[Denied]Ulthric Vandermann (Human)

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Out-Of-Character Information

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Minecraft Account Name:awsomeman212

How old are you?:16

Time-Zone:EST

Have you read, understood and agreed to the rules?:Yes I have

What previous experience have you had in role-playing?:5-6 years with my cousin

How did you hear about the the Lord of the Craft?:My Cousin, Warlord212

Link any applications that you have previously made for the server: http://www.lordofthecraft.net/forum/index.php?/topic/85031-human-gregory-lex/

Have you posted this application on the Minecraft Forum? If not, then please do so (link above):Yes, but My cousin, Warlord212, will post it for me.

Have you read the Human lore, and shall you ensure you make use of it and follow it in your biography?:Yes

 

Definitions

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Role-playing:Where you play a role of a character, and act him/her out however you wish, within the bounds of the laws.

Meta-gaming:Using information you know, but your character does not know.

Power-emoting: Forcing your character's actions without letting others respond or have a chance of doing anything.

 

In-Character Information:

Complete the following biography on your character:

 

Full Name:Ulthric Vandermann

Current Age:17

Sub-race (if any):Northerner

Past / History (include childhood, major-events, etc. 2+ paragraphs long):

When I was born I didn't Cry, I was silent. My Mother was in shock from giving Birth. But at that moment an Alchemist was in town. The Alchemist Heard of my parents strife, and came to see if he could help. When seeing the little baby me, he said to my father "This is a very bad thing that has happened here. Although I do have the cure, it might hurt the baby." 

My Father responded "Anything that can save my son please do so." The Alchemist took out an odd bottle of liquid. The bottle held a golden drink, but smelled of death itself. Dad held my mouth open and 3 drops of the liquid entered my mouth. My eyes opened and I cried. My dad wanted to pay the Alchemist, but the man said he wanted no money, 

but warned my father that the drink may cause some form of mutation in my growth. My father soon would know what he ment.

 

On my 2 birthday my hair started to grow in, and my eyes started to change. The change in my eyes made them a very dark yellow, and my hair came out as white. My father remember what the achemist said. The other families in the town thought it was a curse. A rose was in town and he heard about it, thinking it was a curse from Iblees he tried to kill me. My father fought the rose, hacking and slashing, until the rose fell dead. My dad knew he would be wanted. So my parents moved to a small cabin out in the forest. 

 

On are way there, my dad spotted a young boy lost in the woods. 

That young boy was taken in by my father and he was named Elroy. I didn't like him at first, but when we turned five we became best friends.

When we turned seven our father taught us the sword, and the bow. I trained in the shortsword and crossbow. I was ok at it, and always practiced. Soon my father had to leave for war, we never saw him again. Then Elroy Left the home in search of a job. And then I left that little house on the hill, in search for a job, and my brother.

 

Ambitions for the Future:Ulthric wants to get a job, and find his brother. Deep down in side he also wants to find the alchemist. 

Personality: Ulthric is very silent and shy. He talks very polite, and speaks in a very fancy way.

Skills: Ulthric is trained in the shortsword and crossbow. He knows some survival skills, and is a good hunter.

Appearance (this must include an in-game screenshot of your skin): Ulthric is tall standing aroun 6 feet. He has white hair and dark yellow eyes. His skin is on the pale side, and he is dressed in common clothes.

Skin:http://i.imgur.com/jcTUUNS.png

 

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Open-Response-Questions

Each question in this section must be answered with a minimum of one paragraph which must describe the event in full. Please be as descriptive as possible and do not break character or lore at any point.

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1. Whilst in the mighty human capital you notice a dark-clothed figure stealthily making his way towards the Emperor’s palace - he is clearly up to no good. There are guards within shouting distance - what do you do?

 

Answer:

The Capital's High towers, and endless streets stretched on as I made my way around. I heard rumors my brother was here and I need to find him. I saw a man who looked like him and I ended up near the palace. It's grand walls stretched up and I could see many guards up on the walls. Two guards were near the front, but out of the corner of my eye I saw something. 

