[Denied]Nahtemom Application

[nahtemom 0]

Minecraft Account Name:nahtemom
How old are you?:15


Time-Zone:midwest
Have you read, understood and agreed to the rules?:yes


What previous experience have you had in role-playing?:I have played on other role play servers.


How did you hear about the the Lord of the Craft?:m\

My friend told me it was awesome.


Link any applications that you have previously made for the server:http://www.lordofthecraft.net/forum/index.php?/topic/85865-application-from-nahtemom/


Have you posted this application on the Minecraft Forum? If not, then please do so (link above):
Have you read the Human lore, and shall you ensure you make use of it and follow it in your biography?:yes



Definitions
In your own words define the following terms. Do not take any definitions from elsewhere!:



Role-playing:Imagining yourself as another character and living out their life. Dungeons and dragons is roleplay 


Meta-gaming:An action used by a character that is from an external source.


Power-emoting:Acting in a way that doesn’t allow any retaliation.




In-Character Information:
Complete the following biography on your character:

Full Name:sir Maximus werping
Current Age:92
Sub-race (if any)
Past / History (include childhood, major-events, etc. 2+ paragraphs long):
    When I was a child, my house was broken into by the men in the emperors clothes, to this day do not know if they really were, but they burned my house down and took all of our valuables. My whole family went from being upper middle class living off my father's merchant salary to poor, homeless, migrant workers. We pinched our pennies to be able to save up for a small apartment inside the kingdom.
    This hard life forced me and my brothers to band together and become tough brutal men.Wandering alone in the wilderness, we met a man that asked us for food. We being kindhearted people obliged., in exchange he traveled with us and taught us the art of the sword and bow.
    Through the pain and suffering me and my brothers took up the sword and the bow and forged a path for my mother and father. We vowed to each-other that we would avenge the wrongs that had been done to our families and one day we would build a great kingdom.

Ambitions for the Future:
I have a dream to co-rule a kingdom with my 3 brothers joel,medir and loking.
Personality:Patient, ambitious, intelligent, and coldly calculating. 
Skills:extremely smart and an amazing strategic/defensive designer. Good with a bow and arrow. Good sword fighter
Appearance (this must include an in-game screenshot of your skin): 
Any other details you wish to share about your character:

Open-Response-Questions
Each question in this section must be answered with a minimum of one paragraph which must describe the event in full. Please be as descriptive as possible and do not break character or lore at any point.
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1. Whilst in the mighty human capital you notice a dark-clothed figure stealthily making his way towards the Emperor’s palace - he is clearly up to no good. There are guards within shouting distance - what do you do?



Answer:I ask the man what he is doing, if he is an assassin my deep rooted hate for the emperor tempts me to strike a deal with the man in black and see how mutually beneficial it could be for both of us. If he is good I say”Do you want to come be my follower?” When he obliges he becomes my personal assassin. He is extremely obedient and kills whomever I want.

 

2. Whilst wandering in the deep oak forest you come across a large clearing, in which sits a small cobbled cottage. Outside it stands an unstable old man armed with a small iron blade, surrounded by two heavily armed bandits - they appear to be threatening him. You are armed with leather armor and an iron longsword, how do you react?



Answer:I give the bandits a chance to explain, if they are up to no good I attack them. After saving the man, I turn to the man and I ask him why the bandits attacked him. He will be extremely grateful to me, and I make him one of my followers. He is a wizard and he comes to work for me. He becomes my right hand man and helps me build my kingdom.




 

3. You are standing within the mighty human capital when you notice a small man standing behind a colorful stall. You approach the stall and notice that the man is selling a variety of general goods - he says that he is selling just about anything and that he has no set prices. He is willing to allow you to haggle and choose prices. What do you do? (Explain: your haggling, items of choice and the discussion that happens).



Answer: I approach the stalls to see what he has for sale. On inspection the bows were made with cheap material and all of the rings are lead with paint on them. I confront the man about this and he pays me and lets me take everything I want from the stalls.

[Lita 677]

 Need to post your application on the Minecraft Forums before you can be accepted.

 

Expand on all three definitions or add examples. More information can be found on the forums and wiki.

 

'werping' doesn't really sound like a Human name. Humans should have surnames.

 

The current Human Emperor doesn't go around burning down houses. Your character could suspect it was him but not know definitively. Please add server lore such as racial characteristics, places or dates, which can be found on the forums and wiki.

 

Include in the bio how he learned his skills.

 

Need to provide details about appearance and a skin screenshot. See THIS GUIDE for more information.

 

Expand on all Open Response Questions and add dialogue.

This application is identical to the last.

Make these changes, wait 24 hours before reapplying, and PM me if you have any questions.

[Lita 677]

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