[Denied]Sulsagamer's Application

[sulsagamer 0]

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Out-Of-Character Information
Please fill out the following questions as accurately as possible, and ensure the essential details are accurate.

Minecraft Account Name: sulsagamer
How old are you?: 14
Time-Zone: US, Mountain Time
Have you read, understood and agreed to the rules?: Yes, I have rad and agreed to the rules.
What previous experience have you had in role-playing?: I have had a account on your server before and want to play on it again.
How did you hear about the the Lord of the Craft?: I heard about it long ago on youtube.
Link any applications that you have previously made for the server:  http://www.lordofthecraft.net/forum/index.php?/topic/85277-sulsagamers-application/
Have you posted this application on the Minecraft Forum? If not, then please do so (link above):
Have you read the Human lore, and shall you ensure you make use of it and follow it in your biography?: Yes, I have read the lore and I will follow it in my biography.

Definitions
In your own words define the following terms. Do not take any definitions from elsewhere!:

Role-playing: Acting like a different character instead of yourself. Taking on their personality and mood.
Meta-gaming: Using information you know outside the game to use to your advantage in the game.
Power-emoting: Emoting something that doesn't give the other person a chance to do anything about it. Example: *Takes 100 gold from Bob's pocket*

In-Character Information:
Complete the following biography on your character:

Full Name: Sulrek Hoodson
Current Age: 22
Sub-race (if any): Northern
Past / History (include childhood, major-events, etc. 2+ paragraphs long): I was born and raised in Oren. My father loved fighting, it was what he did for fun. My mother was warm hearted and kind. She always tried to help when she could. I was 11 years old when my dad started teaching me how to handle a sword and bow. By 15 I was pretty good. I could protect myself when I found myself in bad situations. I liked to visit the Elves in the Elven Slum. These were wood elves. They were tall with dark skin and dirty blonde hair. Some of the elves had dyed their hair green, though. They were very kind to me. When I visited they were always happy to spare me some of their food if I was hungry. When I was 17 my mother died of sickness. Me and my father tried our best to try and cure her but it was no use. My father was never the same. He stoped fighting and instead fancied quietly fishing or cooking. When I was 21 my father died from old age and I was left alone with no family. After I had lost both my parents I visited the Elven Slum a lot more. It was a place that I felt happy in. After my father's death I started to learn to cook and fish so as to feed myself if needed.
Ambitions for the Future: I want to be one of the best warriors Asulon has ever seen.
Personality: I am brave, noble, and always ready for adventure. If you need someone to tag along on your adventure I'm the guy to go to. I am a kind person who won't attack unless it is needed.
Skills: I am great with swords and good with a bow. I have amazing unarmed skills that let me be able to defend myself well even without a sword.
Appearance (this must include an in-game screenshot of your skin): I am a Northern with pale skin and orange hair. I wear dark lether shoes and light lether pants and shirt. I am 5ft 11in tall with a muscular build. I have deep blue eyes and a short beard that circles around my lips. My clothes would be be clean and not worn. My shirt would have a cut down the middle which would be held together by a belt made of black leather with a silver buckle. Skin Picture: http://dl.dropbox.com/u/64145180/2013-04-01_17.22.55.png
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Open-Response-Questions
Each question in this section must be answered with a minimum of one paragraph which must describe the event in full. Please be as descriptive as possible and do not break character or lore at any point.
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1. Whilst in the mighty human capital you notice a dark-clothed figure stealthily making his way towards the Emperor’s palace - he is clearly up to no good. There are guards within shouting distance - what do you do?

Answer: I would walk over to him and ask him what he was up to. He would reply not much and contiune heading towards the Emperor's palace. I would persist and say where are you going? He would not answer and start moving away from me faster. I would grab his shoulder and he would turn around and stab in in the leg with a iron dagger. My leg would start to give way and I would drag him down with me and hold him down while shouting for the guards to come. The man would try and stab me again but I would grab his wrist and twist it so the dagger fell out of his hand. The guards had heard my shouts and had come over to help me. After they had contained him I would pick up a large branch off the ground to use to hold myself up and walk to get some medicle treament.

2. Whilst wandering in the deep oak forest you come across a large clearing, in which sits a small cobbled cottage. Outside it stands an unstable old man armed with a small iron blade, surrounded by two heavily armed bandits - they appear to be threatening him. You are armed with leather armour and an iron longsword, how do you react?

Answer: I would approach quietly and listen in. After I knew the old man was in danger I would sneak a bit closer, pick up a rock and chuck it at one of them. The bandit who washit would turn around and tell his friend he had been hit by a rock coming from my direction. They would approah my hiding spot. I would back circle around and through another rock at the other bandit. They would then move to where THAT rock had come from. I would then start to back up, taking good care that they couldn't see me. When they were around where I was before I would chuk another rock at them. They would advance and I would keep backing up. I would contiune this a few more times then back up and slip away to go back on my path to where I was going.

3. You are standing within the mighty human capital when you notice a small man standing behind a colourful stall. You approach the stall and notice that the man is selling a variety of general goods - he says that he is selling just about anything and that he has no set prices. He is willing to allow you to haggle and choose prices. What do you do? (Explain: your haggling, items of choice and the discussion that happens).

Answer: I would approach this man and ask if he had any iron swords or bows I could buy. He would say that depends, how much money are you willing to pay for them? I would say I'm not saying that untill I see them. He would then bring them out and show them to me. They looked in good condition, maybe worth 100 minas for both of them. I would say I'll give you 75 for both of them. The man would then say how about 90? I would then offer 80 for both of them. The man would presist an say 85 minas for both of them. I would think about it for a moment and then say that sounds good. He would hand me the sword and bow and I would hand me the 85 minas. I would then say Goodbye and contiune on with my daily tasks.

[cruzazul 2815]

 

Though you have done great and edited your app well you have to wait the full 24 hours from when I denied your first app. You did not wait the appropriate amount of time.

 

This being your fifth app this month wait until May 1st and you can apply again. Take that time to touch up your app and edit some things. If you have any questions don't be afraid to shoot me a PM.

[cruzazul 2815]

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