 24-hours before reapplying or you will face an instant denial.

 

Reasons:

 

1. Make sure you know the difference better MMORPG/RPG and RP. Go here for a bit of help: http://www.lordofthecraft.net/forum/index.php?/topic/83914-lotc-official-rp-vs-rpg-why-your-character-is-not-perfect/

 

2. Your meta-gaming definition could use a bit more.. clarification. You may use google or the forums for help, but do not directly copy & paste anything.

 

3. Please make your skin have a paler skin tone, as high elves are very pale.

 

4. Having your parents get killed by orcs is a cliche on LoTC. Please change this to something a bit more.. original.

 

5. There is a lore inconsistency  in your biography Please include something about going from Asulon to Anthos, as Arma'luna was in asulon and it is not in anthos. Also, as a side note, know that 26 is extremely young for an elf, still considered a child.

 

 

6. Please add a bit more detail to your open response questions, as well as dialouge.

 

7. In your first open response question, you use the word wow. Think a bit more medieval with your character's vocabulary. Also,  it seems that your character knocks one of the high elves out a bit too easily; you said something before hand and then your character being able to hit him in the head hard enough to knock him out seems unlikely.  Also note that it's a group of high elves, so they would probably react if you knocked out one of their friends.

 

 

As to those questions,

 

1. You could or you could try to find songs in-character to play. Remember to not meta-game!

 

2. Yes, but you could link it using control-V to paste in chat. (Using brackets to indicate l-ooc, (( ))

 

3. Yes.

 

 

Message me if you have any questions or need any help!

[Aiden 173]

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