[Denied]Zanemane (Dwarf

[zanemane 0]

Out-Of-Character Information

Please fill out the following questions as accurately as possible, and ensure the essential details are accurate.

Minecraft Account Name: zanemane

How old are you?: 11

Time-Zone: GMT -7

Have you read, understood and agreed to the rules?: Yes

What previous experience have you had in role-playing?: In Terraria

How did you hear about the the Lord of the Craft?: The player Mitchamaya

Link any applications that you have previously made for the server: http://www.lordofthecraft.net/forum/index.php?/topic/84470-hello-there-i-would-like-to-join-this-fine-server/#entry731466

http://www.lordofthecraft.net/forum/index.php?/topic/84551-have-at-thee/#entry732561

Have you posted this application on the Minecraft Forum? If not, then please do so (link above):

Have you read the Dwarven lore, and shall you ensure you make use of it and follow it in your biography?: Yes I have

Definitions

In your own words define the following terms. Do not take any definitions from elsewhere!:

Role-playing: Acting as another person or magical character Ex: I am merlin the great wizard

Meta-gaming: Using information that you know but you character would not know Ex: seeing the names above other players head

Power-emoting: A physical or emotional emote to get ready to do an action. Ex *raises hand to slap*

In-Character Information:

Complete the following biography on your character:

Full Name: Rricorack the flatulent

Current Age: 79

Sub-race (if any): Mountain

Clan (if any):

Past / History (include childhood, major-events, etc. 2+ paragraphs long):

    In Kal’Urgan I grew up with my mom and father. As a very young dwarf i had fiery red hair and was not very strong so I was shunned not only was I shunned but also as a child I was bullied by the other dwarfs because my beard was not the same size as theirs this enraged me. From that day forward I vowed to become stronger and better in all ways compared to those meager dwarfs. This moment I forced myself to train to be the best that I could possibly be. Since the other dwarfs bullied me I decided to teach them a lesson. As I chased them I decided to stop and let them go but they made my the dwarf I am.

    As a young dwarf I was always fighting with my friends (Physically). One day me and my friend got into a fight with some older dwarfs. as we battled fighting, biting, and kicking they grabbed my friend from the fight and one of them pulled out a knife and held it to his throat. as a begged them to stop our parents came and saved us. That day i vowed never to fight without a good reason.

Ambitions for the Future: Fight in a huge war, then settle down

Personality: Normally calm but quick to get angry

Skills: Fighting

Appearance

Any other details you wish to share about your character: I am proud to be a descendant of Urgan.

Open-Response-Questions

Each question in this section must be answered with a minimum of one paragraph which must describe the event in full. Please be as descriptive as possible and do not break character or lore at any point.

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1. Whilst mining deep in the undergrounds of Kalos you see a large deposit of diamond ore at the other side of the ravine you are on. There is a very thin rock bridge that looks precariously unstable, but it is the only way to access the deposit. What do you do?

Answer: I would run to the other dwarfs and tell them that I have found a bountiful vein of diamond. We would attempt to build a bridge. If that didn't work I personally would go over and try to mine the diamonds myself.I made it to the diamonds I would mine it and then split it with the other dwarfs.

2. You are sitting in the local tavern with a large pint of ale in your hand - sitting nearby you is a rather young dwarf whom is clearly going through a bad time. He is crying to himself, and clutching a small wooden hammer toy. In the other corner of the room two shady dwarves are sitting whispering to each other and pointing occasionally at the dwarf. They stand up, one with a small dagger in his hand and begin to approach the young dwarf. What do you do?

Answer: I would ask the the shady dwarfs what they were doing with a knife in their hands. Then swiftly kick the knife out of their hands grab it then tell them to back off. I would chase them out of the tavern and then would throw the knife at their feet. I would run to the dwarf who was crying and ask him what was wrong, and I would try to help him whatever he need.

3. Whilst wandering through the Dwarven Caverns you hear a voice call out to you; “Oi, ye’! C’mere n’ get ye’rself an ale!”. You spin on your heel and see a heavily bearded bar-owner looking at you - a huge grin on his face, and a mug of ale in his hand. How do you react?

Answer: I would accept the ale and inspect it for any visual signs of poison. Without any signs of poison I would take a large swig and gulp it down. After feeling nothing out of the ordinary i would leave the proper amount of change and walk out of the tavern. Shortly after leaving I vomited I ran into the tavern and commanded that the the bartender give me the antidote or he would pay.

[Aiden 173]

 

Please wait 24-hours before reapplying. Failure to do so will result in a denial.

 

Reasons:

 

1. Your power-emoting definition is incorrect. You may use the forums or google to help you, but do not directly copy and paste anything!

 

2. While your biography was good, you need to add more server lore. The lore can be found on the wiki, here: http://www.lordofthecraft.net/wiki/wikka.php?wakka=HomePage

 

3. Please expand on the ambitions for the future, skills, appearance, and personality questions.

 

4. Expand all three of your open response questions. Add more detail, add dialouge, etc.

 

5. There are bouts of power-emoting in your second O-R-Q. Perhaps expanding on the small fight between your dwarf and the shady dwarf would clarify this.

 

Message me if you have any questions or need any help!

[Aiden 173]

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