[Denied]Chris22228's Application (Dwarf) [4]

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Minecraft Account Name:chris22228

How old are you?: 14

Time-Zone: eastern time USA

Have you read, understood and agreed to the rules?: Yes

What previous experience have you had in role-playing?: I have played on many diffrent roleplay servers.And have matured over the years with roleplaying i know right from wrong since i am a Boyscout. I have been on a various array of servers and once finding this one i got really exicted.

How did you hear about the the Lord of the Craft?: I searched up minecraft roleplay servers and found you guys. =P

Link any applications that you have previously made for the server: They sadley got deleted. =(

Have you posted this application on the Minecraft Forum? If not, then please do so (link above): Yes

Have you read the Dwarven lore, and shall you ensure you make use of it and follow it in your biography?: Yes

 

Definitions

In your own words define the following terms. Do not take any definitions from elsewhere!:

 

Role-playing: It's like stepping into another dimension. You become a whole new person that you have created with your mind and creatividy.

Meta-gaming: When you use out of charachter information in charachter. For example "John walks up to a random person while in charachter and calls them by there ign.And your charachter has NO way of knowing that.

Power-emoting: When you force an emote/action upon a player for your own benifets. For example: Jake swipes his wooden sword and takes out a whole entire army of battle ready orcs.

 

In-Character Information:

Complete the following biography on your character:

 

Full Name: Borin_Winterharp

 

Current Age: 43

 

Sub-race (if any): None

 

Clan (if any):  (going to join Edgehand clan)

 

Apperence http://imgur.com/PLwcwFG

History: Borin was born in a small home deep into the dwarf lands. His dad was a miner and his mother died at his birth. He wasnt very educated but learned from his father important things for survival. He useally spent his time down in the Mineshaft with him, they would mine toghther along with all the other dwarfs. Borin was a very curious child and very 

Interested In Engeeering, he enjoyed inventing new thing includeing a grib for his dad's pickaxe. His true passion though was the art of mining. He loved it so much just the satisfaction of mining the ore made him smile. he always wore

a protective helmat though because there were numerous cave-in's. 

 

 

 

  

 

     When Borin was 14 he wanted an adventure he wanted to live. But sadley he was stuck down in the mines. Of couse he enjoyed but he wondered "Is this all to my life?". Borin went to the local tavern in hope of finding a clan or war 

party he could join. He walked to the dwarven inn and While he was at the inn he saw a poster hanging on the wall it said "Join the Edgehand clan!" ((I will make a application for that clan when i get accepted. =P )) Borin took one glance at the Poster and then walked over to the bar tender and asked him "Do you know were the Edgehand clan is located at mister?" The bartender replied "Aye! Ye' got to talk to the clan father mate! His name is Raglin." Borin smiled he always wanted to join a clan he was muscular and well built, from a hard life of mining! He was very strong too and though he could be a great help to this clan.

Borin then thanked the man and turned on his heels towards his house/hovle. He waited until his Father came home and told him about what he wanted to do. His father asked him why he wanted to join a clan? Avilin wanted to join because he always wanted to be apart of an orginazation, such as a clan and not spend his whole entire life mining. His father realized what poit of view his son was coming was from and huggged him strongly. And whispered to him "You can join but you will always be my little boy" Borin smiled and packed some food for his trip. He waved goodbye to his dad and promised to visit him soon. Borin started his journey to a clan of brotherhood and companionship.

 

 

 

 

 

  

 

     Borin started walking towards Raglin's office which he found out by asking local townsfolk. Once he reached Raglins door he knocked softley on it and waited for a response. ((End of the History/bio/past. i willl resume my biography once/if this is accepted and i travel to Kal'Urguan.))

 

 

 

Ambitions for the Future: To join the clan "Edgehand".

Personality: Quick witted and always curious. He can be a bit stubburn sometimes but that's how dwarfs useally are.

Skills: Mining, handeling an axe. Strong from many years of mining

Appearance (this must include an in-game screenshot of your skin): (Will be at bottem of app for some reason it wont let me post it but i'll find out a way to)

Any other details you wish to share about your character:None

 

Open-Response-Questions

Each question in this section must be answered with a minimum of one paragraph which must describe the event in full. Please be as descriptive as possible and do not break character or lore at any point.

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1. Whilst mining deep in the undergrounds of Kalos you see a large deposit of diamond ore at the other side of the ravine you are on. There is a very thin rock bridge that looks precariously unstable, but it is the only way to access the deposit. What do you do?

 

Answer: I look at the Diamonds and fall into a lovely trance by their beutiy, but quickley shake my head and get back to the problem... How am i going to get across the bridge to the diamind? "I think to myself..Going across the bridge would be too dangerous and how would i get the diamonds back? I quickley get an idea "Hey.... Mabey i can get some help from the fellow miners?" I run towards some fellow dwarfs that are mining a strip of iron and tell them about the diamonds. They quickley get exicited like me but i tell them about the unstable bridge. One of the dwarfs suggested that we all grab each others feet and make a human bridge but the idea would end up in most likely getting us all killed. Then i spot a wooden bean lying on the stone. I quickley grab it and run towards the diamond placeing it down on on the cavern. We all then run towards the diamonds and start mining!

 

2. You are sitting in the local tavern with a large pint of ale in your hand - sitting nearby you is a rather young dwarf whom is clearly going through a bad time. He is crying to himself, and clutching a small wooden hammer toy. In the other corner of the room two shady dwarves are sitting whispering to each other and pointing occasionally at the dwarf. They stand up, one with a small dagger in his hand and begin to approach the young dwarf. What do you do?

 

Answer: I quickley walk up to the man and ask him what he's doing. He trys to shove me but i expected it and was in a stance that would push the weight on my backfoot therefor causeing me not to fall over. From years of mining i have big mucles and quickley deliver a side punch to the ribs which must have been a luckey punch because it hurt him preety bad. I tun to the other man and he quickley punches be in the jaw. I fall backwards into a chair, Luckley some of the other men in the tavern realize what was happening and come to my help. They quickley grab the two men and bring them out side for a beatdown then hand them to the guard force.

 

3. Whilst wandering through the Dwarven Caverns you hear a voice call out to you; “Oi, ye’! C’mere n’ get ye’rself an ale!”. You spin on your heel and see a heavily bearded bar-owner looking at you - a huge grin on his face, and a mug of ale in his hand. How do you react?

 

Answer: I smile at the man and gladley buy a mug of ale. We walk back to the tavern and get into a detailed conversation about the Dwarven goverment and who should be who. I quickley become drunk and fall on th floor sleeping with a smile on my face.

[Princeton 396]

 

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Your definitions were a major improvement, good work.

 

Your biography still lacks major LOTC lore. You mention the Edgehand clan which is good, but you still need to add major places and events that shaped your character.

 

Your ORQ's were also improved, but they also lacked major dialogue and detailed actions. Improve upon these things.

 

You may reapply in 24 hours. Feel free to PM me with any questions or concerns. Good Luck!

[Princeton 396]

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