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Out-Of-Character Information
Please fill out the following questions as accurately as possible, and ensure the essential details are accurate.
 
Minecraft Account Name: lobster1810
How old are you?: 16
Time-Zone:GMT London
Have you read, understood and agreed to the rules?: Yes, I have.
What previous experience have you had in role-playing?: I have played such games, Oblivion, Skyrim and Dragon Quest.
How did you hear about the the Lord of the Craft?: From a very eager friend (GoogleSearch)
Link any applications that you have previously made for the server: http://www.lordofthecraft.net/forum/index.php?/topic/88077-human-lobster1810/ 
Have you posted this application on the Minecraft Forum? If not, then please do so (link above):
Have you read the Human lore, and shall you ensure you make use of it and follow it in your biography?: Yes
 
Definitions
In your own words define the following terms. Do not take any definitions from elsewhere!:
 
Role-playing: When you create an alternate character from your imagination to play in a fantasy world for example World Of Warcraft etc.
Meta-gaming: Gaining any information out of character to benefit or give yourself an advantage over other players.
Power-emoting: Doing two or more emots in one go and or doing and emot that doesn't allow the other party. For example 'Stanley pushed......... back' , 'Stanley made the guy fly back and die'.
 
In-Character Information:
Complete the following biography on your character:
 
Full Name: Stanley Ander
Current Age: 18
Sub-race (if any): Regular Human
Past / History (include childhood, major-events, etc. 2+ paragraphs long):
Stanley was born in middle class, he was brought up by his mother, father and his brother Sonn. His parents who remain unnamed for Stanley's sake, brought up him and his brother up differently. Sonn the first child, was confident and bold, he was the favourite son of the two. Stanley was neglected by his parents but for some reason he never raged at Sonn. They had a very good brother to brother relationship, obviously the occasional fight but nothing that would upset them. 
 
Stanley attended a school at Kingston when he was very young. He decided to keep low under all of the other kids. Everyday Stanley would come home, after a long day at school, training. He would come home and his parents would be waiting with a cane and a leather belt. Slashes across Stanley's face repetitive times, scaring his face and bruises the sizes of golf balls. One day after school Stanley decided to run away. This day his father was out at the sawmill and his mother was in town looking for a new dress. Stanley grabbed his brothers bandanna and goggles to hide his face. Then left with no note or a sign that he had gone just his school satchel was left. To this day Stanley adventures forth looking for new ways to live his life.  
Ambitions for the Future: To find his brother and adventure the world he has before him. 
Personality: A kind young man with an ambitious mind who is courageous and dedicated.
Skills: His skills consist of fixing things such as ships and sinks...... Also archery was one of his favourite things to do with his Uncle.
Any other details you wish to share about your character: He is related to the character Sonn who is currently in game.
 
Open-Response-Questions
Each question in this section must be answered with a minimum of one paragraph which must describe the event in full. Please be as descriptive as possible and do not break character or lore at any point.
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1. Whilst in the mighty human capital you notice a dark-clothed figure stealthily making his way towards the Emperor’s palace - he is clearly up to no good. There are guards within shouting distance - what do you do?
 
Answer: I would notice the guy in the funny looking outfit point it out to fellow people next to me and see what they think about him. Then I would sneakily run over to the guards, without bringing over too much attention to myself. I would say quietly 'me and the other pedestrians thought that the guy over there looked very shifty and should definately ask him some questions'.Then let them handle it. But I would advise them to stop him very slowly and sneakily so that he didn't retaliate. Also if he was dark clothed he would probably be trained in some sort of way. So slow movement is the key. After that I would go away and tell other guards just incase the guy was trained in some sort of martial art. As I wouldn't want to get myself involved with it too.
 
 
2. Whilst wandering in the deep oak forest you come across a large clearing, in which sits a small cobbled cottage. Outside it stands an unstable old man armed with a small iron blade, surrounded by two heavily armed bandits - they appear to be threatening him. You are armed with leather armour and an iron longsword, how do you react?
 
Answer: I would climb up into a tree that was just high enough I could get a good arch on the stone plus I would be at a good height to jump down and not hurt myself. I would then throw a rock so that it landed behind the two bandits but make sure that it didn't hit them at all. They would then become distract and turn around as they turn around I would stealthily jump of the tree and run in and grab the old man and run for my life. As they would be chasing me I would duck and dive under branches and vines so they would lose sight of me. When I knew they had stopped chasing me I would leave the old man and tell him to go to the nearest town to tell the guards straight away.
 
3. You are standing within the mighty human capital when you notice a small man standing behind a colourful stall. You approach the stall and notice that the man is selling a variety of general goods - he says that he is selling just about anything and that he has no set prices. He is willing to allow you to haggle and choose prices. What do you do? (Explain: your haggling, items of choice and the discussion that happens).
 
Answer: I would haggle a very low price for an upgrade on my sword, 25 minas would be the first amount I would offer the old man and he would come back with 40 minas. So I would crack a very funny joke or a pun and he would laugh and say 'I will give you this sword and this pigs head for 35 as I like your witty nus'. I would tell him that he is a very generous man but I only have 30 in my pocket. I beg for a little while and after 10 mins. I say that I will clean his horse and pat him on the back and I can have the sword for 25 minas. The little old man cheekily smiles and says 'you got yourself a deal'. 
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Maybe expand a bit on all your definitions?

 

Your Biography was good however try to make sure you are using server lore, this will make your application a lot better and will also give you a quick learning adventure about Lord Of The Craft. Also go into detail about your character and maybe talk about a key event in his life or talk about his strengths and weaknesses  The more detail about your characters life the better as it will tell us, The Application Team that you understand your characters role on Lord Of The Craft. Server Lore can be: Language, Place names, Characters, events, etc..
 
Your Character Questions are too short, please answer these with a paragraph long answer. This will re-assure us that you understand your character well enough to role play with it.
 
Your Open Response Question need to display the role play method in them to achieve an accepted application. You need to set it out like this:
 
Edward looks around the Inn and notices a man tucked away in the corner. The man is wearing dark robes with a hood resting over his head. He walks across the room towards the man before calling over "Oi You! Come over here!" The man looks up towards Edward and gasps before attempting to get up and flee.
 
You should set out your role play that and then we will know that you can control role play with your character and also know if you have the role-playing skills to obtain a place on our server. If you can do this method with every single Open Response Questions they will be at a closer to acceptable applications standard. However do not forget to include details about your character and too make sure you stay as your character throughout the role play. Include his/her(s) strengths or weaknesses to make your role playing effective.
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