A man about 5 foot 7 inches, and was cloaked in black cloaks. I couldn't make out his face, but he had a nasty scar under his mouth. He had several knives on his belt, and a bag of I guess minas. He looked nasty and the guards were too care free to take note of the man. 

I walked over to one of the guards, and he looked at me and said "What ye want, ye bugger?"

I looked at him then pointed to that cloaked guy, and said "AIn't wearing a cloak in the city against the law" The Guard nodded and went to go tell the guy to take his hood off. I walked away, nut in the distance I heard Yelling and fighting. Good thing I got out of there.

 

 

2. Whilst wandering in the deep oak forest you come across a large clearing, in which sits a small cobbled cottage. Outside it stands an unstable old man armed with a small iron blade, surrounded by two heavily armed bandits - they appear to be threatening him. You are armed with leather armour and an iron longsword, how do you react?

 

Answer:

I was hunting some undead for some money when I came to a forest Clearing. I was silent and looked around, but I saw something very odd. There were two bandits trying to harm a old man. The bandits were in Iron armor, but it looked old and worn out, and they both had short swords. I was armed in some new leather armor and had my iron longsword out. I wished I bought the steel long sword. I wanted to ignore it, but deep down inside I knew I had to help. 

The old man not looking like a fighter, was doing very well, the bandits were terrible swordsmen and slow. The old man blocked and countered over and over again, but he was getting tired. I snuck around and started to get behind one of the bandits. The two didn't notice me, but the old man did. He quickly started playing it more defensive. Holding them off until I got behind one. 

When I was behind the bandit I looked for a weak spot in the armor, and I saw that the back of the neck was not shielded. I took the chance and drove my sword through the bandits neck. 

The other bandit screamed "NO!" and charged me, but the old man slashed at his legs. His armor stopped the blade from doing any damaged, but he fell. A thump sound happened and I drove me sword through the same unshielded neck spot, killing the second bandit. The old man sheathed his sword and thanked me, then continued on his travels. I also continued on my hunt of the undead. 

 

 

3. You are standing within the mighty human capital when you notice a small man standing behind a colourful stall. You approach the stall and notice that the man is selling a variety of general goods - he says that he is selling just about anything and that he has no set prices. He is willing to allow you to haggle and choose prices. What do you do? (Explain: your haggling, items of choice and the discussion that happens).

 

Answer:

The busy streets were filled with people rushing every where. I almost got trampled twice. My sword broke, and I needed a new one, so I went to the Market place, and saw many good swords, but most of them were over priced. I eneded up infront of a little stall ran by a dwarf, and a sign said "Prices are negotiable!" I thought why not buy rom this dwarf. I looked at the dwarf and he looked small and a bit too fat. He had a faint smell of Bear and he had very large eye Brows Prbably a strongbrow. 

He looked at me and said in a deep voice "Wuut ye want 'uman?" He started to tap his fingers, looking very anxious.

I replied "A shortsword. And also a few crossbow bolts." He looked at me for a moment and then went into a chest and grabed 20 crossbow bolts, and then went over to a sword wrack and took a shortsword. The sword looked well made, and the hilt looked good. The blade itself was made of dwarven Steel. The bolts were made of Iron wood and Dwarven steel tips. The feathers on them looked like they were from some form of hawk. 

"This sword is freshly made from the forge. The bolts are also fresh and very nice." The dwarf seemed a bit distant, but proud tone came from his mouth. I thought what I should ask for them. Thity minas for the bolts, and 80 minas for the sword. 

"I'll pay one hundred and five minas for them." I stated, trying to get him to say a higher price then Haggle.

The dwarf looked at me and said "You think these are that bad! one hundred 'an twenty minas."

My plan was working, "I will pay no more then one hundred and seven minas for them."

The Dwarf let out a low growl and said "'undred and fifteen."

I started to smile and stated "Hundred and ten take it or leave it."

The Dwarf stared at me, and put out his hand "Yu 'ave a deal" We shaked hands, I put a bag of 110 minas on the counter took the bolts and the sword, and started walkin in the direction of the palace.

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Edited April 17, 2013 by Queen of Aegis
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