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Full Name: Rhylin Kennyir

Current Age: 24

Sub-race (if any): Wood Elf

Past / History (include childhood, major-events, etc. 2+ paragraphs long): When Rhylin was born, his father, Fileth was in the Sentinels, and his mother, Edlyir owned a local inn. Rhylin's childhood consisted of frequent visits from his father, helping his mother run the inn, and exploring the vast woods surrounding his home. Rhylin spent many days in the woods alone, thinking. He would study plants, animals and all of nature. Before long, Rhylin could name any plant, tree, or animal he saw. As Rhylin grew up and began to mature, he gained alot of respect from the people in his little village. They knew Rhylin, trusted him, and looked out for him. The villagers, especially the elders, saw Rhylin as a witty, bright, and young elf, bound to accomplish great feats.

 

Rhylin's (18) life changed when news of his fathers death reached the village. The story goes that Fileth, Rhylin's father, was escorting a member of the royal family when a group of thugs, whose races and motives are unknown, attacked the carriage. After some fighting, 4 Sentinals and 6 thugs remained. As the thugs moved in on the carriage, Fileth quickly spurred the horses, telling his comrades to jump on and sent the carriage down the road as he jumped in front of the 6 thugs, giving the Sentinels the royal elf time to escape. Rhylin became increasingly anti-social and sad after this. If it wasn't for his friends, family, and other villagers, who helped him get back up, he would have remained a wreck forever. Rhylin got over his fathers death, and began training with a bow. He soon became very skilled and picked up hunting as a result. Rhylin grew bored of village life and left to make a name for himself, outside his tiny village in the corner of Malinor.

 

Ambitions for the Future: Rhylin wants to track down his fathers killers and most importantly make a name for himself in Malinor.

Personality: Rhylin is shy around those he doesn't know, but opens up once you get to know him. He has a laid back sense of humor and is very witty in speech. He is also a very hard worker, loyal, and courageous.

Skills: Speech: He is very smart and can manipulate a conversation easily.(from experience in the inn)

Appearance (this must include an in-game screenshot of your skin): Rhylin is good-looking. He is not overly buff but still is toned, strong, and fast. http://clvf.imgur.com/all/

Any other details you wish to share about your character: Not much...

 

Open-Response-Questions

Each question in this section must be answered with a minimum of one paragraph which must describe the event in full. Please be as descriptive as possible and do not break character or lore at any point.

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1. As you walk through the deep forests you hear the sound of whispering and snickering. Upon inspection you realize that a group of High Elves are mocking a small Wood Elf child. How do you react?

 

Answer: I walk up to the High Elves and look at each of them in the eyes with a look of disapproval  I turn around, put my hand on the child's shoulder, kneel down, and ask the boy where his parents are.

I proceed to ignore any thing the High Elves say, and walk the child back to his/her home, not saying a word the High Elves.

 

2. Whilst wandering through the Elven forests you come across a frail old man with a walking stick. He collapses in front of you, falling to the ground with a sharp thud. Out of his pocket falls a small pouch of gold coins, which hits the ground and splits open spreading coins across the pathway. The man lies there, defenseless - what do you do?

 

Answer: I rush over to the man and shake him, trying to get a response. I yell as loud as I can for help, hoping someone will come. When no one arrives at the scene, I begin to search for an herb in the ground. When I find it, I rip it up in my hands and hold it next to the old man's nose, trying to wake him with the scent.

 

3. Whilst traversing the Elven Woodlands, you come across a small clearing in which a colored carriage sits. A trader stands outside of it and calls you over, telling you of his wares. He points out that his carriage sells just about everything, and that he's willing for you to haggle for a price. What does your character do? (Please include:- item, haggling for prices and the discussion involved).

 

Answer: *I walk up to the carriage swiftly

Trader: "Hello, sir!"

Rhylin: *very quietly says "Hello."

T: "Can I interest you in anything here?"

R: *nods* " I'm in need of some arrows... have any?"

T: *nods with a smile* " Sure, finest in these parts" *pulls out some arrows and shows them to Rhylin*

R: *takes and arrow and pulls out his bow, he then looks at the Trader as if wanting to test the arrow*

T: *the trader motions to proceed, smiling.*

R: *Rhylin fires the arrow, aiming for a small hole in a nearby tree, the arrow misses the hole by a foot*

R: "These arrows don't fly straight, these are really the best you have?"

T: *the trader blushes* "Well.... I....."

R: " If these are the best you have then, I best be going" *Rhylin begins to walk away, purposefully making his gold ching in his pocket*

T: "Wait!"

R: *Turns around*

T: "I... I have some better arrows, I was hoping to sell you those for the same price as the better ones" "Please buy some, I really need the gold, anything will do!"

R: *smiles* "Well in that case I'll take 30 of you best arrows."

T: *pulls out finely crafted arrows* "Here"

R: *pays trader and walks away.

 

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