[Denied]Turban_Lion Human Application

[Turban 3]

Out-Of-Character Information

Please fill out

the following questions as accurately as possible, and ensure the essential

details are accurate.

 

Minecraft Account

Name:Turban_Lion

How old are you?:

14

Time-Zone:Australian

Eastern Stand Time.

Have you read,

understood and agreed to the rules?:Yes.

What previous

experience have you had in role-playing?:I haven’t had any experience but have

done well in English story writing.

How did you hear

about the the Lord of the Craft?:A friend of mine told me about Lord of the

Craft and how he enjoyed it so much.

Link any

applications that you have previously made for the server:N/A

Have you posted

this application on the Minecraft Forum? If not, then please do so (link

above):

Have you read the

Human lore, and shall you ensure you make use of it and follow it in your

biography?:Yes.

 

Definitions

In your own

words define the following terms. Do not take any definitions from

elsewhere!:

 

Role-playing:The

act of pretending to be other being through speaking and emoting.

Meta-gaming:Using

anothers Characters information without meeting this person in Role-Play life,

eg. Knowing someone’s name before you meet them.

Power-emoting:

Emoting an action that is not giving the other Role-Player a chance to react or

do their own Emote, eg. Sadan Crewe stabs the man through the chest, This shows

that Sadan has stabbed this other Character without giving him a chance.

 

In-Character

Information:

Complete the

following biography on your character:

 

Full Name:Ser John

Malikway of Salvus.

Current Age:34

Sub-race (if any):Elf.

Past / History (include childhood,

major-events,

etc. 2+ paragraphs long):John Malikway was born in the outskirts of Abresi. He

lived with his mother; his father was killed in a horrific Drake attack. John

Malikway was born poor but by the time he was 30 he was a rich man. At the age

of 25 he was enrolled in the Blackmonts as a Squire and Became ‘Ser’ John

Malikway on his 32 Birthday. At the age of 33 his mother was murdered by a hooded

man that came from the outskirts with a rapier stabbing her through the chest,

that night John Malikway went out for revenge…

Ambitions for the Future:John’s ambitions for the future is to find the murderer

and kill him the same way he killed his mother.

Personality: John is a medium built

man around 6’5 and is quite jolly once you get to know him well. He is quite

violent and loves a fight, dislikes cocky children but is fine with women.

Skills: Wields a rapier

and a long-bow that was made himself. John has good combat skills and is quite

a fast runner, he also has good knife throwing accuracy.

Appearance (this must include an in-game screenshot of your skin): Short hair brown eyes small mullet 6’5 tanned skin

tone.

Wears

black gloves.

 

Any other details you wish to share about your character:No.

 

Open-Response-Questions

 

Each question in

this section must be answered with a minimum of one paragraph which must

describe the event in

full. Please

be as descriptive as

possible and do

not break

character or lore at any point.

____

 

1. Whilst in the mighty human capital you notice a dark-clothed figure stealthily making his way towards

the Emperor’s

palace - he is

clearly up to no good. There are guards within

shouting distance - what do you do?

 

Answer: As a Man of Blackmont John Malikway

makes his way over to the Entrance behind the Figure making a small gesture to

the guards. John mouths some words to the Guards, “Watch this man,” – The

Guards would hopefully come over and help if not, John would ask the man what

he is doing if he doesn’t answer John would stand in the way, if he attacks so

would John.

 

 

2. Whilst

wandering in the deep oak forest you come

across a large clearing, in which sits a small cobbled cottage. Outside it

stands an unstable old man armed with a

small iron blade, surrounded by two heavily armed bandits - they appear to be threatening him. You are armed

with leather armour and

an iron longsword, how do you react?

 

Answer: John would stand behind a tree or out

of view watching on before he would make an attack or say something. If one of

the bandits attacked the man John would step in, but if they just wanted an

item and John had it he would give it and leave the man unharmed.

 

 

3. You are

standing within the mighty human capital when

you notice a small man standing behind a colourful stall. You approach the stall and notice that the man is

selling a variety of general goods - he says

that he is selling just about anything and that he has no

set prices.

He is

willing to allow you to haggle and choose

prices. What

do you do? (Explain: your

haggling, items of choice and the discussion that happens).

 

Answer: John makes his way over to the stall

as the man greets warmly,

“Good day Sir, What

would you like?”

John clears his

throat, “Morning, I be looking for some Iron,” I say smirking a little.

“Ahh, well I

believe I have some Iron around here somewhere,” the man says as he rummages

through various goods.

He stands up

giving me a small smile, “I don’t have any, sorry, Can I get you something

else?” He says with a worried face.

“That’s quite

alright, I’ll just grab a sack of Potatoes,” I say chuckling a little.

He smiles, ”Here

you are lets say 10 minas for the lot, I didn’t have your Iron so 10 minas

should be a good price.”

I shake my head,

”Rightio, but have this other 10 for being a great man.

The man smiles,

“Thank-you Sir, Have a good Day,”

“Aye I will,” I

say nodding.

 

 

 

 

[Ford 1996]

 

-You must include a screenshot or link to the Minecraft skin you'll be using while role-playing.

 

-Your character's biography is way too short. Add another 10 sentences, or just add another paragraph. I've learnt absolutely nothing about John's personality or if he had any childhood friends.  I wouldn't say your application was rushed, but you definitely need to add more detail to John's past. Be sure to speak to the leaders of the house before joining and before you get on, and I will probably speak with them to confirm whether or not they actually want someone instantly joining the server and being in their house. Just a little tip as well: It's better to begin as a peasant or worker rather than becoming a knight as soon as you join. There's much better role-playing experiences when you begin with nothing and rise up to have everything almost all the time. 

 

-Your first and second ORQ are too short and need to be expanded. Add detailed actions and explanations in a third-person perspective of how the battle between John and the bandits. Remember, each ORQ must be at least 5-7 sentences to be acceptable.

 

You may re-apply after 24 hours. Please send me a PM if you have any questions.

[Ford 1996]

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